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kushigowda

@kushigowda

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#701

Nice update... Its good that u showed abt la n vishwa..

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kprathiba

@kprathiba

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Hope they will find the donor soon.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#703

Sweet update.

Bindu is getting married , may be now she know that arnav is in her life to take care of her much better

then anyone else. It's not that others are taking less care.

Please vanhi find some doner, can't see Khushi like this. Don't make them suffer too much.

Thanks for lovely update.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#704

I was looking for a song at the beginning of your update!!

I do wonder if Arnav will surprise Khushi with a double wedding... Viswa is being very brave, but will it last?? They have shared so much, happiness, sadness and he always had been there to support her, his presence is being missed..

What really constitutes a happy ending... Everyone dies but does everyone live? I feel Khushi has attained happiness by being with the ones she loves... She really could have just sat at home and driven herself to self pity over her illness.. A very strong, determined individual...

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#705

awesome part...

oh ArShi back on their city...

bindu is getting married for khushi...

on khushi's birthday viswa purposely didn't wish khushi...

she was so hurt...

viswa lied he forget...

arnav continuously supporting and inspiring khushi to live...

ah they whole evening passed by love making...😛

khushi embarrassed to face her family...😳

update soon...

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#706

OMG they are making me cry... Its such a helpless situation.. i don't know whats written in khushi's fate... The characters are so real for me.. All i want is khushi to be absolutely fine and she gets a donor... and she lives happily with Arnav.. (I am lover of fairy tales and happy endings).

I don't know as a writer what have you planned about your story... but i trust you enough to know that you would do what is the right thing for it. :)

Great update !

Kudos ! :D

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#707

beuatiful update..

i guess first time khushi has been so positive about her life after been diagnosed with this illness ..

chalo thats good ..:))

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#708

Amazing update.

Loved the way you write whole wedding thing in one chapter leaving nothing.

It's a good decision of bindu to marry finally as Khushi is not alone now. She had arnav in her life.

Sad that this story is coming to an end. Don't know what you are going to write now.

But what ever it is but we want happy ending. Please.

Thanks for updating

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#709

Can i say i ended up crying throughout the update.. even though it was light hearted.. thats because of your note above the part... I somehow have an idea what going to be the end .. and i just don't have it in me bear it... Deaths are hard to deal with be it in real or fiction... It leaves this void in your life... it depresses you.. yet it is inevitable.. but death in an uncalled age is something which no one can bear... I don't know.. i end up getting too emotional.. I should have stick to reading happy fanfics... but i just couldn't stop myself when i started reading this fiction of yours.. and now i am screwed...

Great update..!!

So Happy for Viswa... <3

Arnav and Khushi are being really strong.. god i would have died already if i was in their situation.. :(

Kiran and Bindu finally are married... <3 Lovable souls they are..<3

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#710

😭 Dear your note in the start just scared the hell out of me...Don't tell me it is going to be a sad ending😒.. My heart pierced whenever I think that something will happen to Shona in the end... I don't wish to be left heartbroken in the end...I wish, sigh!!! Coming to the update, I am pleasantly surprised seeing the new chapter... it was a delightful and pleasant update..😊

This chapter is all about love, commitment, promise and our lovely couple Bindu and Kiran... I love Bindu and Kiran couple...Glad that they are married.. I am so happy for Viswa, too...He deserves all the happiness with Lavanya...

The way all of them teased newly wed couple, I just love it.. 😳Their cheeky comments and teasing remarks were the cherry on the cake...A delightful chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed myself... :)