~Where Loyalties Lie~ llA Collab Sandhir FFll *Chp4 updated pg 27!* - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: angel_anisha

Sweta when will you update?

India needs answers.

sweta update kab dengi duniya jawaab chahti hai 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

will do. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
amazing concept post soon ..
do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Dis is wow..i was dumbstuck..wen i read the last line written in bold big letters..intresting very intresting!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Dis is wow..i was dumbstuck..wen i read the last line written in bold big letters..intresting very intresting!!
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Originally posted by: yoyoanjali

amazing concept post soon ..
do pm me



Thank You. For PMs please buddy both of us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Hey Friends.

So without further ado, we present you the very first chapter.

Happy Reading :)

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1. A Nightmare

She raised her head up from the study table. Her head was throbbing due to the sleepless night that she had; her tear stained cheeks, a proof that she has been crying the whole night. She glanced around her, absorbing her surrounding, her face holding a blank expression. This was the first time she was actually looking at her room since she bizzarely crashed at her house last night. Her family, though surprised, did not nag her much with questions as they were only too glad to see her, even Ankit; and she thanked her lucky stars for that.

She picked up a family photo from her table gently. It was not there the last time she had visited. Her mother must have put it there. As she wiped the dust of the picture with her other hand, she noticed the bracelet that she was wearing. It was a simple yet beatiful ornament, adorned with gentle and intricate designs. It was his gift to her. A gift without any ocassion. He is like that, does not believe in the tradition of expressing love on any particular ocassion. Everyday brings one or other reason to him to celebrate the magic that they have, or rather...had. A tear escaped from her eyes as his thoughts crossed her mind.

She shuddered as she remembered the mishappenings last night. Their farewell night.

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She was in no mood to dress up for the night. She had a huge fight with Randhir and she was still no sure what they had fought about. It had been like that between them for awhile now. Their 2 year long relationship as going through its worst phase. First the shrewed attempt to create misunderstandings created between them by Randhir's dad, then all the family pressure to marry the son of her Dad's business partner. She was really finding it hard to deny for her marriage a second time, now that her engineering studies were over. Add to it the newly rising stress of getting an internship in a different city from Randhir and all that crap about how hard it is to handle distance relationships. Randhir had been behaving like a brat these days, flipping out at even the tiniest of matter. And she was not less herself, making things messier. All these were taking a toll on their relationship.

She entered the party late, half - heartedly. Her eyes glanced around, searching for him. She presumed he must be in some classroom,brooding. She walked across the corridors, hoping to find him, and make up for the fight that they had. No matter how much they fought, at the end of the day, she did love him and she knew he loved her back as much. Maybe more.

She just reached the classrooms, when a faint voice made her stop on the track. His voice. It was coming from the mechanical lab. But what struck her as odd was the fact that their was another voice accompanying it. A girl's voice. She felt her heart sink as different troubling thoughts rose in her mind instantly. But still, without presuming anything, she went towards that direction firmly. The voices grew louder. Without further ado, she took a deep breath and pushed the door open.

She gasped loudly at the scene before her.

Randhir, her Randhir, shirt unbuttoned, fresh red scratches on his chest, totally wasted; a girl , on him, her dress undone too, her bra revealing, clutching his collars, her mascara smudged.They both gaped at her. The girl went visibly pale, Randhir was not in a condition to even realise what was happening. "Sanyukta..." he slurred.

That was it. Her breaking point. He had pushed her beyond that.

Everything was a blur after that. How she reached her room, packed her stuff, left FITE, forever, and reached her home; she did not remember anything. All she remembered was the horrible ad frightening pain in her chest, and that suffocating and sinking feeling the moment she realised her whole world had fallen apart at the blink of an eye.

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She wiped her tears for the nth time as a fresh stream began to flow. She had never felt so hopeless, so hapless, so...broken. She covered her mouth to muffle her screams that came out involuntarily due to the stabbing pain she was feeling in her heart. Its over. Everything was over for her now. Her dreams, her hopes, everything.

But little did she know that destiny had planned much more for her. She had no idea that in a matter of a few days, she will find herself stuck in a battle that will probably prove to be the greatest battle she will have to fight, a battle even bigger than her fight to become an engineer, a battle that was going to change her life, and Randhir's, forever.

She glanced towards the door on hearing a ruffling sound. Their servant had slid the morning's paper through the bottom of the door. She mechanically got up and picked it up, her eyes glancing at the headlines blankly.

The headline read: "Randhir Singh Shekhawat, engineer son of Industrialist Renuka Sanyal, accused to attempt to Rape."

She let out a small cry.


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Not Much Has been revealed about the girl. Next up, you will get to know more about the self-proclaimed victim.

Feedbacks will be appreciated. Dedication For the best Comment. :)


Stay Blessed.

Ifra and Sweta.

Edited by SwetaRocking - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Dhdj
And I came first! *happy dance*
RES
Unrest
Dude. U updated. Kudos for that! 🤣
OK OK.
Making it clear already I know my randhir can't do this 🤣
And I want to know abt this victim too.
I know the whole plot I guess 😆
This gal myt hav tried to seduce him.n then accused when he retaliated.
Had hai 🤣
Kuchh bhi ho jaye. I'm with him. (,as if it matters in the story 🤣
LOVED IT both of u.
Great job sweta.
Iffu update soonish.
*glares and shows her AK-47*

Tada.
Bye.
See u at next upd
Spare me fr the typos. Typing from my phn n dn this auto correct 🤣

Love,
Anisha


Edited by angel_anisha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Move aside people! 😲 RES. :3 *keeps the AK-47 aside* *takes a tissue paper* *wipes away tears and sneezes loudly* 🥺🥺 mela RD aisa nahi kar sakta! Nahi...how could he? No. There has to be a mistake! 😭 there has to be something wrong! Aise kaise? Sanyukta heart broke into a million pieces! 🥺 i hope its not true , varna pata nahi kya hoga! 🥺 RD isn't this type of a guy! He has morales but I wonder what happened to him all of a sudden? "yeh kya hua , kaise hua , kab hua?" 😭 and , and they had a fight too? Meyn , these two! Kabhi nahi sudrenge! 😆 and that bracelet , it was so heartwarming! 🥺 i wish RD gives such gifts to her in the show too , like when they'll be together! 🤣 and iss update ne rula diya! 😭 u know I was thinking about this the whole night! 😭 I just hope that RD will come out clean or else Sanyu ka toh pata nahi but mera heartbreak zaroor ho jayega! 🥺🥺 and lastly , I love you two so much for updating so quickly! 🤗 kal jo hua... 🤣🤣
Edited by arshifan2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Res
Unres

So clearly...Randhir can't do this to anyone!!
Wo ladki ne hi jhuta accusation lagaya hoga mere RD pe😡
Hope sanyukta uska sath de!
Waiting for the update!!
Update soon dearies😆

Edited by panchan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Itna late update kiya aapne? :|
Why? *Angry*
kitna wait karaya.. :(

Next part jaldi update karo please?

Coming to the update,
Randhir accused of rape? Oh no! who was that girl with Randhir? Sanyukta saw them? What will be her reaction? Wait, Randhir really raped someone? OMG! questions revolving in my mind. :|

Update fast please?

Love,
Vanii ^_^

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