SwaRon FF:Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye *Last Chp@110*

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

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Unres,
The way their feelings are been evolved and portrayed as though they themselves are completely unaware of it.. is marvelous..

Though Swayam is recognizing his feelings.. and so is a positive indication..

loved it.

The boyish talks of reyam were making me like "what"

the start...omg, I thought they were talking about a girl.

par kya socha, aur kya nikla.

It was a jeep!!!sorry, their darling

lol

u guys are amazing but ur writing skills are so wonderful making me held my hopes higher along every update...

Mindblowing chappy...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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editing later

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Nikki🤗

u commented on all our chp

i loved all of them

thank u soo much dea

ua such an swt heart

love

shini

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Comment on Chapter eleven.

You guys have penned the inner confusion of Swayam greatly...

It's totally appreciable...

The football part was funny...kaun better hai uss par debate kar rahe hai.

poor Swayam...

Rey Samajh gaya and made swayam realise his feelings towards Sharon.

Awesome.

Atlast, Hume Swayam ka dance sequence mil gaya.

Wohooo

His dance clearly portrayed his confusion and turmoil between mind and heart.

I enjoyed every bit of it.

Hope Sharon usse dance karte hue dekh le...

Continue soonish,

Waiting for knowing what's stored next.

And the last legendary line...

Ufff, Mar daala...

Atlast he realised that he's in love with Sharon.

Loved it

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: shalomshini
Nikki🤗
u commented on all our chp
i loved all of them
thank u soo much dea
ua such an swt heart

love
shini

Hehehehehe...

Didis...

Comment toh bante hai😉

And don't forget to pm me.

Pahele main...

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Hey guys here we are back with another chapter hope you people like it... and thank you soo much for your likes and comments on the chapter 11.. do give your views on this chapter too...

CHAPTER#12

banner credit goes to -Koeli_Appy- thank u soo much

Swayam couldn't sleep the whole night .The sudden realization that he was badly attracted to Sharon didn't let him sleep at all.He was sitting on the swing when he heard some footsteps. . .He turned behind to see Sharon coming to him.
"You up?So early?"Sharon said with surprise.
"Yeah. . .neend jo ud gayi hai"Swayam mumbled.
"What?"
"Nothing.Sharon Its just 4.30 A.M.and nearby there is a hill . .Sunrise really looks beautiful there.Would you like to see?"
"Really?yeah sure. . ."
"Fine then lets go. ."
Both of them cycled the distance between their house and hill. . .The sun was yet to rise. . .Both of them walked over to the top of the hill. . .Swayam and Sharon sat there facing the east sitting in silence just with themselves. . .the dawn broke after afew minutes. . .a mixture of yellow and orange an the horizon beneath a dark neon blue ocean of night that had begun to evaporate. . .Against that tri-coloured rainbow sky trees,powerlines and roofs of houses were looking like mere shadows. . .Sharon and Swayam were amazed to see the beauty of the morning.Sharon saw sunrise for the first time and was spellbounded by the sheer beauty it potrayed.
"Beautiful"Sharon uttered.
"Scenic,Isn't it?"Swayam said smiling widely looking at Sharon.
"Yes. . .its so so. . .so . . ."Sharon couldn't find words to praise this stunning form of nature

"Picturesque,Right"Swayam tried to give a voice to her feelings.Sharon nodded smiling widely.
Both of them sat in silence absorbing the moment. . .For Swayam it was his morning. . .It was their moment.This feeling inside him which was craving for Sharon was like a sweet torture. . .He looked at Sharon.She was sitting there letting the beauty in of the nature with all her heart. . .
"Do you belive in Love?"Swayam asked suddenly after a long silence.
"Love?Suddenly this question???Sharon said surprisingly.
"Just like that. . .Come on Sharon tell na"
"Umm. . .I Don't know Swayam I don't think love exsists in the world anymore!I feel there is nothing that lasts forever. . .We have to let go off everything we love sooner or later. . .Sometimes its us who push it outside the door and sometimes its destiny who takes it away from us.I hope I never ever fall in love with anybody"
"And what if you do?"Swayam asked staring in Sharon's eyes.
Sharon was taken aback by his question and moreover because of the intensity his eyes were reflecting.Her heart skipped a beat for a moment. . .But then she gathered herself and stared right back in Swayam's eyes with a hint of confidence in his voice.
"Even If I do I will never let anyone in.My heart is barricade for One thing and that is Love. . .No one is allowed to enter in my heart"
"Then maybe its time to break those barriers"
"I wont. . .never"
"You only said na nothing lasts forever. . ."
"Swayam . . ."
Swayam moved closer to her and whispered in his ears "Maybe you are already loosing your heart and you just haven't realized it. . ."
Sharon's heartbeat raised with the proximity they were sharing and Swayam's words were taking a toll over her.She shied away her eyes from him and Swayam smirked enjoying her reaction.He sat back in his place normally as if nothing has happened.
"Sharon See The Sun has emerged from the east with new hopes,new challanges,new lives and new emotions. . .Its a beautiful morning"Swayam said looking toward Sun and Sharon kept staring at him trying to make connection with his words and actions.
AT HOME
Sharon was sitting with Rishi and Taani chatting with them. . .She loved to spend time with Swayam's parents. . .She laughed at every joke of Rishi and they both were one team when it came to teasing and embarrsing Taani.They were doing the same when she saw Smriti making breakfast in the kitchen alone.She went upto her.
Aunty,Can I help?"
"No Beta,Its fine I Will do it.You go and sit with Taani."
"No aunty please."Sharon insisted.
"Acha ok,Whisk those eggs then"
"Yeah. . .sure."Sharon started doing it excitedly.
"Sharon,Do you and Swayam went anywhere in the morning?I mean I couldn't find both of you anywhere."
"OH yes aunty we. . .we went to the hill to watch the sunrise. . ."Sharon said getting im deep thought.
"What happened Sharon?"Is there anything bothering you?"Swayam's mom asked concerned.
"Nahi Aunty. . .There is nothing like that"
"Sharon you are just like my Daughter. . .I don't differentiate between you and Taani. . .Treat me as your mother. . .I know I cant be your mother but You can share anything with me.If you ever feel like talking to your mother. . .Come to me.Happy or Sad,doesn't matter!Okay?"
Sharon looked at Smriti with wet eyes and nodded smilingly.
"Awww mera bacha"Smriti said and engulfed Sharon in a hug.
"Hume toh kabhi aise pyaar nahi karti"Swayam and Taani said grumpily.
"Oh God!Acha come my nautanki kids!"Smriti said opening her arms.
Swayam and Tanni jumped to their mother and she hugged all three of her kids.
"Only I am unfortunate!I never get a hug."Rishi's voice came from behind.
Swayam,Taani and Sharon all looked at Smriti who was crimpson red by then and they all laughed seeing both their parents reaction.
Mornings were really beautiful in the Shekhawat farmhouse with laughters and happiness filling the place.

Love

chitra and shini

NOTE-Hopefully you enjoyed reading this update.Thank you so much for that wonderful response for previous chapter and thanks for appreciating Swayam's dance. . .Shini had been damn impatient to read your reactions. . .Hopefully you all will continue the support :)

p.s do see the note below

Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago

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@_shona_PMs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

People who want PMs for this ff and our future works kindly buddy this account.We will be sending pms from this account for our works.

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Lucky meee,

Matlab kal story mili aur aaj update.

Wow...

Pahele toh Unres...me first...Yippee

Cutting the crap.

Ek aur bar... super cool, Mindblowing chappy,

Yeh sunrise waala part toh...*fainted*

The time and atmosphere during sunrise is described very nicely.

Swayam's dialogues were like a cherry on the cake. And the way he talked to Sharon about love matter...wonderful.

The intimidating scene was created...Magical.

Sharon had mixed up with Swayam's family was sweet...

Hume swaron part dene ke liye shukariya...

i loved it.

Muahhh

⭐️

Thanks for sending the pm.

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Awesome update👏

n swayam's dialogue mindblowing😃

loved it👍🏼

n shini dekhna iss baar bohat sare likes milege😊

so upset mat hona😊

n update d next part soon😊

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#250

aswom update...

just love it want to see some taani and swayam bonding...

do update soon

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