''THE MANY'' kriyaansh one shot series (new os updated 7-10-2014) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Wow that was perfect.
Loved it.
can't wait for more stories from you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
luvd d last two os...
3rd one was rely cute... 😛
last os was romantic...
awesom...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
ausome...loved it...

this was unexpected...

pehli hi meeting main kiss...

wah kyaa baat haii..

saving the girl from the goons...n reward main kiss...ausome...

Do write soon...next ones...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~How do I tell? ~


Swayam was trying to convince his best friend to confess his love for a certain girl.
"How do you tell someone that you love them?" asked Rey.
"Well" Swayam began, but was cut of by Rey. "Also how do you know they love you back?" added Rey.
"Will you let me finish and stop cutting me off?" said Swayam.
Rey started pacing around the room and was looking very nervous. "Continue" said Rey.
"Just tell her and don't be afraid right now you look ready to faint. "I would rather fight a dragon than tell the person I love how I feel," said Rey. "Do you want to be friends forever?" asked Swayam. "No" said Rey in a quiet voice.
"Then go tell her before some other guy does" ordered Swayam. Rey started walking when "Wait you can't go without the roses" yelled Swayam. "Thanks I'm losing my mind" Rey said and ran of. "What would you do without me?" whispered Swayam.
Rey went to kriya's house to look for her.. He looked for Kriya like felt an eternity to him. He spotted sharon Swayam's girlfriend and his best friend.
"sharon have you seen kriya?" asked Rey out of breath. "Why do you need her?" asked sharon. "I'm going to tell her how I feel," said Rey shyly. Sharon squealed she knew how Rey felt about Kriya, but never told. "She's in her room," said sharon.
Rey ran off to her room. He got to her room and was not ready to tell her. Then he saw a picture of Kriya and him laughing and reminded himself he had to do it. Kriya came in the room and was shocked to see Rey.
"I thought the dance fest was tomorrow," said Kriya. Rey swallowed hard and was turning pale. "It is I came to visit is it a crime" said Rey trying to sound casual. "I wouldn't know is it in Mumbai" asked kriya. Rey just shook his head.
"I was wondering if you wanted to go somewhere with me?" Rey tried to sound confident.
"Yeah sure lets go," said kriya trying to hide her excitement. Rey almost forgot the roses. "These are for you," said Rey. Kriya was blushing deep red and tried to hide it.
Then they went for a ride and stopped at the lake. Rey got of first and helped Kriya. There was a long silence.
"Kria are you interested in anyone in particular?" asked Rey. Kriya looked away and said "Yes". "Can you tell me who it is" asked Rey eager. "No, but I will describe him and you try to guess" said kriya. Rey just nodded his head.
"Well he is very nice and patient and gorgeous. Also he is very special and important in my life. I love him with all my heart I would give upeverything to be with him. I don't think he loves me back," said Kriya sadly.
Rey thought and figured it wasn't him. "How could not love you back that guy is obviously doesn't know what a girl he's letting go. That can cheer people with one of her smiles" yelled Rey and cursed at himself for not being the guy kriya wanted and for almost confessing his feelings.
He turned around "Wait don't leave me here you're my ride remember and it's you I love" kriya said quietly. "She loves me," Rey said to himself. "Yes I do I know you probably love some other girl" said kriya.
Rey walked up to kriya lifted her chin to meet his eyes. "You are theonly girl I will ever love," said Rey. "I love you," said kriya. "I love you too" said Rey. Rey grabbed her and kissed and put all his love into the kiss. They kissed until they needed air.
Then they heard a noise behind a bush. "It's about you guys got together" said sharon, Swayam behind her. " We are together now and forever," said Rey. Then they kissed again. Sharon just smiled and walked away leaving the couple giving their privacy...Pardon me guys for the short os.
i know this one is too clumsy and hold no meaning actually i did not want to end this way but arshas quiting news really affected me and i end up writing this
feel free to criticize but please let me know your honest reviews in comments

your regards;
shehriz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Res...
Unres...
It was lovely...loved Reyam in this!
Rey getting nervous to express his feelings was all portrayed well!
Wished Kriya had dragged a little more abt her guy just to make Rey some more jealous...
But the end was beautifully and Swaron were cute!

I know Arsha quitting does hurt but we can always keep KR alive through such writings...so keep writing more and we'd love to read it!
And Arsha are gonna move on and give us better reasons to smile😊
So cheer up and keep loving Arsha😊
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
all of them are awesome ^_^
pm me too please :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
luvd d os...
it was beautiful... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Wow loved it.
continue giving more stories.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
A short os..
But realy a cute one.. Liked it..
N about ArSha leaving.. Babez chill..
ArSha r leaving for their good future..
Why should dey stay in dat crap D3 n give does non-worthy peoples unecessary attention n popularity? Channel r just using them for dier trp dats it.. So its better they quit it n have a Qondersul future ahead..
So .. Be positve n n see d positive side :D ..
N next time i want long n meaning full full ON kriyaansh os ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
i finish read all your rest of the os together it sweet and romantic but wonderful os...
loved it

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