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Posted: 11 years ago
Everything seems positive now but am keeping my fingers crossed. This update was awesome but am waiting for what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice and long chapter Sandhya. It was painful to know what all happened in the past. Khushi's parents told her the entire truth. Garima's sorrow and the way Shashi has supported her all along is really great. They made it clear that Khushi is the most important in their lives. I am glad that there is no bitterness amongst Khushi and her parents now.

On the other hand, Arnav has endured so much. A small boy to witness such tragedy and listen to harsh words of his father and realize that his mother is not his real mother and still keep everything buried within to keep his family together and not betray his mother's love... should be really applauded. I am happy that Nani told him everything and about Garima too. At least Arnav knows Garima did not want to abandon him. She had no choice.

After all the harsh truth, the last part when Nani holds all her children together felt really soothing. Amazing chapter Sandhya. I am waiting for the time when Arnav meets Garima and looking forward to the next chapter.

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the update. superb

Arhi understanding each other and when Khushi promised herself that soon someday she will be with Arnav thats really sweet.
If Khushi is able to understand n respect more is all thanks to Arnav, although he is going through the same pain.
Glad that Shashi n Garima tole her everything and Khushi realised relations is build on love n care but not just be blood.
The moment of nani with her 3 grandchildren is the best moment...
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Posted: 11 years ago

I understand Garima's want for having a clean slate for Khushi. Sometimes, the past doesn't matter. I want to quote Master Oogway here, but I figure all of you have seen Kung Fu Panda. 😊

Respect for Shashi Gupta. May his tribe increase.

Beautifull written, Sandhya!

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
the past does not matter now..what matters is the present
happy that khushi talked to her parents & arnav to his nani😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
very emotional specially Nani's part ... really hats of to your writing////////////////////////
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Posted: 11 years ago
Once again a beautiful chapter bringing out the past for the two souls.. what happened and why it happened and who is responsible for it all answers are given.. now feels that Arnav-Khushi both need to take their life ahead with the ones who love them and treasure them.. loved the moments Guptas and Raizadas shared as individual families.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part...
khushi and garima and shashi...
arnav and nani..

broke my heart seeing their pain...

waiting for the next one... ohh yeah... u ahve me tensed because of ur title... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its absolutely enthralling the way you describe emotions and situations in your work. As a reader I appreciate and salute your efforts and emotions.
You amaze me with every update.
Good luck! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
You've out done yourself with this chapter Sandhya 🤗
It was such an emotional read that before I knew it I felt my cheeks all wet ...
I had tears streaming down my face 😭
The reunion of Khushi with her parents was so heartwarming ...
the past holding none of the past unhappiness ... only a happy present and a happier future ...

Arnav too finding the love of his Nani as strong as it had ever been ...
making sure that he realized that all his past fears were baseless ...

What touched me the most were the last lines ...

"Unbeknownst to them, the sun had risen over the horizon dispelling the darkness.
The light streamed through the branches of the mango tree enticingly and enhanced
the glistening dew clinging to the grass. The silence was intermittently intonated with
nothing but chirping birds. It was peaceful. It felt sacred. Almost celestial. Almost..."

Thanks Sandhya ... will be back ...

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