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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update.. I thought it was Anya..
update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg what a twist ...poor kushi ...feel so bad for her...fantastic update...keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohh shit...it was arnav...???...u r really soo cruel...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thought it was Anya at first but then realized it had to be that Arnav was Garima's child

I knew that Khushi was adopted because Garima had a hysterectomy when she had her baby

damn now both Khushi and Arnav will think their lives have been lies

things are now getting better between Khushi and Arnav this just going to regress their relationship


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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice long chapter! One problem solves the other crops up!!!!anyway am glad Arshi are good! Thanks for the pm, looking fwd to more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
S,
For your Arnav and Khushi:

Hold on, to me as we go
As we roll down this unfamiliar road
And although this wave (wave) is stringing us along
Just know you're not alone
Cause I'm gonna make this place your home

Settle down, it'll all be clear
Don't pay no mind to the demons
They fill you with fear
The trouble it might drag you down
You've got lost, you'can always be found

Just know you're not alone
Cause I'm gonna make this place your home

-- Phillip Phillips (Home)
Edited by thumbi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an emotionally surcharged and draining chapter. Will these two battered souls ever see the end of the tunnel. Every time life gives them an opportunity to smile it is snatched away the very next moment. They are two extra-ordinary people constantly grappling with extra-ordinary situations.

With this update, you have permanently established a place for yourself in the league of the finest and most cherished IF writers.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Sandhya!
haven't been able to comment as I was on a month long vacation but I have been reading all the chapters religiously.
So finally the bomb drops on everyone. What a way to find out the truth! I can't imagine what it would do to Khushi and Arnav, their lives together as well as separately as individuals. The whole foundation has been taken apart. Why couldn't they just keep quiet for goodness sake? And how on earth are you ever gonna make the pain go away? I am so upset ... don't have any words.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Goodness!
My mind is unable to generate words to express what I'm feeling.
The way this chapter is written is really brilliant...the scene shifting between Garima- Devyani and Arnav-Khushi. That itself gave me this sense of foreboding. As if whatever was happening between Khushi and Arnav; Khushi finally accepting her feelings, willing to move forward, Arnav's happiness, it was all a dream too good to be true.
I knew Khushi would give in eventually but didn't see it happening at this moment. I am very glad she took one step forward...to decide to live in the present, to give Arnav and more importantly herself, a chance at happiness.
It's just sad that that had to last for just a fleeting moment. It's like how sometimes there's a moment during a dream u feel it's all real and the next instant you wake up.
When I read the previous two updates, I didn't even want to consider that Garima is Arnav's mother! 😕 I was hoping she was Anya's! 'Cause this really changes so much. Even if they're not biologically related...it's just too much to grasp and accept!
And the way both Arnav and Khushi had to find out about their parentage, was heartbreaking. It's like, as Khushi said, realising that your life is a lie. Earth-shattering.
Nothing can undo what has been done. I just hope all of them, especially Khushi and Arnav, find the courage and strength to cope with it and move ahead in life.
I'm just too blanked out to even guess what is going to happen next...how is Khushi going to react, what is Arnav thinking, how will this affect their relationship and so many other relationships!? too many complexities...just going to wait to read the next chapter.
P.S. You're an amazing writer! The story is so gripping even after 50 chapters...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last 2 updates:
Greeshma's story is sad :( she loved her father so much that she sacrificed her life... its sad that in the end she lost everything... her dad passed away even without living a day outside the hospital, she never got to enjoy her young life, she had to give up her baby... but she did and she had to be really strong to do that.
Maybe Ahalya could have saved her if she had given a thought about her husband's life... but she was in a distressed state thinking about her dying father... wish she could have thought about greeshma once... a beautiful life was shattered because of a demon... Arnav has every right to hate that b**tard...
Another emotional update... Garima-Nani face each other and this lady is strong... she lost everything yet made a family for herself... Shashi gave her everything she lost... he even used all his contacts to help Garima... I don't know what to say about him, he is a very loving, supporting and understanding husband... these 2 good people have given khushi all their good qualities to make her what she is... she should be really grateful to them...
Khushi is giving them a chance... really happy... while reading this my heart was pounding about the other conversation... who was the baby among the 3 kids... OMG its Arnav... all the while I was thinking it was Anya... and Khushi was adopted? wow you revealed so much in this update and didn't stop there...
Now Arnav and Khushi know about their existance even though they don't know the circumstances that lead to them... this was really shocking for both... so much pain to follow and so much explaining needs to be done and I'm not sure if they are ready yet to even talk to anyone... please give them strength
Edited by napk - 11 years ago

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