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sjain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

abhi first part hai bachu...😳

OH samjh gayi main

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harshiakshi

@harshiakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

it was very beautifully written

i love u r writting style

waiting fr the nxt part

and here's a request plz do write the part on arsh too as u do in other os of urs

love

akshita

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: teenorchid
cant wait for moree

you will get that soonish...
:)

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Pakeez Muqadas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

ANA.. itta Chotu Part..

yai to shuru hone se pehle hi finish ho gayaa..

seriously pata hi nahi chala kab shuru aur kab khatam ho gaya...

waese i knw ur mobile crashed .. isi liye yai sab huwaa..😭

By d way tell me 1 thingh y r u saying again & again ki pehle jo likha tha wo better tha..

waese yai b kafi achcha hai ...👏

achcha ab jaldi se nxt update kar dena ..

itna wait nahii hotaa...

aur haan . nxt time bada waalaaa update chahiyee..

now comming to d part...

RIDHIMA & AMMY ka divorce phele hi part mai,,😲

mnzz kahani flashback mai chalne waali hai...

i hope RIDHIMA apne maqsad mai kamayaab ho jaye..

waese u k ashirwad se to zaroor kamayaab honi hai... looolllzzz😆

achchaa abhi buhat bak bak karli..

jaldi jaldi post kar dena..

Oottey..

tab tak k liyee ... intizaar..

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: harshiakshi
it was very beautifully written
i love u r writting style
waiting fr the nxt part
and here's a request plz do write the part on arsh too as u do in other os of urs
love
akshita

thank.you dear...
glad u liked it till here...
Dear I am writing in ARSH too but that is added in my blog...i have given the link of that just before I started this os in the same post :)
People were getting confused with Riddhima/Shilpa tag so I will be moving all ARSH stories to my blog n will give links here... :)
do keep on commenting here...

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Pakeez Muqadas

@Mpakeez

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

CHOLLY Last wali OS pe cmnt karna bhul hi gaye thay..

but i wanna say ''ACHE LAGTE HO'' hamari 1 of fav. os thi ,, sab se ziyada humme is OS ka song pasand aayaa..

& middle class family se relate thi .. so khudh se b relate lagii...

how AMMY & RIDHZII understands each other .. binna kuch bole..

kehte hai na kuch loug sirf aap k liye banne hote hai & they will understand u .. chahe aap share karo ya na karoo..

in dono ka relation deekh kar same feel huwa..

thnak u sooo much is cute si OS k liye..

aur nxt walli b jaldi se update kardoo..

take care..

keep smiling ..

stay blessed

Edited by Mpakeez - 10 years ago

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Mpakeez
ANA.. itta Chotu Part..
yai to shuru hone se pehle hi finish ho gayaa..
seriously pata hi nahi chala kab shuru aur kab khatam ho gaya...

waese i knw ur mobile crashed .. isi liye yai sab huwaa..😭
By d way tell me 1 thingh y r u saying again & again ki pehle jo likha tha wo better tha..

waese yai b kafi achcha hai ...👏

achcha ab jaldi se nxt update kar dena ..
itna wait nahii hotaa...
aur haan . nxt time bada waalaaa update chahiyee..

now comming to d part...
RIDHIMA & AMMY ka divorce phele hi part mai,,😲
mnzz kahani flashback mai chalne waali hai...
i hope RIDHIMA apne maqsad mai kamayaab ho jaye..
waese u k ashirwad se to zaroor kamayaab honi hai... looolllzzz😆

achchaa abhi buhat bak bak karli..
jaldi jaldi post kar dena..
Oottey..
tab tak k liyee ... intizaar..

haha...
par chotu part nay bhi dhamaka kia k nahin😉
will surly try to make next part a long one...dont worry
nope...kahani flashback main nahi chalni...abhi issi moment ko capture karna hai...
lets see kahan tak kamyab hoti hai ridz...
waitu a lil...😳

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

No you can't stop there
it was so heartwarming and flawless
I loved the flashback scene it was so cute ❤️
what went wrong in their relation eager to know 😲
update soonish 🤗