'The Forgotten' - Swaron SS part-8 page 35

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

At first i thought, whn sharon was going tru pics...u killed swayam in dis ss
Bt thnku for not doing dat...
Well grt start...
N hoping SS n KR in d3 season2...gt der proper screenspace...countiniuty n proper dialogues with no more butuchring of der respective characters

Res for 2nd update

Unresd at page6

Edited by GlamourousPearl - 11 years ago

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armaanasadksg

@armaanasadksg

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

lovely update. i love reading painful SwaRon FF . thanks 4 d PM. pls update soon

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apy_swaron

@apy_swaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Achha Ohkaay... So swayam has lost his memory...

I couldn't stop thinking ki aakhir aisa kya hua hoga that swayam being there is not with sharon and on top of it not even mentioning her or missing her...though he is missing her but poor thing not even able to comprehend what...

Loved the chapter... Also taani-sharon-kriya bond was cute...

Hope everything gets sorted jaldise and swaron are back together...

Updates soon...

Thanks for the pm😊

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

the chapter was amazing but to painful and hurt... they did not lose the hope
and u give a happy in it and make the love united... lovely...
do continue soon and pm me

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GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Unres chptr2...
Saddii sadii update tha...:( :(
Swayam's dream of white angel...and convo of taani n sharon points a memory loss of swayam...bt how did dat happen...
Loved da bro-sis bond u penned...n yes sharon taani r in contact hmmm...
So waiting for further updates

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

wen i read d first chap i thought yahi hone wala h...n trust me it was killing me to even think abt it fr one sec...sooo emotional..swaron far apart its seriously heart wrenching.. Bt u wrote amazing ...m short of wrds rght now ..tooo heqrt touching..den 2 chap n here swayam.lost his memory...n ya dat was painful chap..good job

Edited by cutelove - 11 years ago

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..Fazza..

@..Fazza..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awesome writing! :D Do update soon and PM me please :)
xoxo

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Another wonderful piece of writing by you. The concept is really good and even better written. The individual feelings were described very nicely. Love to know what happened with Swayam. Continue soon

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paro1311

@paro1311

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

U always come up with a good storyline tat let's me connect with ur swaton easily. If the show ever takes a leap or something this would be a great way to do it.

I like some of the simple things in the story like how u kept taani, kriya and everyone in the loop and also how swayam spoke abt Rey nd his ideas at the beach. Do update soon would love to read on.