#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed* - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Ofcourse he is hiding something eventhough he may not at fault
Its right from khushi's side to ask him about her doubts
Poor Arnav dint except this from his khushi
Khushi's doubtful manner devastated him alot.
I think this "trust issues" incident has something to do with his past.
Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ana!!
Lovely update!!

So now things are getting hotter!! Finally someone voiced their doubt's!! I know its not practical but there's nothing wrong in clarifying stuffs!!

Oki I loved the first part! Easy camaraderie!! And Khushi moving towards Arnav when Shyam approached them!!

The last part was definitely sad!! But needed!n

May be now they'll realize their feelings!!

What is he hiding BTW?

Aww he's not accompanying her?

Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sami,
First of all, I loved the title...😊 It was really funny when Arnav smirked and answered Khushi like a gentleman when he came to take her out...Trust Arnav to pull Khushi out of her reticence by commenting on something seemingly scandalous as "virgins"...😆..The forest and falls were described beautifully,S...Also Arnav and Khushi's day spent at the waterfall...I'm glad Arnav again took the right path of protecting Khushi rather than put them both in danger...Clearly he suspects every one of his colleagues... I hope Khushi understands him though


Ana,

The first bit was hilarious... I Loled at Arnav's last comment...
Their camaraderie didn't last long enough though...Again at odds combined with Khushi's doubts about Arnav, they couldn't even have a peaceful pakora time... You made me feel Arnav's hurt...He truly seemed dejected at Khushi's allegations against him...And poor Khushi- she's remorseful about hurting Arnav and rightfully hurt and aching about him avoiding her now...

Hope things improve and that too soon for our young lovers, ladies! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
A unique n interesting ARHI story !!!!
So Arnav told that lie on purpose to save khushi from the coming danger... Hope she understands his reasons n doesn't think otherwise..
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...
Khushi's heart trust arnav but her mind is doing somersault...
Arnav is very hurt by khushi indirect allegations...
Arnav is sending aman with khushi and joy but why???
Eagerly waiting for next update to see some suspense unfold
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another amazing update...and so well written... the story is getting interesting day by day... them too has a big ego...seriously .. they really cant have a civil conversation like normal people do... khushi practically accused him of being involved in all the dodgy things going on... and arnav as usually got hurt that khushi doesn't trust him and he did what he does at best for pushing her away just because for her own safety... what really surprised me the most was.. why did shyam want khushi and Joy to go away?
Eagerly waiting to read more... the suspense is killing me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
She finally voiced her doubts!
Can't blame her on having them..but ofcourse Arnav must be hurt!
So what is it that he's hiding..it must be for their own good that he must have avoided taking them there...
But will they be in trouble for it..will the mystery be solved..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ouch Ouch!!! looks like Arnav's ego is hurt big time!!!!
The way he is behaving all hushed up, anyone can get a doubt.

Onion pakoras and tea on a rainy afternoon!!! That sounds like heaven.

Ananya, very nice update. The plot is getting thicker by the day. Now Aman is taking Khushi and Joy to study about lichens. What will happen there?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sami, thanks for the PM.
Arnav did not answer even one question properly. The first part in which Arnav and Khushi meet at the library was nice... reading book about "How to stay away from assholes"... that was hilarious.

I like this forest and I like this story. Will wait for next chapter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Did khushi just tried to accuse Arnav of illegal activities going in the forest?😲 Of course he got hurt...
So now Aman will take joy and khushi instead of Arnav. I hope she stays safe. And the part where Arhi met in library was hilarious.
Do update soon

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