KriYaansh FF ~ Secret Love! Updtd (Chap 5 Pg 14) - Page 2

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Both are in love with them but I think Rey & Sharon don't know abt that will be interesting to know hw they fall in love with them. Do continue soon. 😊

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A place I can relax and let my imagination be free of all the pressure of heavy loads of Physics numericals, chemistry formulas and Biological terms. It is the lesson where I do not have to worry about how much spices need to go in the dish we have to cook in our hospitality lesson, nor I have to care about which religion originated from which country in the 'Studies of Religions' lesson.

Nice, we are doing creative writing today as we have a casual teacher because our real teacher is absent.The casual teacher asked us to write about anything we want to and a girl in my class joked about if she can write about her real life love story and the teacher just flashed a big smile at her and said that she can write anything she wants to.

That's what gave a kick-start to my thoughts and I put my pen on the paper in a hope to write something but nothing was getting clear in my mind. My thoughts were blurry as well as my vision. I don't know why this is happening to me but it seems like a usual thing now. I tried to reverse my mind towards my creative writing but that girl's words kept roaming in my mind, 'My real life love story'. How did it start? It was a weird but cute incident.

I was staying over at my cousin's house three years ago. He was living in there for his studies and doing a part time job as well not because it was necessary for him to do that. Of course not! He just wanted to have a taste of his independent earning. Anyways so me and my cousin who is of the same age as me were sleeping till mid day as we were awake till late at night whispering in our beds about our newly changed life. That change was nothing else than stepping into the teenage life. Well that day mine and my cousin's family wanted to go out somewhere for recreation but we were not waking up by anyone. So he came in our room and walked towards me. I was half asleep so I was able to sense his movement but I pretended that I was in a deep sleep. He sat down on his kness and gently stroked my cheek with his hand, slowly calling out my name.

"Kriya...Kriya"

I didn't reply.

His hand was still on my cheek and he said again.

"Kriya...Get up...We all are going out somewhere to have fun"

I opened my eyes and was hell nervous to see that our faces were just inches apart. It felt like everything froze right there and all that existed at that time was me and him. At that moment my cousin woke up and asked "Is that you Rey Bhaiya" while rubbing her eyes. He quickly stood up from there and replied, "Yeah Sherry, ummm get ready quickly, we are waiting for you two downstairs".

After that moment I just couldn't take him off my mind. I always admired him from the start and he also used to behave differently with me as he used to behave with the other girls of my family or friends circle.

Oops my teacher is coming towards me and I haven't put down a word on my paper. Oh Thank God she just smiled and walked pass me. What a lucky day it is...! Well usually my lucky days don't last lucky for long but hopefully this one does.

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"Hello, is anybody in the house? Koi hai?" He called out as he entered in the Rajput Residence.

Smriti: Arey Rey Beta... Itne dino baad aaye. Kese ho?

Rey: Aunty main bilkul theek hoon. Aap sunaen.

Smriti: Main Bilkul theek thaak. Aaj tum idhar kaa raasta kese bhool gaye?

Rey: Arey Aunty idhar kaa rasta main kese bhool sakta hoon. Iss raaste per tou poora bachpan guzra hai bus kia haina k final exams sar per hain aur doosra Dad is out of country tou yahan k official matters bhi mujhe dekhne parr rahe hain. Aaj aap logon ki buhut yaad aayi tou bus aagaya.

Smriti: Buhut acha kiya beta. Hum sub bhi tumhe buhut yaad karte hain. Aao betho naa.

"Mum, Mummy, Mom... Look look I have sketched this new design of a summer dress. It should be in the fashion maagazine. I'm telling you this has to come in this year's summer collection in the stores", Misha shouted and blurted out everything without paying any heed to her surrounding.

Smriti: Misha calm down! Aas paas dekh bhi liya karo. Ghar mai koi mehman aaya hota hai.

Rey: Aunty aapne tou mujhe awkward feel karwa diya mehman keh kar. Main thori naa koi mehman hoon yahan per.

Misha: Hayyee Rey bhai.. When did you come. Oh my God after so many days.

She ran towards rey and he patted her head and put his one arm around her in a brotherly manner.

Rey: Hey Mishu.. Bus abhi aaya.

Misha: Wese Mom ne bilkul sahi kiya aapko mehman bula kar. Mehmano jese hee tou aate hain aap. Huh!

Rey: Nahi Misha dear. I'm really sorry. Bus time hee nahi milta.

Misha: Hmm chalo iss baar maaf kiya. Kia yaad karain ge aap bhi.

Rey: Thank you Misha Jee. Buhut Buhut Dhane Waad aapka.

Both of them bursted into fits of laughter.

Misha: Oh Rey bhai, I forgot to tell you something very important.

Rey: Yeah what?

Misha: Bhai you remember those Bay Blade cartoons we used to watch together.

Rey: Of Course I do..

Misha: There is a film being released based on those cartoons. It's just truly awesome. I have the DVD of it. You wanna see it? I will just go and get it.

Rey: Oh sure go fast.

Misha went to her room jumping all the way in excitement and Rey just shook his head slightly smiling on her childishness.

Smriti: Rey tumne itna isko sar charhaya hua hai k apne busy schedule mai uske saath beth kar woh cartoon bhi dekhoge kia?

Rey: Aunty kia karoon. Woh itni sweet hai usko naa bolne kaa mann nahi karta. Oh wese woh aapko nak charhi beti kahan hai?

Smriti: Reyyy... Woh nak charhi tou bechari nahi.

Rey: Nahi Aunty aapne dekha nhi kia. Har time ghusse se uski naak charhi rehti hai.

Smriti: Tumhi usko tang karte rehte ho tou aur kia karegi woh.

Rey: Haan Haan! Le lain beti ki side aap.

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Misha entered in Kriya's room. Kriya was engrossed in a book.

Misha: Kriya Dii you know what kaun aaya hai?

Kriya: Kaun? (Least interested)

Misha: Dii aapke woh aaye hain.

Kriya: Umm you mean...? (Raising an eye-brow)

Misha: Yes yes I mean Rey bhai.

Kriya: Oh!

Misha: Oh kia? Neeche aaen

Kriya: No yaar I don't feel like.

Misha: Whatever!

As Misha walked out of the room, Kriya got up, gave a quick look to herself in the mirror and ran downstairs but didn't go to the sitting room, instead she went inside the kitchen and started preparing tea for herself.

In the meantime, Rey, Smriti and Misha came to the dining room which was attached with the kitchen and settled there. Kriya looked at Rey from the corner of her eye but instantly looked away as she found him already looking at her.

Misha: Kriya Dii, Rey Bhai ki chai bhi bana do.

Kriya: Main kyun banaoon? (sounding if she doesn't care)

Misha: Apni bana rahi hona tou unki bhi bana do.

Kriya: Main apni bana rahi hoon naa. He can make his own as well.

In that time Smriti went to pick up a phone call.

Misha: Hawww Dii, how rude!

Rey: No nevermind Misha, I will help myself. Main khudi chai bana leta hoon.

He said that and proceeded towards the kitchen with a wide smrik on his face.

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this whole part was in kriya's pov rite,?
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