FF- lover turned villian(mature+dark)last part on pg 30 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Thank you so much for the love..thank u sooo much...
I will update soon 😛
Pls keep commenting ... Your comments tell me and instils confidence in me to write more.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: archakan

vow ye donon bahuth fast nikali yaara, kash show main bhi Sandhir aisa hota... Patha nahin ye golden moments kab dekhne milenge ? love this part dear its getting more and interesting.. Pls update soon...




I am also waiting 😊 but yes I don't want randhir to become a gangster..hehe 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: goodlucksam

Moi reached so late😭

Koi nhi oye!!!

2nd chapter me hi praposal😲

Sandhir r so fast
😆😆
Irresistible ...ahem ahem loved the dialouge😳
Fantabulous work dear
👍🏼

Well when it comes to imagine sandhir romance!🤣
My imagination goes wilder nd wilder beyond the limits
🤣
So I would love to read ur imagination next time😉

Update asap!!

Love
Sam



My ff's sandhir are super fast but abhi toh shuruaat hui hai ...hahahaha(evil laugh ) 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Beside the ff ... I have got an idea of two shot ... I anyone interested????tell fast..but I will update it her only... 😛 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Hey! Dear
lovely written👏
love ur ff😳
update soon
Regarding TS plz write it
Love to read ur work. 😳
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
PART 3 - POSSESSIVENESS

Sanyu woke in the morning first and looked at the person laying beside her..his cute innocent face..last night scenes came rushing to her mind and she blushed..she got up and went in the kitchen and made tea for herself as she woke up early and there was no chance of randhir waking up so early..
Sanyu to herself - sanyu tu randhir ki sirf 3-4 Dino se jaanti hai na tujhe uske baare Mein tujhe kuch pata hai na tu kabhi bhi puchti hai..kal raat sab kuch itna jaldi ho raha hai!! Sanyu smiled and told herself that everything is right..
Tee tee..randhirs phone buzzed..sanyu took the phone and opened the message..randhir shaam ko 7:00 baje aajana Milne..jaana hui uss ladki ki Wajah se tune dhanda(work) chod diya hai par kam se kam Milne toh aaja..
-bhai
Sanyu kept the phone back as she thought that randhir will take time to come out of this world of gangsters..and went near randhir to wake him up..
Sanyu- randhir!! Kisses him on his cheek and lays on him ..
Randhir hugs her and says good morning..
Sanyu..-Gud morning
Randhir - waise meri yeh Pehli morning hai Jo itni good hai.
Sanyu blushes and randhir says-oho sharma Rahi ho I don't wanna miss this chance to see u blushing..sanyu hits him on his chest..

Acha chalo uth jao office nahi jaana..And Haan tumhe Ek message AAya tha..sorry Maine pad liya..
Randhir- kuch nahi Hota..agar kuch Hota toh tumhe toh Batata hi...
They both get ready..randhir goes to his office and sanyu goes for shopping..the day ends like this only..randhir and sanyu didn't talk too much because randhir was new on job..

AT NIGHT
Parth and kaustu have come to dinner..sanyu is missing randhir badly and the door bell rings..she goes and opens the door and found randhir standing there with a huge smile..he comes in and greets kaustu and parth...parth and sanyu 3-4 times hi fived and hugged friendly but randhir was just fuming with jealousy..kaustu and parth also liked randhir..they both went to there house and sanyu turn around only to see an angry randhir trying to be polite..but sanyu got his inner turmoil
Sanyu- parth mere bhai jaisa hai..
Randhir- tumhe kaise pata ki main parth ke baare Mein but hesitates to say further..
Sanyu hugs him and kisses him on his cheek,nose,chin and last at forehead!!
Sanyu- Ek second tum Gaye nahi???
Randhir- Haan woh main yahi batane wala tha tumhe.. Main abhi Thodi der Mein jaa sakta hui??
Sanyu- tumhe puchne ki zarurat nahi hai..woh tum hate papa jaise hai right..now goo..
Randhir- bye..love you!!!

LATE NIGHT AROUND 2:00 AM

randhir came home drunk and not in his senses..
Sanyu- kya hua??tumne pee rakhi hai??
Randhir- sanyu and kisses him on her lips passionately and hugs her and puts all his weight on her and sanyu loses her balance and falls on the bed..randhir kisses her neck and her jawline..
Randhir- pata hai Aaj dada ka birthday tha..
Sanyu- smiles on his innocence..Acha..toh tumne itni saari pee ki..aur ab mere upar chad Gaye ho!!
Randhir kisses her passionately..sanyu also easily gives in as she was the whole day missing him..and now she got him..sanyu hurriedly went to the washroom as she knew where it was going!!and came out after few min in her night suits..randhir by the time had slept there..
She layed him properly and layed beside him cuddling him more and more..
At night randhir woke and saw sanyu so close to him and smiled..and kissed her on his forehead..

So here I end..pls do comment.. Your comments encourage me a lot thanks..
#janavi

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

res

unres moi 1st again🥳

its cute wala update

aww after read this part i want to say how can it turns to dark one really its look like cute one

now i m eager to know what will haappen in their future

thanks for pm me

love u so much

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
what a lovely update yaar. really loved it.
Who is DADA?? it means randhir hasn't left his gangster job.
So sweet of Sanyukta she still trusts him.
just loved this update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Res
Unres
Nice update
Thanks for the pm
Do pm me the next time also
Loads of love
Mahak
Edited by MAHAK1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
hey it was a nyc update
still Randhir is acting like gangster
btw thanks for pm 😳

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