Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

That was so funny and was so like Arnav and Khushi! I hope Arnav finds out who gav her the Bhang and gives him a good talking to! I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Lovely smita
Will wait for u to finish it
A khushi with Bhang is a pleasure to read

Rashmi, 🤗

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

This is amaaazinggg !! *__*

Arnav ready to get married to khushi ..
Yeaaayyy !! /m\

His proposal came on Holi dae !!
Double treat !! :*

Lalalalalala !! <3

Waitingg to see khushi's reaction! ;) :D

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Lovely OS series and this is icing on the cake as Holi episodes r everyones fav

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Loved the start..

Drunk Khushi is so cute..

Waiting for the next part..

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Awww...tht was SO damn cute!!!

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pree2605

@pree2605

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

awesome...
hayee so cute update...
nd khushii is na sachi sankadevi only...loved her dialogue...
nd buaji said d truth only " Who was she to stop Arnav bitwaa from taking on the bundle of trouble named Khushi Kumari Gupta?" lolzzz...
hayee nd arnav wanna get married to khushi..so sweet...
loved it. ..
thnxx fr email

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Ack! You left off after #7? Meanie! Can't wait til Saturday!

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jennytalpa

@jennytalpa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

U always surprize me with ur writtin... I loved it... May Allah bless u n bless us with ur stories .. Eid Mubarak ...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#340

The holi episode was one of the magical moment of the show not as passionate as the Diwali but way more romantic than Diwali with both of them speaking so openly about their feelings. You have captured this so perfectly in this SS. A drunk Kushi is oh so cute and what is the khadoos LG to do when she is speaking from the heart. Of course the only to make sure she does not get into trouble is to marry her. Can't wait for the proposal . . .

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