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Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

you not continueing it here .

i like the way you write this ff..
devi n kanya typical dwaparyug words blended in well with modern cell phone language..

you have to update here..

Originally posted by: panchaali

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

That's wonderful!!!! Take your time.. And write it as a book :) Good books always takes time to build up..

@Krishnaa, I don't think Panchaali di should continue here at all. It has element of a book, I think taking time and writing as a book will be much better. :):)
In IF hardly people notice your work.

All the best Panchaali Di..

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

I've been thinking why you have not updated next part yet.

This story has the potential to be developed as an interesting novel.⭐️ Except a handful people, who will read this on IF? You will get more recognition and appreciations outside.
I know how difficult it is to find the right words for our ideas and regulate the right flow of a story. I can wait for this one. Go ahead.👏.

PS- have your OS on Dury been published? If I'm not wrong, I remember you saying that you had given it someone to publish.

Originally posted by: riti4u

Why have u deleted this?

hi panchaali di, bumped on this thread unknowingly, but chapters are already removed😔

a science fiction, it seems interesting through comments itself,.😊 You are planning novel on this, thats great. All the best for your book.😃

Originally posted by: patralekha24

hi panchaali di, bumped on this thread unknowingly, but chapters are already removed😔

a science fiction, it seems interesting through comments itself,.😊 You are planning novel on this, thats great. All the best for your book.😃