#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

What an absolute thriller of an update!

My heart was in my mouth with every step he was taking in that jungle, with the drops of blood there to tempt any prowling animal to attack!

But he did get to his Khushi. And now am waiting for him to recover consciousness so that they can talk properly.

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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#572

Wonderful Update.

But I am confused that Shyma is involved in this or not?

Aman is not that bad, but they did a mind wash of him.

And I hope Arnav is fine.

Finally Khushi confessed her love for him.

Waiting for more...

Thanks for PM.

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

Khushi forgave him even before he gave her any justifications... That surely is khushi!
Living the thrill in the story. Keep up the good work. Thanx for an exciting read!

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Such a wonderful thrilling update

The action was very exciting and very well written,

So Aman is dead now andd Arnav got injured

Loved the way Khushi was worried for him and confess that to him.

It was scary the way Arnav reached guest house with that man eating tiger around

Khushi's concern and her forgiveness in the end was perfect

Loved the whole update too much

Hope Arnav will be fine soon

Eagerly waiting for next update

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#575

If you have never written an action sequence before, you did great for your first time, Jenny.
Loved the entire update.
But my favourite part has to be, obviously, the last part where Khushi says she had already forgiven him.
It's like Arnav is trying to hold himself together to not pass out before he explains his reasons to Khushi to just get her forgiveness. And when she says she forgave him even before he said anything, he felt content. This scene was written so beautifully.
I'm really ruinous to know his side of the story.
Can't believe this story is almost near to its end. Is next chapter the last chapter?
I'm also curious to know how you people have got this idea to set the story in a forest and wildlife background.

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Arshisarunfan

@Arshisarunfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

Wow! What an action packed thriller with some pleasing hints of love & romance squeezed in too! 😊 Loved the whole of it 😊 Shocked at that despicable Aman's cold Machiavellian cunning and duplicity & could never imagine that he would actually attempt to kill Arnav & unleash the deadly man eater to put Khushi's life in danger 😲 But did Aman really help the man eater to escape or was that an empty threat on his part to unsettle Arnav? The upcoming chapters are likely to reveal more about Shyam's role in the scheme of things! Arnav is still suspecting Shyam! But Aman had planted doubts on Shyam's mind so that the latter suspects Arnav as the offender in this teak wood smuggling thing! So does that count Shyam out?

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

Superb update.
i hope arnav will be fine

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Meeshaali

@Meeshaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#578

Ohhh my God jenny its first time im reading any thriling
And supensive fiction its amazing very very amazing
Coz it has romance as well fight as well jealously as well
And each n everythng is perfect!!!!!!!!'
Plzzz update soon im sooo worried for arnav
Hope he will be fine soon :(

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#579

That was a good action packed movie Jen and you did a fab job of penning it down.

So Aman meets a gruesome death...a good guy who went astray, thanks to some brainwashing by the Wildlife organisation. And to think he could have done so much for the wild life that he loved so much only if he was sincere in his current job.

Poor khushi must have died a thousand death seeing Arnav in such a bad shape. Looks like she has forgiven arnav for his sins of the past and has decided to hold on to him for now.

Good luck to both of them to work things out between them at least now.

Thanks for the pm and you have a great trip jen.