Mad(ly) in Love - An ArHi OS (See Page 6, 10 for news on series!) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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May you never lose your creativity with these two !! ( I hope you share more of these OS's too) You nailed the dynamics of their relationship on so many aspects and allow readers to visualize this scene playing out... right up until the end I was guessing as to what he could have done...

The cutest line was Khushi telling him to sleep and continue the fight in the morning... while he may have been clueless as to his crime, Arnav certainly knows his wife well...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...havn't read something so beautiful, so adorable since quite some time...i could actually visualise d whole scene..really d dialogues were just spot on...khushi's muttering n arnav trying to pacify an angry khushi was a treat to watch..thanks for d update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dat z wAt we wud have seen dat arnav nd khushi...wud be like after 2 years of marrige...

well written ..u got d emotions rite...lovd it...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tht was beautiful...
khushi was soo soo khushi... n arnav was just arnav :) :)

i mean absolutely in character... both of them... sthg soo simple.. turned soo beautiful :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant one-shot..well written..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww, that is beautiful .. put a big smile on my face ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww so cute :)
I could visualise it happening right here. Loved how Arnav admired his wife and Khushi in full fighting mode.. but 'ab subah ladenge, theek hai??' so sweet!
It felt like you reverted back to your old style or I don't know may be because of the genre.. As always it was a pleasure to read this :)
Thank you for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely loved it. Thank you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
😃
Me loves all the giggling, squirming, playfulness wala love!!
This was very cute...esp loved that even though Khushi was all gussa, all Arnav could do was reach out, hug, kiss and thereby he totally called her bluff...

Very well written, enjoyed reading the vivd descriptions of how Arnav assimilates each and every little thing about Khushi...

Thanks for the pm!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it...it was really cute... pagal khushi n amused arnav ❤️

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