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ghala

@ghala

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

hy aawesome start.plz continous.and plz do pm me...and any need tu buddy u for pm or anything else

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

the prologue is super exciting...👍🏼

Edited by shagun-rocks - 11 years ago

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

I am hooked. ASR, KKG in Jimmy Choos and Corporate setting!!! to top it off, electric shocks at contact...you are my kind of a writer. Nice to meet you...I am a Arhi ff junkie.😆

Loved your vivid description of New y

Ours, Central Park and the Time Warner buildings.

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

You should have started writing eons ago...totally awesome this is.. Clear thoughts written crisply...looking forward to this story..hope you enjoy this experience too and get lots of joy out of it...all the very best

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Superb start..
Loved it..
😊

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Am loving the comments as much as the update..am singing Queen song..hungama ho gaya..Arhi world me Jigs ne hungama machaya hai..

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Seriously what can I say to the wonderful response you guys have given to the story?!?! Thank you doesn't even cut it here but Thank you so very much for taking the time to read the Prologue and liking/commenting. I am overwhelmed and touched with all your comments because I was not expecting this at all.

Glad you enjoyed the Prologue and are loving this Khushi as much as I do writing her! I will post a little teaser Monday evening and Chapter 1 being posted Thursday morning NY time!

Hope to see you soon and thank you again for all your love and wishes for my writing journey!

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Woah!! First time writing and this is just superb...

I am intrigued by the prologue, keen on knowing about Khushi's past that has made her run away from India. The description of the city and Khushi's bond with her parents was superbly written. The narrative flows beautifully, and that made reading so delightful. Now what would I give to get a peek into the mind of ASR... his story, his thoughts when he met Khushi. I am excited to know how this story unfolds...

Bring it on! 😃

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sman
Am loving the comments as much as the update..am singing Queen song..hungama ho gaya..Arhi world me Jigs ne hungama machaya hai..

Agree with you I am enjoying the comments very much as well!