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Originally posted by: Krittz

I understand your state of melancholy, Sautan dearie. I am going through the same after all. 😭

But you must write if only to lift this veil of melancholy. If its funny then its even better. Think about it this way, our beloved Arya won't want us to unhappy. He won't want us to lose our laughter, I am quite sure of that. 😳

I know I know I'll try re but its not easy not to lament for him 😭 I smile then sorrow comes out of nowhere but yes I'll try to write

Btw, what 'experiments' are you talking about? They sound quite dirty to my ears ☺️ 😆

Isss na na its not dirty she will do some scientific experiment doctor Panchaali is a science graduate geek 😆

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

Lovely update Panchaali.. I mean Dr Panchaali. 😆

Thankz, I always wanted to be a scientists but ended up becoming a business writer 😕and IF FF writer😆

Funny and witty.. Looks like you have Harry and Pratt to the melee. Is Pratt gonna fight with Karna ?

no idea fast few chapters are concentrated on Karna and Doctor Panchaali's convo, haven't thought much about Karna Pratt interactions yet.

So far I thought Panchaali is only a name and you are fantasizing but with introduction of these new characters, I am not quite sure.. Is it going POI way ?😆

No way its gonna be POI. There Draupadi quite similar to MB Drau (except few parts of course)...😉

This Panchaali is scientist, independent, intelligent and she knows Mahabharat, so before people try to make her Draupadi she will make her way to stay just a common lady (which she is).
But yes situations will arise which will make her more than just a common lady😊
Loved your take on Divyastra. 👍🏼

Thankz😃, means I finally managed to do someting with my degree in science 😆
Pls update soon.

I will try buddy 😃

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter

Pachuuu .. have Biggest HUG from me

🤗

if I quote the best parts I must quote the whole update .. I mean it is amazing .. mind-blowing .. awesome .. brilliant

this is what you are .. Brilliant wit and smart sarcasm

hey bhagwan tum ne pike ke rakha hain kya, itni tarif to ur sautan!! 😉😃😆🤗

just bang on lines, hilarious punch lines .. right on preciseness of lines

you are a natural writer dear

thankz, but I m very lazy you know (though not as lazy as you) 😆

I am 🤣 continuously

Karna wanted to ask many more like how the lights in this room can be so strong like sunlight even at the night! But he preferred to stay silent, as he has no idea what this Panchaali will answer. He started fearing her jokes.

poor baby😆

but u know I have turned serious and emotional after reading ur OS, this phrase is reminding me yes he was poor as a babay when just born 😭

"Okay I got it. Can you tell me from which academy you have passed!"

"I think I have already said I am Parsuram Shishya."🤓😆

"This actor might have failed lots of time in his academy and chose the acting profession."🤣🤣🤣

"wait a minute! does it mean you too are a scientist like me whose mind is lost in myths and science behind it!" she put a wide grin.

"I told you Devi I am a warrior!"

"Uff again he lost into an epic drama character!"😆

And that's why you wanted me to date your super rich super geek and super freak friend Pratt?😉😆

"Wow that device is wonder of Kaliyug, men of our era if ever could have found out that thing...

"Conspiracy could have been faster!" Panchaali ended Karna's incomplete sentence.👍🏼👏👏👏

Thankz for quoting these lines 😃 now it feels like the story is not that nonsense as I thought it would turn😃

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter

Apart from the fun Panchu .. This part was excellent .. innovative n very reasonable .. Hats Off to your ideas .. Absolutely BRILLIANT

"If the divyastras are personalized nuclear weapons do you believe, the atoms of those weapons used to vibrate with the sound? That's why the warriors of those eras used to utter what the story books say divine mantras!"

"Well the mantras are truly divine but rather than that what you said is true. Yes the mantras vibrate the paramanu inside the astra and it goes from ground state to excited state, once the astra is ready an archer releases it. " Karna cannot help exclaiming, How can a lady from Kaliyug knows so much about Divyastras, when ladies at his era have rarely any interest about weapons!

Originally posted by: panchaali

<font color="#FF0000">and thank you fro ur kind comment dear😊</font>

<font color="#FF0000">sorry for not replying earlier</font>

<font color="#FF0000">you know na how upset we all are😭</font>

Originally posted by: Simantini_M

its my pleasure dear reading such beautiful piece...n yes cvs jst ruined our grt hero's glory n death sequencs both...im jst nw frustrated with this starbharat...its kinda feel better reading these os ...