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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: alicepuppy
loved the update..continue soon buddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wonderful! this new character is interesting. she's been introduced by malfoy so i'm not sure how much i trust her...

having the gang working together is so nice. hope they involve some order members soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Tom is fine and on his feet that is the best news for everyone.

Tom did come up with a very nice story.

Harry has taken a very big decision of including tom in the Army. Wonder how the rest of the members will take this news

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Aah! Yeah I Agree!!! 😊 That's Right, When I First Read The Story It Felt That Yes, Just Like The Book You've Showed Malfoy All Changed And A Real Good Wizard. But Seems The Opposite Now.

And About This Update. It Was Really Interesting. So Harry Lied About What Exactly Happened To Tom. Pretty Understandable. What Happens To Make Me Knock My Brain Hard Is, Who Had Told Malfoy About The Dark Lord's Child? And That Was He The Actual Person Behind All Of It? Or Is There Someone Else?

Eager To Read What Happens Next!? Update Soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

At 5 to midnight Tom got off the table. He wanted to go to the dungeons to rescue Peeves.

"Can I accompany you?" Estella asked.

"I thought you didn't like him?"

"I just wanted to warn him not to cross me again."

Tom and Estella walked out of the Great Hall and started climbing down the switching staircases. Both of them were walking side by side silently. Even though Estella couldn't stop speaking she felt awkward starting a conversation now when they were alone for the first time. Tom who would rather keep quiet broke the ice.

"So, where are you from?"

"Oh, I am from Beauxbatons. I graduated a year ago. Teaching has always been a passion for me and when I applied at Beauxbatons they didn't hire me, said I lacked experience. Can you believe that?"

She looked up at him expecting his approval.

"Of course not! If you can take on peeves all alone than you can do anything."

"Why's he so rude though?"

"Well, he just doesn't like it quiet. He wants as much chaos as possible, wants his presence felt. But with you I think he had better watch his ste-e-p." Tom was talking to her when he slipped on a step. Estella grabbed him to break his fall. The moment she touched him he felt goosebumps rising all over him. Surely, she must have felt the same because she let go a second later.

They reached down to the dungeons and found Peeves writing rude things about people on the wall of his cell. Tom unlocked the dungeon door and entered.

"Hey, wait." It was Estella. Tom turned to her.

"What?"

"How did you do that?"

"How did I do what?"

"You just walked past the protection I set up so he couldn't get out."

"Really? There's no protection here. Wait I'll come back and you'll see there's nothing here." Tom realized he had penetrated Estella's charms. He was so used to everyone knowing of his extraordinary powers at Hogwarts, he had never realized Estella was new and had not yet discovered about his powers. And for the first time, he wanted someone to know what he was capable of, he wanted to impress her.

"No, send Peeves. I can bet on it, he won't be able to come out."

Tom looked at Peeves who showed him his tongue explaining quite clearly that he was in no mood to do any favours to anyone.

"Please, man." Tom requested.

"No, no, peevesy won't do no good
to Miss Zzz who's no cool..."

"C'mon, cheerup. She's here to let you out, isn't she?"

Peeves, only for Tom, walked a step forward in great grace and found himself slammed against an invisible wall.

"Look! There is the protection here that I left. How did you just walk through that?"

"I guess, it doesn't work on humans." It was Harry. He had answered before Tom could show off. He gulped down whatever he had opened his mouth to say and stood quietly as Harry approached them.

He had followed them out of the Great Hall. Estella was too nosy, he was regretting hiring her. He walked up to Estella, waved his wand and the protection got off as Peeves fell on to the floor. Peeves levitated a few inches off the floor, took out his toungue in front of Estella with a large "booozzz" then whizzed off into the castle.

"Well, I believe we have no business hanging around." Harry said looking at Estella. "Have a Goodnight Miss Zavatti." Harry turned to Tom, "Would like to accompany me?"

"Sure." Tom walked off with Harry. He looked back at Estella from a little distance and found her doing the same smiling at him. He replied in kind and followed Harry.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: FleurDeJuillet
wonderful! this new character is interesting. she's been introduced by malfoy so i'm not sure how much i trust her...
having the gang working together is so nice. hope they involve some order members soon...

Thank you ! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Tom is fine and on his feet that is the best news for everyone.
Tom did come up with a very nice story.
Harry has taken a very big decision of including tom in the Army. Wonder how the rest of the members will take this news
Continue soon

Hmm, the Dumbledore's Army will be interesting 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: nilusoni
awesome

Thank you ! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: Protego_Maxima
Aah! Yeah I Agree!!! 😊 That's Right, When I First Read The Story It Felt That Yes, Just Like The Book You've Showed Malfoy All Changed And A Real Good Wizard. But Seems The Opposite Now.

And About This Update. It Was Really Interesting. So Harry Lied About What Exactly Happened To Tom. Pretty Understandable. What Happens To Make Me Knock My Brain Hard Is, Who Had Told Malfoy About The Dark Lord's Child? And That Was He The Actual Person Behind All Of It? Or Is There Someone Else?

Eager To Read What Happens Next!? Update Soon!

Take Care! 😃
And Also Stop Thanking Me. I Give Replies, Feedback, Because You Truly Deserve!! You Write Spectacularly...😃

Well, Harry and the gang guess that since Bellatrix was Malfoy's aunt and she was rather close to him, perhaps, she had told him but Malfoy's side of the story has yet to reveal itself 😛😊

I am very happy to know that what I write keeps you entertained 😃😃😃😃