MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ] - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sry guys.. Read all ur cmnts. Bt cd nt like due 2 netw disorder... Lvd those thnk u all... Muuaahhh...
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Originally posted by: anu_anya

res :))
un res
hey i am first
*happy dancing *
lovely update dear
dono ko flash back yad araha hai
tum 2 updates sath mein kiya hai per phir be mujhe chota laga :(( ur superb
thanx for pm
continue asap :))

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Hehe u r r8 dear... U r 1st... M glad u like it sk mch.. Lv u ya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read all the parts together! 😊
This is awesome.
Sanyu is sooo strong and had to face so much! 😭 Proud of her. 😊
And Randhir was always there to motivate her.Chenu,Randhir & RD are same na? 😊
Loved their bonding!& Why did Sanyu shout? 😲
Waiting for next part! 😊
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it's awesome...love it...pls update soon
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PART 19

As I whirled & hit to a muscular chest. He was non other than RD. Due to sudden strike, the phone and me both were about to fall but he saved us. My another palm was still clenching the candle. After a few seconds of shock I opened my eyes to peg his direct spy into my eyes. The vicinity was silent, his fragrance was spread in the whole atmosphere and the only source of light was candle. It was glooming just on our faces and I was in his embrance. It was an eyelock, the fire of our eyes collided and the silent milieu filled with music.

Jal gayi battiyaan
Dhal gayi ratiyaan
Laage tere naino se naina re
Dhaani huyi garmiyaan
Dhoop huyi sardiyaan
Laage tere naino se naina re


I was feeling like giving a shot for movie and the camera was focussing just on our eyes.

Chhalne lagi hain mujhe meri hi nazrein
Sapne dikhaati hain tere..
Chalne lagi hain dil mein,
Dheere se teri dhadkane..
O re naina... kaare naina..
O re naina... kaare naina..


"you are safe now", he said stroking his finger to set my hairs.
"aaa..thank you.. Coffee is cool down", I replied but he was still lost.

I shook him a bit and he said "hmm".
"coffee", I erated.

He came into sense and yelled "yes...yes yes.. Lets go".

I planted 2 candles at the middle of the table and handed him the coffee mug. I sat on the other side of table straight infront of him. He again discerned deep into my eyes and the,same I did. I went into a deep deliberation like dancing with him in white costumes under moonbeam night.

Taaron sitaaron ke aage aage bhaage
Chal chhup jaayein chaand ke peeche
Jheeli neeli si teri meri palkon mein
Chal khula aasmaan meeche
Chal boond boond baadlon ko
Dhoond dhoond laayein re
Chal ghoont ghoont saawano ko bujhaayein


My heed was still on and while dancing one hand tapped my shoulder. As I spinned to see, he was non other than randhir. He came and fused with RD. I screamed and returned from my scrunity.

A lone tear drop escaped from my left eye. He remained stud for a while and during departure of next drop from my right eye, he was exactly infront of me leaning on his knees and wiping my tear drops.

O re naina.. naina kaare kaare
Naina.. naina matwaare
Nayi nazar se dekhe nazaare naina


"Are you fine", his words caressing.
"i am ok. just mom flashed", I pouted drying my eyes.

He forwarded his palm and lipped "dance".
"what", I questioned.

"yeah. Actually people go for a candle light dinner but I think this was our candle light coffee. So I think dance is the highlight of such events", he said raising his eye brows high.

For the first time I noticed a smile on his face.

"see I smiled, you said that it will suit me right? Now dont think much, less people get chance to dance with RD", he smirked.

Finally I placed my palms on his and we started dancing. I was so satisfied like someone was continuously stroking his palms on my hairs to make me sleep.

Jaisa kabhi maine socha tha, socha tha
Hone yun kab se laga?
Koi jo badla toh badli ye duniya

Kya chhalne lagi hain mujhe meri hi nazrein
Sapne dikhaake yun tere
Dheere se dheere jaise
Sehmi si jaagi dhadkane
O re naina...

We were looking straight into each others eyes.

O re naina.. naina kaare kaare
Naina.. naina matwaare
Nayi nazar se dekhe nazaare naina

Meanwhile the electricity returned and we left each other.

"i should go", he said in emebracement and I nodded.

He left and after observing his departure from balcony I returned to my room. During searching my bag for my cell phone, I discovered the jacket. I again started reckoning the similarity between both of them.

I could not sleep that night due to that and with same tautness I reached office. As I entered suzi came.

"sanyukta, you have not submitted your e-mail id yet", asked suzi.
"yes I am going", I replied and was about to move but suddenly an idea stroke into my mind that I could find randhir on social websites. I finally found a way to reveal randhir but still there was an obstacle that I knew nothing except his name.

In evening..
After my shift, I quickly left without waiting bittu bhaiya. I reached the nearest internet parlour. I sat infront of the computer and struggled with it which was nearly impossible. I was still in confusion and meanwhile shamsher uncle buzzed my phone. A wide smile took place on my face and I picked the call.

"sanyu beta, congratulations. Sorry I had a lot of work so could not call earlier", apologized shamsher uncle.

"you can pay for this uncle", I chuckled.
" for paying back my child I am always ready. Say what you want", he asked.

"uncle can you send someone to an address. I want know about the name plate there", I asked and mensioned the address.

After a few chit chat he hung. Few minutes later, he again called me and described the name as "shekhawat palace". I was feeling heavenly as it fortune was directing me towards him. I could clearly recall Sid's words. I was extremely happy that I could find randhir after that as he was also in mumbai.

I started searching RANDHIR SHEKHAWAT in facebook but no matches. Then I searched twitter and every possible websites including google but in vain.

Then I searched RD and finally I got some information in wikipedia but what I could see was unbelievable.


PART 20

The profile contained only his achievements and nothing about his early life. This again connected randhir and RD. At one side missing of randhir's profile and on the other hand no information about RD's early life was connecting something that may be he wanted to hide his actual identification. But question was why.

I became even more confused and left for home. My foot steps and mind both were heavy because I was thinking of two people RD and randhir or was it one.j

O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena

Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Mujhko bhaave galliyan teri galliyan
Teri galliyan galliyan teri galliyan
Yun hi tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan


In the same confused pale I entered home, I could still feel his perfume smell at entire house. My state of mind was still in those questions were revolving in my mind.

Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila tu mere dard ka


I entered to bedroom and stool long time infront of that jacket.

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan galiyaan teri galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..


A couple of weeks passed...
Timi had already started staying with me and vibhu joined his college staying there in hostel. I paid his semester fees with my advance.

One day early morning I was sitting on stairs with a cintinuous gaze to my brush. My mind was not concentrated enough from that day yet I had no other choice except waiting as I knew him. Direct questions may hurt him and indirectly there was no other way to reach to truth because such a popular personality hiding his past was not small issue, there must a huge deal with it.

Interrupting my confusions timi rolled in.

"heyy di, good morning", she voiced but inaudible to my ears.

She shaked me "di, brush it na. If you will peer it, its not going to come and clean your teeth automatically", she grinned.

She continued "di, what has happened to you. The day I came here since then I have not seen that zill, that confidence, that power. You always look lost. Is there any problem?"

"no I am fine", I convinced her but in vein.
"di, I am not that kid you will fool me. Something is wrong otherwise you must be replying to my good morning. I know you are my di and you dont want see us in tension. Still di, so kuch you have done for us. Are not we that eligible to share your problems"

"hah.. I know you are grown up but", I pouted.
"no but di. Please share you will be easy. Please"

"you know RD, he is really very rude. But what he is not that actually he shows. He has helped me, cared for me. I am not believing he could be like that. I am not getting the exact reason behind it", I paniced.
"look di I donno the reason behind it but I know you. You are not among the people who accept defeat so easily. You are a fighter di. Go get an answer from him. I know if he has done so many things, he must be considering you a friend atleast", she said interlocking her fingers.

I realised she said atleast and I questioned "what did you say? Atleast".
"yeah. I mean if he would be thinking more than that then?", she smiles naughtily.

I grabbed her ears and pleaded "sorry sorry di". As I removed my fingers, she giggled and hugged me. I hugged her back.

"i love you di", she said digging her head in my chest.
"love you too bacha", I said kissing her hairs with a smile, which was lost from do many days.

With a lot if confidence I reached set. There suzi asked me meet RD. I felt like getting a chance to have a convo with him. As I entered he was in his YAM mood. In this time, I noticed usually he remains in his angry state in morning, some of whose drops sheds on me too.

"may I come in sir", I said knocking the door without giving the bomb any chance to brust on me.
"yeah come in", he replied looking into his file.

"sir you called me"
"yes, our oudoor shooting will start in a week. Get ready and whatever passpost viza required, consult suzi. If you need a sum you will be allorted"

"but sir, I cant go leaving my sis here alone"
"i have not asked you, I ordered you. Why I need to recall you about the contract ms. Agarwal. Now leave and get ready for the shot", he screamed and usually he called me ms. Agarwal when he was angry.

I left without any agreement because I knew smashing your head in wall results bleeding of your head only.

After the whole tiring and tensed day, I returned home. I sat on the chair digging my head down. Suddenly timi came with a cup of tea and quered about the day. I described the situation and after a long discussion with bittu bhaiya, it was decided that timi will live in hostel.

Next morning.
For the first time, I reached RD's home to tell him that I was ready to go. LEELA MENSION board was hung outside. I entered and asked the servant for him. I was sitting on the sofa and observing the large hall. Suddenly I noticed some pictures hung on the wall.

I went close to them and what I saw was crystal to my eyes that RD was non other than randhir.

To be continued...

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Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update
She finally figured it out
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is really awesome...interesting,very interesting...cliff hanger ending...eagerly waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was awesome... and waiting for rds version..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Nain
Lovely, lovely, lovely update dear👏⭐️
Love it❤️
Keep it up👍🏼
Update soon plzzz😳
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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yippee mujhe pehle se pata tha that Rd and randhir ek hi hai lovely update

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