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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#681

Wow,

WORDS

they really are the most amazing way to inspire us, fill us with emotions,

they can Heal, Hurt, Love, make Happy,

they can do anything,

your words do that and much more!!

The journey

as Suriya and Shona in Goan letters,

or as Arnav and Khushi in teh Pearl city

was amazing!!!

Loved Vishwa, Kiran, Aman, Bindu, Anjali, each one them!!!

And your quotes without fail, tugged somewhere Deep inside me!!

How do you do this,

this was Surreal!!

Waiting for the next update,

and hoping that somehow,

Hope wins!!

Waiting for 27th September,

Take Care!!😊

PS. Your flashback techniques were amazing, be it through the letters or the Six-month journey!!!

Great job!!!

Edited by loves_aishu - 11 years ago

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addictedx53

@addictedx53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#682

This was a beautiful, emotional update! Had always liked Vishwa, but now now like him more than Arnav, & Lavanya more than Khushi! It may be that he has come across the same apprehensions which the Arnav familiar to us also had, loving somebody & losing them. He is so lucky to have Lavanya who can expresss their situation so clearly. Hope she will be able to make him overcome his fear. He deserves to lead a happy life.

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Random1888

@Random1888

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#683

Gud one. Love Lavanya's way of approach towards her love. Hope Vishwa will get out of that in security soon.

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#684

Wonderful update my dear...

I am sooo glad that vishwa is trying to give another chance at life n to lavanya!

I hope he finda peace again n will have the strength to love again too...

Continue soon!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#685

very good update..👍🏼

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shalinimathur80

@shalinimathur80

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#686

Awesome. ?... awesome... awesome... these are the only words suiting the laxt 3 updates. Circle of life... a chance to live agai for viswa and the undying love between arnav and khushi being tested intensely by sands of time... very beautifully written.

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#687

Arnav's and khushi love, pain it's a mixture..
Viswa love for khushi and friendship hats off..
Superb update..

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ayaanshi

@ayaanshi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#688

The intensity of the update shook me with such a force that I can still feel a chill down my spine. Love is selfish. Love is selfless. Love is happiness and Love is sorrow. It is a force that can even pull down the strongest man on his knees and can push the weakest person high above. This bond between Lavanya and Viswa might be tainted, might be scarred but it is pure in its impurest form. Loved the update. True emotions blended with harsh realities.

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#689

Awesome parts vanhi... Just read last 3 chapters & dey were amazing... D way u showed khushi's struggle & hope in life till she met arnav again in this past was emotional & heart touching d relation viswa-khushi share is something which is really unique & a blessing in frndship... D way arnav showed his guilt & insecurity abt her frndship wid viswa & d fear dat maybe wat if dey had not met, she had not fallen for him... He udnt had her den... Its was really superub work by u...

Well to u be true u actually make us love not only arhi bt every couple & character of urs as dey all r important in ur story... Same happened wid 1st viswa & den lavanya... D way viswa loves khushi wid no demands & just love same he got from lav bt he is sooo terrified wid his fate dat whom he loves leave him & he can't loose lav too... So, he won't accept dat yes he loves her... Bt d way lav supports him & understand him is simply beautiful & I m sure she will make him understand dis too... D way sjmhe explained dear relation dear comfort told us d love she held for him d way she understand him... Ohh I love dem equally & along wid arhi I want dem too to hv amazing story... :)

Really sorry vanhi for being gayab bt well last year of Clg & hv lots of project work along campus recruitment on process... So, bit irregular Nw bt I do read as soon as I come here... :)

So, do cont soon dear... Hope u r fine & happy... :)

Prati