SwaRon FF:Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye *Last Chp@110* - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Best Friend Shini,
This FF was absolutely rocking. Your writing style, words, everything. And the best part is Sharon's disbelief in love. Swayam will enter her heart and sweep her off her feet!!

Overall amazing, Chitra and Shini!!



Keep writing!!


Love from your new friend
Sharon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updates.
Swayam falling for Sharon.

The dance ^_^

Update soon!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Swayam will make Sharon Fall in Luv with Him...
Chalo Swayam accept kr liya h ki He luvs Sharon...Tb koi prblm hi nai h...
As he is a Lover Boy...Hope Sharon ko v jald hi realise ho jaye...
Thanx fr pm...Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing updates
I m just falling in love with this ss
Every update is so beautifully written
Swayam has finally understood his feelings
I know Sharon will let love enter her life soon
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry girls for late comment :/ *holds ears*

Coming to the update- Fabulous! 👏
The Sunrise part was :O. Swayam really said that..Poor Sharon was left speechless :P
Beautiful..
God the Shekawat family are such a bunch of nautankis..😆
Especially the Dad.. :P :P
Superb update..eager for the next one..

A Well Wisher of the two of you
Nishi. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Guys
Beautiful one to wrote sunrise n SwaRon convo..As a character glad to read that sharon is now opening her heart a bit i guess..At swayam side,his restlessness n his curiosity very well penned..And in between u guys put few emotional scenes are worth to read n get interest..All i can say,the sunrise part was touchy,i loved it.I am getting interest in this FF..But again ur update was short,i mean its like ek line padhte hi update kahatam..I dont know guys but if possible do increase ur update size..genuine request..

Thanx for the PM











Prateek
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohk Guys who wants an update?I am in a mood of giving one 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys thank you for your likes and comments for the previous chapter they are really encouraging.
we are here with the next chapter hope you like this chapter too..

CHAPTER#13

banner credit goes to -Koeli_Appy- thank u soo much

Sharon was standing in the balcony enjoying the first rain of the season when she saw Swayam playing basket ball with Rey in the in the BB Court.His white shirt which went transparent due to getting wet.His silky wet hair giving him a sexy look. . .His enthusiam every time he did a basket beating Rey. . .and after that his dance. . .He was so child like.Sharon smiled looking at him.From the time he has entered her life. . . Her life has taken a change for good.Swayam has helped her in so many ways. . .she now feels she have a family. . .Its only because of Swayam that today she can feel that she has someone like Swayam's mom and Dad who resembles to her mom and dad.A void which she felt in all these years,all the pain which she suffered being alone at every instance was now starting to get replaced with a feeling of a bit care. . .Swayam was someone special to her. . .Special!
"Swayam is special to me?Why?In which sense?What did he meant in the morning that its time to break the barriers?"She mumbled to herself.
"Ye toh tum baad me soch lena. . ."
Sharon turned surprised to find Swayam standing on the door of her room.She looked in the BB court and saw Rey enjoying rain with Taani in the BB court.
"Actually. . .Its not like that. . .Actually. . .''Sharon fumbled.
Swayam held her hand leaving Sharon surprised.
"Sharon lets go and enjoy the rain. . ."He said staring straight in her eyes.
"No Swayam. . .I will get Viral."
"You have already missed a lot of rains in your life in this fear. . .Its high time that you step out.You are a dancer right?A Dancer can either become Swan on stage or the laughing stock but in fear of being a laughing stock he does not stops dancing.Does he?Lets go."Swayam said adamant depicting a whole new meaning to her about herself.
Sharon looked in his eyes and she just couldn't decipher the emotions his eyes held.Either it was too intense for her or maybe she was too shallow for reading them.
Sharon walked out with Swayam and Let that heavy downpour. . .those drops of rain touch her face soaking her inner self in a beautifully different manner taking her in a different world.She smilled and closed her eyes.Swayam was right she has really missed a lot in her life.She opened her eyes and looked for Swayam who was admiring her from a distance.
"Swayam. . ."
"Sharon. . ."
He came close to her and stood in front of her.Both were drenched in rain.Suddenly a lightening broke and Sharon shuddered and looked upwards in surprise and they both laughed.She opened her arms absorbing the tiny drops touching her face loving her soul.
"Swayam you were right.This is so good."Sharon said smiling widely in excitement.
Swayam was extremely happy to see her like this. . .unguarded,free,full of life. . .He loved to see that lil girl in her whom she has suppressed in a corner of a heart due to the ruthlessness of the world.
Splash!!!Swayam splashed some water on her and Sharon opened her eyes in wide amazement.
"Hawww Swayam. . .Wait"Sharon ran behind Swayam chasing him for a sweet revenge.
Swayam was running to save himself and Sharon was trying to catch him .Suddenly she saw a block behind him. . .Swayam.was running towards it in reverse.. . .She rushed towards him to prevent him falling on it and pulled him towards herself making him crash in her arms resulting in a hug.
Both were standing in delightful rain in each other's arms.Rains falling on them making their heart flutter.Swayam was shocked for the monent while Sharon's heart was feeling something alien which she has never experinced.She wanted the whole world to stop then and there.Swayam's cold body and hot breath together was making her feel dizzy.She pulled him apart.
"Are you fine?That block. . .You could have fall"Sharon said pointing at the block without meeting his eyes.
"Thank you so much Sharon"Swayam replied with gratitude looking at her and flashed a smile to free her from the moment's confusion.
Rey and Taani came out of the BB court and joined them.Rey looked at them and eyed Swayam.Swayam returned a smirk and then started the fun. . .playing in the rain,Splashing the water,Dancing in the rain with each other.
Smriti called out her children and they all ran seeing the garma garam pakodas in the plate and had fun chatting and eating whole afternoon.
IN THE NIGHT
Sharon was sitting in her bedroom reading a book when she heard a knock on her door.
"Come In"It was Swayam.
"Coffee?"Sharon looked and him with a confused expression.
"Its late in the night"Sharon said.
"I know.. .Actuually the thing is Rey and I were watching a horror movie and now he is slept and I m feeling scared."Swayam said in embarrassment and Sharon after a ten second of blank expression broke into laughter.
Swayam looked at her and even in that situation admired her laugh.
"O. .ok!Now I get it You are scared of some imaginary ghost and you want me accompany you. And divert your mind"Sharon said controlling her laugh somehow.
''Yes. . ."Swayam looked down.
Sharon looked at her child like friend.He was a Business Tycoon afraid of Ghosts from movies.She chuckled mentally at his situation and shaked her head at his innocence.
''So we are leaving tomorrow. . .Gosh the weekend is over."Swayam said taking a sip of coffee.
"Oh yeah. . .I didn't even realize that. . .How I wish I could spend some more time with Uncle Aunty Rey and. . ."
And?Swayam asked fixing his gaze on him.
''And Taani. . . Swayam's face fell not getting to hear his name.
''And you too. . ."Sharon said looking at him smiling lightly.
Swayam looked at her and smiled.
"Thank You Swayam. . .Thank you so much for every. . ."
Swayam kept his fnger on her mouth and said "No Thank Yous!I don't like them. . . Not from you. . ."
"Swayam Why are you. . ."Sharon asked softly when Swayam said cutting her in between.
"Think for yourself"Swayam said making Sharon go breathless for a moment.
Swayam and Sharon kept looking at each other forgetting the track of time in the mystic night. . .Which was changing a lot between them FOREVER for better.


P.S.Do read the note below 😊

love
chitra and shini
Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE


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Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res for the first
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Okay this is the best well yes the best among all the parts because drenched SwaRon, Basket ball playing ReYam, Hug from SwaRon in the rain and their chase <3
Well Swayam is scared of horror movies well I am too xD
It's perfect in everything and sweet lovely and emotionful
Well I hope sharon realises this alien feeling and it's called LOVE I HOpE SHE REALISES!
I guess Taani should help her as Rey helped Swayam :)
Great update and do it soon
Thanks
Edited by Khizar_SWARON - 11 years ago

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