KriYaansh FF ~ Secret Love! Updtd (Chap 5 Pg 14) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update...
Loved Rey and Misha...
Kitchen mein dono ek saat...waiting for that special chai😉
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it

Kriyaansh were cute

I think rey also likes kria
Waiting to see what will happen in kitchen

Waiting for next update

Thanx for pm

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Hello Guys!

I'm back with the update.

Thanks a lot for liking and commenting on my first update. It really means a lot...This time I couldn't reply to your comments but next i'll reply to you for sure...!!!!

Sorry in advance for the grammatical and spelling mistakes, if any.

Happy Reading!

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Chapter 2

Rey proceeded towards the kitchen with a wide smrik on his face.Kriya saw him coming but chose to ignore. Misha went away from there in order to give both of them some privacy. Kriya was getting nervous by his presence in the kitchen but she tried her best not to show. Rey had a dangerous smile on his face which made Kriya shiver. He went near her and took the jar of tea from her hands. She firstly got shocked but then made an effort to get the jar from his hands.

She brought her hands forward to get the jar but he shifted the jar in his other hand. She tried to get it from his other hand but then he held the jar with both of his hands and then he kept taesing her by shifting the jar from one hand to other. They didn't speak a word in all this act but just shared some eye locks.

Kriya got hell confused on his actions. She tried to get it from his hands but his grip was to tight that she couldn't.

Kriya: Please jar mujhe de dain.

Rey: Oh so tumhe bolna aata hai.

Kriya: Jee?

Rey: Tumhe bolna aata hai tou pehle kiun nahi bola k jar de do. Mujhe kia pata tha, you need it. (He said making an innocent face)

Kriya: What?? That's what I was trying to do from past 5 minutes.

Rey: Trying to do what? (He gazed at her with intensity)

Kriya: T..tr..try..trying to g..get the jar from you. (Getting nervous from his intense gaze)

Rey: Oh I thought... (Back with his deadly smile)

Kriya: You thought what? (Raising an eye brow)

Rey: Oh never mind Kriyu, here you go with the jar.

He said politly but as Kriya brought her hands in front in order to get the jar, he got his hands away and put the jar on a higher shelf of kitchen which Kriya wasn't able to reach.

She stared at him with a shocked expression and he started laughing hard.

Rey: "Susti" kahin ki, you can't even get a jar from me by moving fastly?

Kriya: Dare you call me "Susti" again. I told you not to. I'm not lazy! Get it?

Rey: Woah Woah! Girl calm down! Aur such tou maan lena chahiye.

Kriya: Huh! Aapko koi aur kaam nahi jo mujhe tang karne aagaye hain.

Rey: Okay main chala jaata hoon.

He said dramatically and started moving towards the kitchen exit door with his face down, pretending to be sad.

Kriya: Na...hi.

She said but realised her words and stopped in between but he heard it and quickly turned around.

Rey: Nahi? Naa jaaoon?

Kriya: Whatever!

She got a higher wooden bench, climbed on it and got the jar down from the shelf. He moved towards her and put his one hand by Kriya's side, on the shelf she was working on. She wanted to get something from the cabnet on the other side so she started to move from the side where Rey hadn't had his hand on the shelf but he kept his other hand their in order to block Kriya's way. He got very close to her that she shut her eyes tight. She was now trapped in between Rey's masculine arms and the shelf behind her. She felt him coming closer and closer and her heartbeat continued to get uneven and faster but all of a sudden she felt that he has moved back and removed his hands from there. She opened her eyes and stared at him with a confused expression.

Rey: Kia hua? Aaisa face kiun banaya hai jese koi ghost dekh li ho yaa phir koi buhut mushkil saa question tumhare saamne solve karne k liye diya ho.

Kriya: Woh aap..

Rey: Main kia? Main tou ye toffee tumhare piche shelf per pari thi woh le raha tha. Yummy!!

Rey replied casually showing a toffee in his hand which he actually got from that shelf and them putting it in his mouth, making a "Yummy" noise as if nothing ever happened. Kriya stomped her foot down and then again started ignoring Rey.

Rey just stood beside the kitchen door and kept teasing her with his continuos gaze fixed on her. After 2-3 minutes Rey's mobile rang and he went out of the kitchen to attend the call. Once he got out, Kriya took a long breath and smiled, then resumed her work.

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Rey went to the back garden of the Rajput Residence while talking on phone. Smriti was already there, fixing some plants.

Rey: Arey Aunty main kar deta hoon, aap kia kar rahi hain?

Smriti: Oh beta ye kal raat ki aandhi (strom) ki wajah se iss darakht (tree) ki branches tootne wali hain. Bus unhi ko bandhane ki koshish kar rahi hoon.

Rey: Main kar deta hoon

Rey started fixing the trees when Kriya came out with a tray with two tea cups and a platter of fried samosas and another with some sweets. She kept in on the table in the garden and started walking back towards the door when Rey stopped her.

Rey: Hey Kriyu, ye do cup chaye kis k liye? Aik tou tumhare liye but Aunty tou shaam ki chai peeti nahi aur Misha kaa dil nahi kar raha.

Kriya: Aap k liye!

Rey: Really? You said you will not make it for me.

Kriya: Woh purani baat ho gayi aur wese bhi hum apne ghar aaye mehmano ko khilaa pila kar hee bhejte hain.

Rey finished his work of tying the tree branches meanwhile and walked towards Kriya. Smriti went to the other side of the garden. Rey stood behind Kriya and spoke, more like whispered in her ear, making her loose her senses with the proximity.

Rey: Aapne tou humain aik pal mai mehmaan keh kar paraya (stranger) kar diya. (In his Oh so dramatic tone)

Kriya: Woh chai thandi ho rahi hai aapki. Pee lain warna doosra cup phir aap khudi banaen ge.

She said this, took her cup and started walking towards the door for going inside the house but stopped on hearing Rey's words.

Rey took a sip of the tea and said, "Hmmm what a tea, purane dino ki yaad aagayi."

She smiled on hearing this and they both went to a flashback.

Rey: Jay yaar kal se phir school open :(

Jay: Oye tujhe tou buhut pasand tha school jaana aur ab tou new year start ho raha hai school kal plus you were so excited about your class 5.

Rey: Haan yaar per you know naa roz tere ghar aana, iss garden mai khelna, masti karna aur...

Jay: Aur kia?

Rey stopped speaking and started looking at someone with a huge smile. Jay followed his gaze and found him looking at Kriya who was brining tea outside for all of them. He smiled as well.

Jay: Oh aur Kriya ke haath ki chai.. Right?

Rey: Right! Iski chai mai maza hee kuch aur hai.

Jay: I know meri behan k haath mai jaadoo hai.

Both of the guys admired her. Jay as a brother and Rey... Well! Kriya just giggled on hearing them and her eyes brightened with happiness.

They both got out of the flashback when Misha came outside banging the door loudly behind her.

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At night both Kriya and Misha were in their beds, both assuming the other to be asleep.

Misha: Kriya dii

Kriya: Hmmm?

Misha: Dii aap jaag rahe ho?

Kriya: Haan yaar neend nahi aarahi.. Tum bhi jaag rahi ho.

Misha: Yaa of course dii, ab soye huay mai bolne ki beemari tou mujhe hai nahi. Aap bhi aajkal naa khoyi rehti ho, pata hota nahi kia bol rahi ho.

Kriya: Mishu... Tu mujhe sunana band kar, badi behan hoon teri.

Misha: Oh sorry I forgot, my big sister is in love. Aur aaj tou aapka pagal hona justified hai. Aaj Jiju jo aaye thay, unko dekha, eye lock bhi hua. Kitchen mai lovely moments bhi huay aur phir unko aapki chaye pasand bhi aagayi. Perrrffect! (Madhuri Style)

Kriya: Oye tujhe ye last part kese pata hai k chai pasand aayi? You weren't even there.

Misha: Main nahi thi per mere kaan har jaga hote hain.

Kriya: Mishu don't tell me you were eavesdropping.

Misha: Woah woah didi you know I don't like this kind of stuff. Mujhe sunna hota tou saamne aakar sunti. Main bahar hee aarahi thi but meri shirt kaa corner door k saath hook mei phass gaya tou I could hear you guys but you didn't know that I was there.

Kriya: Acha meri maa, lecture dena band kar.

Misha: Kriya Dii, you know what I sometimes strongly feel that Rey Bhai feels for you too.

Kriya: Hmmm! Tumhe kiun aaisa lagta hai?

Misha: Dii, the way he looks at you, jese woh bahane bahane se aapse baat karte hain..everything..Unki har cheez se lagta hai.

Kriya: Yes may be you are right. Chalo ab so jao buhut raat ho gayi hai.

Misha: Okay Dii Jaan-Good Night!

Kriya: Good Night Sonu!

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Rajput Residence

8:00 am

Kriya: Misha it's the last time I'm waking you up. If you don't then you miss out your school and I'm not gonna defend you in front of Mum or Dad. Get it?

Misha: (In a Sleepy Voice) Didu chillao tou mut! I'm waking up.

Kriya: Huh! Chillao mut. Aaram se tou tumhare per asar nahi hota. Anyways I'm going downstairs to have breakfast. You get ready in 10 minutes and come down.

Kriya descended down the stairs but stopped in her way as she heard her parents speaking about something, something which hit Kriya like a bullet.

Smriti: Jee aap bilkul theek keh rahe hain. Aliyan jesa acha larka humari Kriya k liye koi nahi ho sakta.

Rajesh: Bilkul aur phir Sameer aur Asha bhi Kriya ko apni beti ki tarha rakhain ge.

Smriti: Woh sub baatain tou theek hain per abhi tou Kriya iss sub k liye buhut choti hai.

Rajesh: Main bhi jaanta hoon woh tou. Aur mujhe apni beti ki khushiyan buhut pyaari hain. Iss liye shaadi ki baat kar bhi kaun raha hai. Woh log tou sirf baat pakki karna chahte hain.

Smriti: Theek hai! Aakhir jub woh log itne pyaar se ye khwahish kar rahain hai tou mana nahi karna chahiye.

Rajesh: Hmmm..Maine bhi yahi soch kar haan karne kaa irada (desicion) kiya.

Kriya's world broke into pieces. Getting in a relationship with someone else was a nightmare but getting in relationship with Aliyan was totally the last thing she would ever want. She could not let it happen. Not now and Not ever!

____________________________________________________ Do hit like...if yOu really like it...!!!
lOve SarU...!!!!😛❤️
Edited by fannism - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Wah Wah... Kya update thi Sara apa...😉
OMG...Rey kitna naughty hai.. Bechari Kriya...😆
Susti...🤣Seriously...?? Rey ye bulata hai Kriya ko..! Awesome yaar 😛
Phir Kriyu-Mishu scene.. I just luv d chemistry btw dese sisters... Their bonding is chooo sweet... 😃
At the end...😭Don't do dis 2 Kriya...Can't wait 2 read more nw...
Update fast!!
-Love,
Ur Sohu!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
amazing
muah
kya baat hai
luvd thi nok jok
update soon
kr rocks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awesome...

wonderful update...

loved KR moments..

lovely...

well written..

loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aah amazing luvd it update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Amazing update...
Loved Kriyaansh nok-Jhok!!!
Beautifully written scene...
Awesome plot and the flashback was cherry on the top!!!
Loved the update..
do update soon, Waiting!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update... Loved kriyaansh parts...
But the last part ?????? Poor kriya... Plz update soon... Eager to know what will happen next :-)
Edited by ..ANVESHA.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Nice concept...kriya has a crush on kriya..
I agree with misha ,rey has feelings for kriya.
Kriya-Aliyan marriage..very interesting twist..
Update soon

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