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Originally posted by: Sanskrutiii

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Brilliant one👏👏👏

Why didn't you PM me this one????😡😡

Sorry... Actually I was planning a novel on this plot so thought of discontinuing it in IF 😔 that's why did not PM..😔

. Hats Off to your ideas really innovative!!!!!!!!

Actually had a bad time in college today for no fault of mine 😭

I understand what it feels like, I have faced such days once or twice in my college days too..

but your OS dried it up😛

Thankz 😃

BEST PARTS I LIKE

Just tell me one thing am I dead?😆😆

His dharma does not permit him to listen to other's personal conversation, but this weird Panchaali is talking so loudly that even deaf also can hear what she is saying.

[Karna felt like covering his ear].🤣🤣

oh I cannot stop myself!!!!!!🤣

Oh!!! so cute I can imagine t how strange he must have felt then!!!!😉😉

. Well it is present continuous, he curses me at each moment. I mean every fraction of moment. In fact now also he is cursing me!!! 😲

I can totally explain you why the curses worked at that times with scientific reasons,

Can you explain it to me?????😲😳

When someone curse powerfully the atoms of our nerve gets excited and some chemical change happens, so the curse happens..but now a day the curse giver cannot give proper curse, nor the curse taker takes it seriously 😆so nothing happens..but yes I can say still if some very good person curses some wrong doer from his heart and mind it comes true..I have seen it...I think they bear the mental strength to excite the wrong doers nerve..

but these do not work now, cause disciples have gotten smarter now!

hehehehehe Veryyy true!!!!!!😉😛😉

Yaap 😆 we never care about our teacher's curses, in fact we do things to ruin their moods, so that their curses come automatically 🤣 isn't it?

I am not Devi, I have a name and it's Panchaali okay😊

yep!! its really strange when one calls you Devi ask me when my Physics sir does so!!!! He calls me Deviji, mohatarma, Kanya, its really wierd

wha..whattt!! 😲🤣

Devi makes me feel like a stone idol ready to be worshipped by gang of mad people

EXACTLY!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

"Okay I got it. Can you tell me from which academy you have passed!"

"I think I have already said I am Parsuram Shishya

I was rolling on the floor... Seriously!!🤣🤣🤣

Karna wanted to ask many more like how the lights in this room can be so strong like sunlight even at the night! But he preferred to stay silent, as he has no idea what this Panchaali will answer. He started fearing her jokes🤣

Oops...😳😳

Do you have any wife?" Panchaali's dizziness died... hehehehehe!!!!!

Conspiracy could have been faster!... that's true!!!😊

But apart from this This part was excellent .. innovative n very reasonable and being a Science student I completely Agree!!!! 😊

Thank you 😃 I too am a science graduate 😃

If the divyastras are personalized nuclear weapons do you believe, the atoms of those weapons used to vibrate with the sound? That's why the warriors of those eras used to utter what the story books say divine mantras!"

"Well the mantras are truly divine but rather than that what you said is true. Yes the mantras vibrate the paramanu inside the astra and it goes from ground state to excited state, once the astra is ready an archer releases it. " Karna cannot help exclaiming, How can a lady from Kaliyug knows so much about Divyastras, when ladies at his era have rarely any interest about weapons!

Divyastrastas are personalized nuclear weapons!"

You know I feel the same but my Friends laugh at me when I say such things really embarrassing me!!!!!!!!😕😕😕

I am blessed in this case because my best sayanee is same type of weird 🤣 she believes in my theories 😆

And yes her grandfather was so sweet⭐️... just like my Grandmaa always so very supportive!!😊

Thankz 😊

Anyways... You have done a wonderful Job lots of Hugs to you Dear!🤗🤗🤗

Update soon

AND DON'T FORGET TO PM ME!!!!!!!!!!

Waiting

And yes... I got your pm regarding Devdasi... but Haven't finished all parts yet will comment on it after finishing all parts!!!!!!!😊

Okay will wait for it 😃

You are extremely talented... I hope will get to read a book authored by you to read soon!!!!😊

Thankz🤗 that's a dream come true dunno if ever it would happen or not 😔

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

LOve the Mytho Sci-Fi Story that too with karna in it.

Do send me a PM on ur next update 😊

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

Hey Panchaali Di... this is just so cool..!!! Was bored so i was searching for a good story to read... and found yours... This is just wonderful... I have never opened or showed much interest in any Karna FF but you are a lovely writer so i decided to try for once.. and splendid... this concept is so so cool!!!!

Thankz u are always so supportive and inspiring Bristi 😊

You are so versatile on one hand you wrote such a cool modern science fiction using Karna... and a girl called Panchaali who is so modern..and showing such lovely bonding..

Or other hand u write wonderful one shots.. the Debdasi stories are so different from this!!!

yup my imagination don't have any specific genre, it travels from one spectrum to another 😆 I m kind of crazy 😆

Anyways, just read you are planning a nivel on this... great!!!

Yup that I m planning, but dunno when I will manage to complete, coz not getting any time to think and write my own pieces as my new job is hectic...

You are Bangali na..from Kolkata?

Yup 😳

If you write such a book... I will definitely buy it. I have never bought any book on Karna your one would be my first!!

Great 😃but I have no idea when I will complete it 😭

Your idea is so interesting that I cant help reading... great work Panchaali Di.. please dont quit the idea of writing this story as a novel...

I m not quitting..I never want to...😊

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

this is one awesome ff..

Thankz 😃
hats off Payal...

Well my another name actually spells PAYEL 😳

i'm like rofling over question which academy you came from
Parashuram shishya 🤣

and the last line of chapter 2.. conspiracies would have been faster...
awesome work... looking forward for more.. 🤣

Thank you 🤗 but as I m looking forward to make it a novel may be I won't continue it here anymore...

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

wat?? thts ghor anyay..

you wont let us have the fun???? 😔

Originally posted by: panchaali

what ghor anyay? I don't understand really Devrani Ji 😔