FF- lover turned villian(mature+dark)last part on pg 30 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: archakan

first trip after marriage... pls update next part asap dear...



I will try my best..waise can someone guess why sanyu is cRying??
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey its really nice update dear😃
its emotional..RD thought she heard everything..😲
she plans fr a trip...excited!!😉
thanks fr updating
update soon..😃

P.S. dear plz make index of all ur updates in first page..it will be easy fr us to read if we miss any of ur update..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Honeymoon 😳
Update soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was very good dear...
Randhir thought Sanyu heard everything
but Why is Sanyu crying ???
and first trip after marriage.,
Honeymoon☺️
waiting eagerly for the next part dear
Plz plz update asap
thanks for the PM🤗
Love
Sudeshna
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Posted: 11 years ago

omg janvi👏 claps for u

hawww kitna cute likha hai

love u for so sweet update

ya i can understand that update karne ka time hi nahi milta, studies ki bajah se,

so jab possible ho tab update karna

nd thanks for pm me

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

hey its really nice update dear😃

its emotional..RD thought she heard everything..😲
she plans fr a trip...excited!!😉
thanks fr updating
update soon..😃

P.S. dear plz make index of all ur updates in first page..it will be easy fr us to read if we miss any of ur update..😊



I will surely make
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Posted: 11 years ago
first trip after marriage!!!!!
please do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing yaar...
bt i think sanyu has a right to knw d truth n i hope randhir tells her before she gets to knw from somewhere else...
loved it yaarrr...
post nxt asap

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
plz update long part next time
plz pm me next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi guys I am back with the next part..but really feeling sad so less comments..:(( fir bhi now a expecting more comments..btw thank you to all of you who liked my ff till now..so here I start !!!

sanyu and randhir boarded on the train and randhir was still not knowing where sanyu is taking him(I know this is not possible because train Mein repeat hote rehta hai and all but words nahi emotions samjhiye mere hehehe!!) they both had a personal compartment...sanyu and randhir were lying on the beds..differently but they heard a knock on the and got up and saw a child was grinning and knocking again and again..sanyu again closed the door but this time she went and layed on randhir ..and kept her head on randhirs chest..randhir was just thinking how to tell sanyu the truth..but when he felt her body on his he immediately gilded her near her and kissed her head..sanyu planted kisses on his chest..and says randhir let's make love...
Randhir- shocked and let's a small laugh -what??? Sanyu kaisi baate karti ho tum kabhi kabhi..really..
Sanyu- Arre baba I am serious ... Isliye toh Maine personal compartment karwaya..chalo na and starts opening his shirt buttons...
Randhir- nervously gets up and says sanyu kya kar Rahi ho??koi aa jayega!!
Sanyu gets up and locks the compartment and rushes to randhir and starts unbuttoning his shirt again but randhir removed sanyu's hand but sanyu is sanyu her hands went to his belt and started opening it..(lol)
Randhir removes her hands and says sanyu pls hum hotel jaakar karenge na yeh sab..
Sanyu- nahi tum Bohot irresistible ho I can't control..let's make love right now..
Randhir- sanyu!!
Sanyu- kya yaar ladke toh humesha ready rehte hai na aur tum ho ki situation ka advantage nahi leg rahe!!
Randhir- sanyu kyunki yeh Ek train hai..aur koi aa jayega toh aur gadbad..
Sanyu seductively pulls him and starts planting kisses on his neck and cheek!!
They both heard a knock on the door but sanyu was nowhere to stop but sanyu held her hands and went to open the door closing his buttons..sanyu slightly grinned randhir opened the door and saw that child again grinning and smiling ...but seeing randhir annoyed the child got scared and ran away..randhir was thinking thank god sanyu stopes and closes the door ..he turned around and saw sanyu removing her kurti from shoulders slightly and randhir rushed to her and said- yeh kya kar Rahi ho..koi dekh lega.. Ho sakta hai camera ho(tensed)
Sanyu(seductively)- toh kya hua??hum husband wife hai..and bites his earlobe and her hands went to his shirt but this time shouted in frustration- sanyu abhi nahi na room main karenge and bit his toungue for saying such a stupid sentence(lol I myself can't control but wait picture abhi Baaki hai)
Sanyu laughed seeing randhirs condition and went forward while randhir moved backward..sanyu pulled him with his collars and her hands went to his shirt again..
Soon to be continued!!


Precap- same honeymoon
Pls do comment I know this is also small but pls adjust..and pls comment

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