Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Totally loved this os. thank you. Cant wait for saturday.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

"May Devi Maiyya protect you,"

Loved the os so cute loved how even in her drunken stay she came looking for him knowing her would keep her safe loved how she kept talking and talking to him and complain about him so cute awesome os beautifully done loved the family reaction to him wanting to marry her awesome loved it .

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8Lucky88

@8Lucky88

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

love this story...all parts cant wait for sat!!!

continue soon

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Using the same setup and background, how can you create such cute stories???

I am loving each one of them.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#355

What an utterly charming story and specially beautiful take on the holi events.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Nice OS.. ❤️ ArHi Holi times are a treat to watch as always and reading abt them is bliss as well.. I loved the way she was blabbering in front of Arnav and he agreeing for marriage.. Aha.. Loving it.. 😳

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Wow...amazingly written...

Looking forward to the remaining parts...

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Really cute OS Smita!

Brought back fond memories of the Holi episodes..

Arnav was worried and restless thinking that something had happened to Khushi, and something actually happened..but she was intoxicated just enough to know that she needed to go to Arnav first, not anyone else 😳

Only Khushi, who is in a drunken stupor, can make ASR hear the things he never has had to hear before 😆

Waiting to know what will happen when Khushi wakes up!

Loved it ! Looking forward to the next parts !

Thanks for the email Rashmi ! :) x