#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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nyxx

@nyxx

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Ahhh its only getting more intriguing!

Love how you all have added the tinge of mystery about the forest, about what Arnav is doing, along with the past & present which connects Khushi & Arnav...all of it is fitting in like a jigsaw puzzle...

Ana, with this update, you've lifted this tale one notch higher...Super! ⭐️

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

So loving this story. Another awesome update

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Beautiful Update...

Seems Arnav and Kushi had a understanding problem... She is not trying to understand ARnav and Arnav not ready to give any explanation.

They are too stubber and egostic jodi😡... God please help them by putting some sence in thier brain.

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

wow

super awesome and interesting chapter

the touch of humor in it was wonderfull

the little library convo between arshi on Books title was very sweet and lovely

arshi blissfull moments are disturbed again

in the end they just get messed up

is shayam playing some game in wood smuggling?

why khushi is suspecting arnav just because he is not involving aman and shayam in his investigations?

😕

and all this is having a bad impact on their relation

arnav is really hurt badly by khushi's accusation

hope this misunderstanding clears soon between them

loved reading the chapter

u bring some twist in story but with a touch of humor besides them

fab pice of writing

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Really enjoyed the close encounters of Arnav and Khushi...specially in the library leading up to the impromptus tea party.

You kept the thread of underlying emotions and passions running all thru their interactions and I am just waiting for all that suppressed emotion to erupt😆. Has Khushi finally gone too far and really hurt Arnav and he is now going to keep his distance?

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

The finest ingredients and the sans pareil chefs come together to bake a most delectable 'cake of a story'. The setting,the Jim Corbett Park, where natures bounty has been so intricately unraveled is the icing. And a spirited Khushi and an enigmatic Arnav are my cherry on the cake. Can one ever wish for a gift more refined, more exquisite - I think not, I know not...

Thank you all. I am not going to comment on the story for it speaks for itself and I want to bask in its beauty and traverse its journey!

👏👏👏

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afshanbabar

@afshanbabar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

hai khushi, whats wrong with you, how can you think bad about Arnav.
what a beautiful and different story, love it more and more with each new episode.
love ya

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dialuvarshi

@dialuvarshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

interesting would love to read more.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Loved the book titles 😆

Arnav flirting with Khushi over onion pakoras was cute until Shyam showed up - why am I not surprised!

Can see why Khushi was bursting to ask him, but has now hurt him with her mistrust and he's going all cold and withdrawing from her. Like the last time you said...not good!

Will something happen when Aman takes them and will Arnav have to come and rescue her?

Or not 😆