Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

nice start and a brilliant finish!!

Super!!

Your stories are awesome as always!!

Mindblowing!! sweet too!

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

just read the whole in one go...awesomw one...lovely bonding

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

This one is uber cute. Mami said correctly. Nani came to repair her heart but it was Arnav who had a change of heart. Khushi was very cute and sweet. Loved the story very much :)

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Haiyee!! What a lovely story!! Heart-meltingly yummy. Mmm!! Smitaaa!! You did it again - wove a spell with your words and drew me into a brand new Arnav-Khushi love story. How much I love this sweet Arnav who loses his heart without a fight. And the family, waiting to pull Arnav's leg for the merry dance he's been leading them. Loved their shock and patent disbelief when Khushi proclaims herself Arnav's friend. Great pics too - just spot on!! And loved how you wove in the IPK touches, Arnav's pose on the bench, Arnav and Khushi sharing a bench, the spilt coffee...

Can sleep with a smile now.❤️

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

amazing series...

ArShi met in hospital...

arnav attracted to khushi's innocence...

arnav proposed ...

khushi agree...

now whole family agreed...

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Awesome Shot...

Such a nice concept... Love story in hospital... Arnav who was not ready to listen to word marriage was dying to marry in just one day...😆... What a drastic change...

Loved it...