''THE MANY'' kriyaansh one shot series (new os updated 7-10-2014) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
amazing
keep it up
so cute & sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
dat was sooo cute...

earning the teddy bear...

n dn the baking...

d kisss...

ausome...

keep writing...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
wow amazing.
it was so cute and romantic.
i loved it so very much.
keep writing.
and let me enjoy your wonderful works
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
It is really a cute os..
loved it...
kriyaansh were too sweet..
Awesome os...
thanx for pm...
waiting for some more os by you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Jealous Rey: Oh yes...
I can be obsessive, over-protective, and a variety of other things. But I have never remembered wanting to whack someone over the head with my hand this badly before. Not even Shivam. I was seething. Furious. I wanted to jump up and roundhouse kick the tall black head boy with light brown eyes standing before me.
Why? Why? Because, this guy who I wanted to injure so badly, was abhishek...
kriya's date.
Yes, you heard me right. Date.
The evening's previous conversation ran through my head in a blur.
~*~FLASHBACK~*~
Ding! Dong! Went the doorbell loudly. Kriya had hopped off of the couch in a hurry, flying over to the big, silver door. "I shall get it!" she yelled in her pretty voice. "It is for me!" she flung the door open and there he stood, dark jeans, blue t-shirt, jet black hair and pale brown eyes.
He was about kriya's height. "abhi!" she exclaimed and hugged him.
"Hey kriya." He responded smiling a half smile, showing a row of white teeth. She had by this time stopped hugging him and he looked at his watch. "Oh, we had better get going."
I slowly approached the door, not liking this guy very much, although I knew nothing about him. "Uh, kriya?" I asked running a hand through my jet-black hair. "Who is this guy?" her beautiful hazel eyes grew wide and she shook her hair, her pretty honey brown hair drifting around her.
"Oh god! I have been most rude! Abhi, these is Rey, my best friends the one who took my care when i got injury in my left leg . And Rey, this is Abhishek, and tonight we will be partaking in the ritual of a date!" I stared. My feet were rooted to the ground. Date?
~*~FLASHBACK~*~
"Well, let's go babygirl." Said abhishek taking hold of kriya's hand. I think I was making him uncomfortable due to the fact that I had still not moved. They began to walk out of the room, Abhi exiting first, kriya following closely behind.
No. I can't let this happen. I mean... only because I... you know... am worried about kriya. Suddenly, an idea sprang into my head. "Wait... kriya! I don't think you remembered to feed tammy(kriyas pet ), and I don't know what he eats... at all." Her face suddenly got a worried look on it, showing on her perfect features.
"Oh ! Rey you are right! How could I have been so careless? I shall return soon abhi, but Rey, come with me, I must show you where the food of tammy is located!" she grabbed my hand and dragged me out of the room, pulling me quickly through the halls and into my guestroom. She sat me down on the bed, and floated over to her closet, pulling out a bucket of strange pink things. "This..." she said, sitting down next to me, dropping the bucket at my feet. "Is what tammy eats." I peered into the large black bucket and eyed the substance suspiciously. "I assure you rey, it will not do 'the biting'."
I couldn't help it. She was just so cute. I laughed out loud, clutching my stomach. She stared at me, crossing her arms. "Is this your way of doing 'the mocking'?" she asked, obviously a bit pissed off. I really hated it when she was mad at me.
"No kriya, I was just wondering where you got that expression from." I said, slowing my laughter. She uncrossed her arms and half smiled at me. She seemed to have forgotten all about date with abhi. So far so good.
She smiled brightly, her full, pretty lips parting to show her sparkling white teeth. I was compelled. She was reeling me in, although I don't think she was trying to. Slowly, I edged closer to her, and began to lean in, bringing my face to hers. Our noses were touching, and she sat still, waiting.
I slowly realized what I was about to do, and almost pulled away, until a sudden realization struck me. She wasn't stopping me. So, I smiled coyly and pressed my lips to hers. She 'eeped' in surprise, never believing I would actually kiss her, but her eyes then slid closed and she slipped her tongue into my mouth. I was a bit surprised, but I continued to deepen the kiss, stroking her beautiful long hair, and holding her as tight as possible with the arm I had slipped around her waist. She tasted wonderful, like, peppermint and strawberries. I inhaled her scent as her arms snaked around me neck, tangling in my hair, and she pulled away.
"I believe I should tell abhi that the date is off..." she whispered, smiling slightly. I laughed, and kissed her again, even sweeter than the last time, glad that I had gotten jealous...I feel like stupid while re-writting the ending..i have gotta admit , typing out a romantic one shot is a right tricky thing during eco lectures...
Anyway, hopefully this put a smile on your face, as well.
if it did u know guys how to tell me
Regard;
shehriz...

Edited by shehriz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Cute os
Reyngetting jealous
N jealosy make them both couple
That was really cute convo between them
Rey making weired expression while seeing tammys food
That was so soo sooo cutyyy cutyyy
Love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
i don't want to say anything about your story or your way of writing
it's awesome
i read your dest steaaler and i must admit
it IS one of THE BEST works i hve ever read
though i found it's last scene a bit abrupt
but i think it is the best possible end one can give to the story

i'm tooo very happy to finally
nose out someone who actually says "ANYWAY" not "ANYWAYS"



LOVE
RIA
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awww...
Dis is surly a cute os.. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Loved the one shot...
I always love jealous way...this was too good!
He managed to pull off a silly reason to stop her and then they had their personal date😉
Bechara Abhi wait karte karte tak gaya hoga😆
Eco lectures mein kiss😲🤣
Gr8 work!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Awesome os
Kriyaansh were too cute

Jealousy helped Rey realising his feelings
And they kissed

Thanks for pm

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