#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed* - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys next update will be up tomorrow. Though I still havnt written it but Id like to be positive. :')
So yeah. Kbye. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
felt really sad for Arnav...he never thought khushi wud doubt his integrity towards his work...but then he has broken her trust once...though there was not a proper breaking of promise...but assuming whatever little we know through the flashback... it was an nonverbal promise from his side to her...which he broke thereby betraying her... so its kinda logical for her to doubt him, esp with all the lies that he has been conveying to people in her presence

but then she is special for him...and so his behavior with her is more open, compared to guards that he put on when in presence of others...esp, since he has to solve the smuggling crimes in the forest...he cannot trust others, but he must have never thought that khushi wud think so low about him...

m really glad that he is keeping his distance now...hope he maintains it n forces her to come to him...

btw, i thought arnav's dad was a rich businessman...so did khushi forgot this fact while doubting him, that why wud he smuggle teak for money, when he let go of all the property that his dad owned, which was rightfully his.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ananya, you evoked many emotions in me with this update. Loved the library conversation and how Arnav blatantly called his invitation as a date. Those were amazing books' titles! 👏

Just when they started enjoying each others company with comfort, Shyam and Joy decided to join them! Hate it. And hate that the conversation about taking Khushi and Joy for their project made the former doubt Arnav yet again. Dammit! I know that Khushi went to Arnav's room at one in the morning for the peace of her mind- I can understand her turmoil,but could not she hide her doubts...he's so hurt now to know that of all people Khushi does not trust him.

Amazing emotional update.

So excited to read the next ones.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic chapter
Loved it
What is Arnav hiding from khushi ???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Another superb update...we also got to tour around the forest along with Khushi...Kudos for your research dear...I loved ARSHI conversations...our crazy Khushi has irritated and prompted him to the level that he has started avoiding her...Arnav is hurt because she is not trusting her but to Aman and others. But now I really doubt Shyam and Aman's intentions...I think Arnav is hiding things from them and doing his investigation without involving anyone. Loved their pakora and adhark tea date...you know we all are acting like Sherlock Holmes. She still loves him and her heart is not accepting to even think that Arnav would be involved with the gang. But what she did was absolutely wrong...thoda sabre kar Khushi.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb superb chapter this is Ana!
You did not miss the chance to squeeze in some light hearted humor, which is your forte, into the story when you can, did you? The library scene with references to book titles was so hilarious. Another book Arnav must have read is - how to prevent others from ruining a date. 😆
Can't wait to read further.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think Joy is the mastermind of smuggling. And Khushi his right hand. All this 'I shuck you' was just to divert all of us. :p
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

I think Joy is the mastermind of smuggling. And Khushi his right hand. All this 'I shuck you' was just to divert all of us. :p



What The?!

😆


Are you planning to write this in your update?!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sman

update update..pleaseee

Originally posted by: Anupama.

Guys next update will be up tomorrow.

@SapnoKaPull-- ofcourse.. I think this will be very entertaining and I couldn't help and come here and tell this. ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

@SapnoKaPull-- ofcourse.. I think this will be very entertaining and I couldn't help and come here and tell this. ;)



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