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sushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

What an amazing part I could not have think of this twist in the story and thanks to you that A&K are not related in any ways whole chapter was full of emotions can't wait for the next part

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mem1

@mem1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

That was amazing Sandhya. The last few chapters have been really really good. Sorry I haven't been commenting much lately. But I try to catch up with this story whenever I have a few minutes.

This was totally unexpected for me . I had thought Anya would be the baby...not Arnav..

in any case, this was a very well written, gripping chapter. will be waiting for the next update.

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

oh my goodness! that was just wow...what a night of revelations! what the heck is going to happen now! arnav and khushi...I can only imagine what they are going through! their whole life feeling like a lie!

wow...im in shock!

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deepthi laxmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

OMGGG!!! best climazxxx...feeling very sorry for arnav n khushi...they have just got together n BHAM...it happens... arrggghhh...

wrote it perfectly...waiting for the next update...so update reall soonnn

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Anu179

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Omg..Sandhya ...what a twist...not even in my wildest dream I thought baby in prologue would be Arnav...anyone but Arnav :((...gash, I'm stumped...i knew you wouldn't make them siblings , it's Indian story :P... We believe in happy endings :D...but I'm still in shock...this was full on drama...here you give us protagonists making up passionately...butterflies fluttering in my stomach, their kiss was so beautiful...reading further on with heart in my mouth., Nani n Garimas heated n intense argument..now heart pounding in anticipation...has Sandhya become too westernised..is she going to make them siblings...deep inside knew you won't..but never know what the writer inside churns out ;))... Then Arnav n Khushi get to know the truth...their reaction was so palpapable...I'm still not able to grasp my emotions...going to re read...what a night of revelation!!!

Hats off Sandhya...standing ovation gal!!

P.S. Very very intriguing character Ahalaya Mallik...what mould was she cast in??...what was her reason to accept her husband's child from another woman...and treat as her own ...and then go ahead n have another kid with such a promiscuous man, even if he is your husband...my curiosity is at peak regarding Ahalaya...eagerly awaiting your insight on this particular character...

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Amazing revelation and climax. So sorry for both khushi and arnav

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Okay Wow. Arnav. Arnav is Garima's son? I had a very small inkling, but again, like many of us, I was thinking Ana...but this chapter was surely one of revelations...and outbursts...though I await to see how Arnav is going to react to all of this. Especially, when he has finally gotten Khushi back, and then, this happens...You have had it all planned all along Sandhya and it has absolutely been a delight to catch up and read this entire story in one go...be it the initial attraction during there early 20's...there separations (that train sequence or even when Arnav decides to let go of Khushi for the betterment of herself was painful and heartbreaking)...their reunion...and the bickers, the relationship they share...they are meant to be, and that you have depicted beautifully throughout this entire story! Keep that up, surely!

I cannot wait to see read what Chapter 51 will bring us...surely a step forward and closer to more truths...

- Dee