''THE MANY'' kriyaansh one shot series (new os updated 7-10-2014) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
ausome...it was lovely...

Rey nervous to confess...

loved the confession...

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~Way to earn teddy~Her nose wrinkled adorably, and she stuck out her tongue. He smirked and proceeded to stick his tongue out at her too. It was a tad childish of the two youths to be engaged in such an activity but neither could help being drawn into the innocent allure of the game. She narrowed her eyes and crossed her arms definatly. Rey arched a brow and gave an arrogant sigh. Giving an indignant little squeak she lunged for the stuffed bear. Rey laughed and jumped out of the way, keeping the bear out of reach. Kriya left out a sigh.
"Rey... you... you... meanie," she finished lamely. Rey snorted and walked pompously down the hall, idly twirling the fluffy bear bo-staff style. Kriya gave a huff of distaste and run after him. "Will you not just give me the teddy?" she inquired, pleadingly. Rey stopped
"What makes you so sure I bought this for you anyhow?" he replied slyly. Kriya looked skeptical.
"There is no one else in this mansion who is fond of the teddies... and I doubt you keep any yourself," she smirked. Rey laughed again. He always had a reason to laugh when he was with kriya... or smile, or... just... be happy. He snapped out of his musings.
"You're right, but... I'm not going to give it to you... until..." he stopped. He wasn't exactly sure why he'd gotten her a random gift, nor was he sure of why he was refusing to give it to her. Maybe he just liked how cute she looked when she wanted something.
"Until what?" she pouted.
"Until... you... uh, earn it!" he gave her a lop-sided grin and began to walk off again, still holding the obnoxiously fluffy bear. Kriya scowled.
"And in what way do wish for me to do the earning of the bear?" she inquired, sending the fuzzy toy a longing glance. Rey paused. Well, there were plenty of things he would have liked to ask her for, most of which were not exactly appropriate between two friends.
"I don't know yet. I guess you'll just have to wait until later and see if you earned it," he smiled. Kriya narrowed her entrancing eyes.
"Fine..." she sighed reluctantly. Kriya retreated, allowing Rey to go off on his own. She entered her room and sat lightly at her vanity, running a brush absently through her honey brown hair locks. Rey could be so difficult. She shook her head but a fond smile made its way onto her beautiful features. Suddenly, an idea hit her full force and she sprung out of her room, giggling with delight.
Rey made his way to his own room and sat the teddy bear on his dresser. He flopped onto the bed, staring at the bear curiously. Again the question tugged at him. Why had he gotten her a gift anyways? It wasn't a special occasion or anything... then again, he tended to do that a lot with kriya; almost every time he went to the store he'd come back with some little treasure for batcutter. He couldn't help it. The brilliant rapture displayed on her face whenever he made a small gesture was infectious. Rey groaned and beat his head on one of his pillows. He had such a soft spot for the girl it wasn't even funny... well... it was funny to nil and vickey, who pestered him to no end about his feelings.
Of course those village incidents would usually lead to him becoming irritated, kriya getting worried and asking nil and vickey to stop the "meanness", and... that would just give them more reasons to harass their dejected leader later on. The worst part of it all was the fact kriya was oblivious to what the boys were teasing him about anyways. Rey let out another groan. At least sharon didn't make fun of him. He stared blankly at the ceiling. A small cry of pain snapped him out of his trance. He darted out of his room, a frown plastered on his features as he rushed down the hall. It had sounded like kriya. He slid into the kitchen to find kriya looking forlornly at a tray of charred cookies, sucking on her finger.
"Did you burn yourself, kriya?" he asked, concerned. Kriya nodded, her attention still directed at the crisp remains of her cookies. Rey quickly got a piece of ice, wrapped it in a paper towel and moved over to kriya. Extracting the burnt finger gently from her mouth he pressed the ice against it. Only a mild burn. Kriya squeaked at the shocking cold of the ice. "I thought we agreed you wouldn't bake on your own?" he asked, his tone highly reminiscent of a scolding mother. Kriya lowered her eyes shamefully,
She sighed and looked up at him, "I wished to earn the bear... but I believe I have un-earned it more... have I not?" her shoulders slumped and Rey had to stifle a bout of affectionate laughter.
"So that's what it's about..." he smiled, hoping his feelings for her weren't too obvious. She nodded and a tear made its way down her cheek. She was sincerely depressed about the whole situation. Rey immediately hastened to comfort her, and did so by attacking her ribs. Her eyes popped wide and she did her best to muffle the giggles that were just dying to come out. She wasn't able to contain it for very long and she was soon clutching her sides, more tears streaming down her face... but these were shed for a most different reason.
"Rey-Reyansh, p-please stop!" she choked out between laughs.
"Never!" Rey stated stubbornly, a boyish smile lighting his usually stoic face. The struggle continued, Rey with the strong upper hand until finally, they both collapsed to the floor. Kriya was giggling madly and The prince charming was able to spare a few sincere chuckles. After a moment of catching her breath, kriya turned to lie on her back. Rey found himself entranced by the joyful glow that brightened her face, her eyes shining. Her hair was flung wildly about her, the brown strands haphazardly gracing the kitchen tile.
He became aware of their position and a splash of crimson stained his cheeks as he held himself barely above a potentially awkward situation. He supported himself up over her, his arms on either side of her face, and their legs were in a wild tangle.kriya seemed to become conscious of the situation at hand as well, and her already flushed cheeks took on a distinctly golden pink hue. Rey found himself laughing again, while rapidly closing the distance between their lips.
Kriya's eyes had grown considerably wider as the nave girl was not that nave as to be unaware of what was going on. At the last moment, the logical side of Rey's brain kicked back in and scolded him harshly. His face displayed his doubt and kriya's own features flashed with something mischief to the boy. She took it upon herself to complete the current activity and with a tiny lift of her head, brought their lips together. Rey's eyes widened to match kriya's before they closed and a sigh of contentment escaped him. His hands slipped beneath her light body and encircled her, drawing them even closer together, while kriya's slim fingers entwined themselves in Rey's unruly, ebony locks. Finally parting the tenderly passionate kiss for lack of oxygen, an oddly dazed look graced the young man's face. Kriya's eyes remained half closed and she seemed unaware their lips had parted.
"kriya," he murmured.
"Hmm?"
"You earned your teddy bear," he breathed. Kriya's face became a tad confused.
"What teddy bear?" she asked with an innocent smile. Rey smirked and shook his head, leaning in for yet another kiss.
Author's Note: This one shot was just a random thought and i know it doesn't make any sense! I hope you all enjoyed, it's a bit odd, Well, I would love it if you dropped me a review!
Love,
shehriz..
Edited by shehriz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
this is wonderful...random shots r always amazing nd writers like u make it more amazing...
earning the teddy bear...the game was fun...
loved it totally...
not to forget...u hv amazing writing skills...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Now that was awesome
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it
Such amazing Oneshots written my such amazing writers like you make my day ^_^
The teddy earning game was fun and throughout while reading it I had a smile plastered on my face^_^

Keep writing
And update ur ff soon please . I've been waiting for it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: divyani.arsha

Now that was awesome

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it
Such amazing Oneshots written my such amazing writers like you make my day ^_^
The teddy earning game was fun and throughout while reading it I had a smile plastered on my face^_^

Keep writing
And update ur ff soon please . I've been waiting for it

Thanks divyani. As u say that my os made your day in the same way ur comment made my day. And ya i surely update next part of my ff soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Wow this was amazing...
The way u wrote it was just so adorable...
Loved the earning game...Kriya's innocence and the whole moment...beautifully written...
Gr8 job...loved reading it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesom...
luvd the oneshot...
it waz cuteee 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakura20

awesom...
luvd the oneshot...
it waz cuteee 😛

Thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
It was so cute
Rey brought teddy for kria
N doesnot give it to her
N ask her to earn it
That was so lovely
Boys teasing rey on name of kria n kria to know about it
Supab
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Wow.. it was awesome..😃
just loved it.. this is called how to earn a taddy bear..😉😆
& Kriya earned two of them..☺️
Lovely writing.. 👏
the way u described every emotion on their face so minutely.. mind blowing..😳
loved it totally..😃
Thanks for PM.😊

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