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*These days, I am really fascinated by Army😳 so here's another OS on Taarey based on same. I hope you guys can bear this😆*

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fEU7kOs9Sfc[/YOUTUBE]

The cool and chilly breeze of Kashmir reached the insides of durgah. Captain Reyaansh Singhania on duty feels a sudden erection of hairs on his skin as he inhales the fresh smell of roses... soil... candles.. incense sticks but the most powerful being an unknown but gripping smell.

Madnooo

Mashukoo

Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo

Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun

Hai Dil Ko Teri Justju

Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun

His head turned to the dargah and his eyes automatically dilated. In the feeble light entering the dargah, lying on her knees was the straight descendent of angels. Her eyes closed, hands joined in prayer and veil covering her head. She was not visible clearly yet she looked immensely beautiful. His eyes halted on the scene inhaling the scent he knew belongs to whom. Its her. Her lips trembled as she murmured her prayers. The smoke of incense sticks blocks his view and he instantly stepped forward. She murmured the last words of her prayer and covered her face with her little palms as she rubbed them on her delicate white skin. Giving a warm gaze to the God in front, she stood up with a smile and came out. His world stops and heartbeat quickens. Oh My, Beautiful!

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah

Dono Jud Ke Juda

Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua

Dono Jud Ke Juda

She moved to her friends waiting for her and started wearing her sandals. Having a little difficulty in doing so, she struggled between her dupatta and her sandal. Absent mindedly, he moved towards her. Oblivious to his gaze, she was busy in her own trials..

Madnoo

Mashukoo

Dilbaro

Madnoo Re

She gasped as he took her toe in his hands and made her wear the sandals. The man in uniform. She backed immediately. Army officers are cruel. That's what she had heard. Fear quite evident on her face, she looked at him gulping down some saliva.

"Tanisha!!!" One of her friends call her and she snapped at them and then at him and without thinking further, she ran away.

Hai Dil Ko Teri Aarzoo

Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun

Hai Dil Ko Teri Justju

Par Mein Tujhe Na Pa Sakun

Sitting along with his battalion friends, Reyaansh was warming up his body through the fire. The street's corner filled with their voices when a group of girls passed them with their bicycles beside. His senses rose in alarm. He felt her scent and instantly looked in the direction. She was gazing at him too. Soft gaze. The cold wind was giving him hard time. He rubbed his hands on his arms to get some warmth. She moved forward absentmindedly while gazing at him. He didn't look cruel at all. His eyes followed her path as she disappeared in the fog. A smile crept on his lips.

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah

Dono Jud Ke Juda

Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua

Dono Jud Ke Juda

Madnoo

Mashukoo

Dilbaro

Madnoo Re

Next morning. The aura is quite the same. Reyaansh didn't felt the urge to join his friends. Sitting alone, he was waiting to see her again. And she came. Alone. She stepped closer and closer but didn't reach him. Stopping almost a feet away, she kept a blanket on the ground making sure, he see that and then went away giving a small smile. A hope erupts inside him and he grabbed the blanket immediately. With a huge sparkling smile, he saw her walking away with her bicycle. His eyes halted on her back hoping that she'll turn at least once. The fog grew and she moved through it. Just about to disappear, his hopes were about to die down when she halted and the entire direction of wind changes. She turned with a small smile. And yes, he smiled back. His entire body responded to her single smile as his heartbeat quickens, breathing deepens and goosebumps invaded him. She slowly disappeared in the thick fog of Kashmir.

Kai Khawaab Dil Tujhko Le Kar Sajaye

Per Khauf Yeh Bhi Kahin Per Sataye

Gar Yeh Bhi Tutee To Phir Hoga Kya Re

Mujhe Raas Aati Hai Khushiyan Kahan Re

As the night falls, sleep was quite far from the two. She stared at the ceiling while his face continuously haunts her. He is not cruel. He is beautiful..

Lying beneath a tree, he was a little far from his camp. Sleep was not bothering him today. The blanket wrapped around his body and he felt an immense pleasure in staring at star studded black sky. She was like those stars. Vibrant and beautiful..

Kyun Dil Ko Dukhana Bewajah Madno Re

Kyun Dil Ko Dukhana Bewajah

Phir Aansu Bahana Ek Dafa

Phir Aansu Bahana Ek Dafa

The next cold morning had Reyaansh having a inspection at the market. With his subordinates, he was looking over the street filled with traditional shops. His stern military look suddenly soften as his eyes stopped on a particular shop. Standing in her salwar kameez, she was selecting bangles for herself while trying out the red ones at the instant. A soft giggle escaped from her mouth and even though the place was quite a buzz, he could feel the vibrancy in her voice. While he was busy in adoring her, the entire place jerked with a sudden blast. His eyes snapped to the source only to find a shop that just burnt due to the blast. The buzz suddenly became pitched high as people ran for their life. His eyes automatically reached her who now looked extremely scared and confused.

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah

Dono Jud Ke Juda

Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua

Dono Jud Ke Juda

Madnoo

Mashukoo

Dilbaro

Madnoo Re

His subordinates ran to evacuate the area while his legs instantly turned towards her. Grabbing her wrist, he took her by shock and before she could react, he made her run away. Following her, she became more terrified as a series of blasts followed. She looked back at the terrifying scene and soon her grip over his hand tighten. He pulled her in a safe place for taking shelter as the haunting voice of bomb blasts continued. The tears glitter in her eyes as she looked at him. With one hand around her shoulder and other entwined with her palm, he was observing the environment. The other officers soon arrived as they helped both to come out of the area.

As they reached the safe place, she saw her sisters already waiting for her in concern. She immediately ran towards them, hugging all of them at once. He smiled. She was safe. As everyone jumped on her, for asking her whereabouts, she turned to look at him. Still standing there, his gaze was on her too. She smiled through her tears. Giving her a smile, as he moved a step towards her., he felt a voice call him from behind. One of the officers called him. He gave him a gaze and the officer started giving him the information, though his eyes went again on Tanweer who was now pulled by her sisters to go back home. She kept looking back with anticipation to meet him again as she disappeared in the fog. His eyes remain stuck to her until she completely disappeared.

Tu Hi To Har Bandha Hai

LAmhoo Ki In Zanjeeron Main

Tu Hi To Har Dum Raha Hai

Khawabo Ki Har Tabeeron Mein

Tu Hi To Har Din Dikha Hai

Dundhli Ya Ujali Tasveeron Mein

Next day, having a talk with one of his officers, Reyaansh suddenly stopped in his tracks as he found her at the boundary of the camp asking for permission to enter in. She was not allowed and so the on duty officers shouted on her mercilessly asking her to go back. Without noticing that he had seen her, she turned back with a swollen sad face when suddenly she heard a call. A call of her name. And a string of emotions bypassed her. Her name sounded like a symphony. She knew this voice though she never heard it too clearly. She turned back with a small glimpse of tears. The officers instantly stood in attention giving him a salute as he passed them. She could feel her cheeks heating up and a small smile played on her lips. He stood there breathless, ready to stay there forever just to keep looking at her face. The wind suddenly drifted in direction allowing both of them to inhale each other smell.

Teri Hi To Hai Khushoo

Mujhe Mein Haan Madno Re

Teri Hi To Hai Khushoo

Mujhe Mein Haan

Abb Tu Hi To Harsu Har Jagah

Abb Tu Hi To Harsu Har Jagah

She forwarded one of her hand which was tightly clutched and slowly opened it. A tabiz rested on her palm and he slowly collected it touching her skin in the process. Her lips grew into a bigger smile as he accepted. She took a back step to go when he hold her wrist. She looked at him in surprise which soon turned to a smile as he slid down red bangles in her hand. Flushing badly, she bit her lip and instantly ran away from the place leaving him dazed. Once again, he saw her disappearing in the fog but this time she left her heart for him.

Beh Chus Shab Che Subah,

Meelith Doshvay Juda

Beh Chus Lab Che Dua,

Meelith Doshvay Juda...

Tanweer's father came running to the house informing that the war has broke out and military are moving towards the border area. In the mid of her chores, she hastily ran leaving behind the calls of her family. Her legs moved faster than ever just to meet him once before he leave.

Madnoo

Mashukoo

Dilbaro

Madnoo Re

With tears in her eyes and aching feet, she finally halted as the last military truck went in front of her eyes and here he was looking with the same depth straight into her eyes. They kept looking at each other trying to absorb the other's image in their soul not knowing whether they'll meet up again.

Haan Tera Saaaya To Mein Hoon

Par Sang Tere Na Reh Sakhun

Haan Iss Safar Mein To Mein Hoon

Par Sang Tere Na Ruk Sakun

Lying on her knees, she was in the dargah since last 2 days continuously praying for him. Her eyes closed and face serene as ever, though her heart was turbulent. She wanted peace. She wanted him and she wanted her Allah to fulfill her wish.

In the midst of extremely violent war, as the two sides exchanged bullets and bombs, he fought for the first time not just for his country but for his love. He was here for his motherland but he had to win this and go back for his love. He touched her tabiz which now adored his arm and mentally promised her, "I'll come back.."

Main Hoon Shab Tu Subah

Dono Jud Ke Juda

Main Hoon Lab Tu Dua

Dono Jud Ke Juda

Madnoo

Mashukoo

Dilbaro

Madnoo Re

Having given up everything, she kept her prayers continued. Even if it meant fighting the whole world or fighting the entire universe or even the God of Universe, she was not the one to back down. Her Allah knew what she wanted and the divine powers are seeing both of them, from wherever they are. The love needs no bondage and the will to be with each other had to win over every other thing. Though present in two different corners of world, their prayers have to reach the God and he'll be the one uniting them once again.

Mahiya Ve

Mahiya Ve

Mahiya Ve

Lost in her prayers, she suddenly felt the wind changing its way. As she inhaled it, all her senses rose in alarm. She could feel him. Her eyes opened after a long time only to be snapped close because of light. She slowly opened them again trying to see through the brightness and slowly it appeared. A shadow slowly coming towards her. Her hands which covered her eyes from over exposure of light slowly went down as the image became clearer. Her heartbeat quickens. It was him. She stand on her feet slowly moving towards him. Her heart broke into weeping as she saw him right in front of her smiling at her. Taking her in his embrace, he snuggled into her as their body warmth became the biggest proof of each other's presence...they were together.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow beautiful os
Loved it
Very nicely written
Song choice was fab

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Wow...I'm speechless!!!
It was purely a heart touching OS
Beautifully written
Having read your other works (OS's), I can say this is the best amongst them😳
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OhMyGod.
A beautiful OS. ❤️
You are an amazing writer. 👏
Aanko main aansu aagaye.
Lovely.
Keep writing more. 😊
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AWESOME!
absolutely amazing
Loved the concept and it was beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS
Loved it
It was Maegical
Haaye b'ful starting
He helped her wearing her sandals
She gave him a blanket
and he was snuggling into that blanket 😳
They both thinking abt each other at night

And then the blast next day
Leaving everyone he saved her

Their smile's ,sigh glances...haaye..maar daala
And then war broke down

She kept praying for him for so long
and he came back for her

Him holding that taveez during war

Whole OS was so b'ful
I loved it totally
Read something this good after long tym
Good work girl

P.S: Padhai pe dhyaan de DK 😆😉

P.P.S : I am not back yet.😉




Edited by butterfly-ravee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its so nice
and awesome song selection
loved it yr
keep writing yr
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wow it was wonderful os

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OMG OMG OMG i m dumbstruck 👏👏👏
I hve no words to comment on these beautiful OS
From starting to end each and single word whether its the description of their first meet or whether the slow growing love bond anything it was perfect
and the song u song madno was very so perfectly fitted in it.

It was truly from ur heart to our heart.

It was really truly awesome amazing perfect mindblowing superb ALL THE BEST WORDS FROM OXFORD DICTIONARY I WILL GIVE TO THIS OS

just loved it
amazing work dear

keep writing 😊
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Wow... amazing n a heart touching story...beautifully written... loved it

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