ARSHI TS - BELONGING TO YOU COMPLETED

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Awesome up date...
Thnx for the pm...

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

beautifully written ...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

khushi s feelings were so perfectly written and her monologue...

those lines and poem was perfect too...

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Arshirox97

@Arshirox97

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Beautiful!!!! No words can describe how wonderfully the journey of Khushi is described! Arnav has always been th sole possessor no doubt! I loved the poem in the end! So meaningful and serene!

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

I must say fantabulous.

Khushi's feelings, her love for Arnav was penned beautifully.

Even when there was so much animosity between them, Arnav's protectiveness was always there for her. Because in spite of so much loathe the love was there and eventually surmounted everything.

The poem is just superb.

Really arnav and Khsuhi's love is nonpareil, the most unique and epic what will encompass our heart forever.

Edited by sohara - 11 years ago

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

The last part of this TS is beautiful

Khushi has come to terms about her insecurities and hurt . She was simply suffering like a lost child , and Arnav did a right job by guiding her like a parent to the right path . All the lines of IPKKND brought the magic into the chapter .

The poem is well written

loved it