ARSHI TS - BELONGING TO YOU COMPLETED

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

"I have been all lost till you found me.Home is you,the space I longed for all my life,where all my demons and fears have been put to rest,where I can shout,cry,smile,sing,dance do whatever I feel like.I belong to you solely and wholly and our children we will never let them feel any void that we went through.We will not let anything touch our small world

LOVED THE UPDATE LOVED KHUSHI REALIZATION OF THEIR LOVE AND THE SMALL WORLD THAT BOTH HAVE AND THAT THEY DID NOT NEED ANY ONE ELSE LOVED HOS SHE FINALLY LET GO OF THE GHOST AND MOVED ON SO CUTE THAT SHE CAME AFTER HIM LOVED THE ENDING THANKS FOR AN AMAZING TS .

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

simply beautiful... ending could not b better than this one

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

That was superb story..
loved it <3

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Iru_Arshi

@Iru_Arshi

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

WHY WHY WHY did u have to end it 😭 it's so freakin beautiful jaan. ❤️❤️

Each and every word you have used to describe them are so beautiful.. dammit!

I'm glad that Khushi realized that she's not the sole owner of her sorrows or her happiness. Arnav has a right over them as much as his right over her. And nothing else matters when he's there right beside her being her strength. He has always been that. Even when she was oblivious to her own feelings it was his presence that gave her the courage to deal with her fears. And every time, not once has she cared about showing her vulnerability because her heart knew it was the right thing to do as she belonged only to him.

You have painted a perfect picture of their choti si duniya. Loved all the events you have penned down to show that. From Khushi's realisation, to the party, her cravings and his "unbelievable" and especially the last bit when Khushi is regretting for what she said. Love that she said how much he means to her.

I wish you had never finished this jaan. But as they say, all good things must come to an end.

LOVED the update! 🤗

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

its beautiful Anku... loved it so much...

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

This is one of the most beautiful piece of writing I've ever read

the way you portrayed every single emotion so perfectly is truly amazing Anku 👏

lovely chappy and a perfect ending Big D 😳

loved it to bits ❤️

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

That was beautiful...

They have love and understanding for each other and they support if they need each other...

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

wonderful update dear!

glad that finally khushi realized that she doesn't need to worry about these differences anymore coz she has her Arnavji now.he trully loves her more than anything else in the whole world.no matter what,they are always going to be there for each other.loved the way she asked him to bring jalebis for her.you've written their feelings and emotions so beautifully.

trully loved it.

thanks for the pm :)