#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

wow... amazing update...

Of course Arnav is not involved... I guess he wanted to get Khushi out of there... if she was with him while he went to investigate.. she might have gotten hurt and he does not want that... just my thought...

loved the update...

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shubhi7

@shubhi7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Awesome update

Flirty Arnav i pyaar

Loved it

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Arshisarunfan

@Arshisarunfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Awesome update! Mind blowing description of the virgin forest! I don't think Arnav is involved with this scandal in any way! It seems Arnav is just trying to keep Khushi at bay as he wants to keep Khushi safe, becoz if she gets too involved in this investigation, she might endanger her life considering how notorious & powerful these teakwood smugglers are!

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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

congooo guys for new thread 😳 wonderful upd ssyahoo , u penned down superbly 👏👏 i loved how u described arhi's visit at jungle , i m glad khushi has started thinking to hear his explanation , looks like arnav has some plan for smugglers n will handle them , do upd soon

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JesiC

@JesiC

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Amazing update.. ur description about the waterfall n nature s beauty r awesome.. arnav teasin khushi part s so funny.. glad tat khushi decided to give arnav a chance.. the plot s so intriguing

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

awesome update..

the way arnav took care of khushi in whole day trip..

but why khushi is having double thought cant she has confident on Arnav

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Dear ssyahoo

Dont go chasing waterfalls when you are chasing an errant heart in the middle of nature's plenty! What an update!! I am not sure what I liked more - the resplendent and fecund forest or your pun on virgin forests. :)

What impressed me most about this update is your ability to provide intricate detail of forest ecology with out it seeming to come off as contrived. The setting seemed to be one of your central characters and that is simply astounding to me as a reader. This showcases your research into this topic! Congratulations..

It looks like the story has picked up some momentum.. I noticed that every time there has been a theft of timber, Shyam has been conspicuously absent.. it is tempting me to draw conclusions.. hm... But I will let you folks continue with your story while I make my own conjectures. Hee hee

Yet another great update.. another great piece of writing..

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

That was lovely update Sami.

Trust you to come up with the doube entendre'!

Virgin! and then the heartbeat making Khushi's heart beat like Jungle drums!😉

There is more than what meets the eye and Arnav is keeping cards close to his chest not trusting even Aman on that matter or is it?

May be Aman too is with Arnav and they don't want to discuss it in front of Khushi whom they don't want to get involved!

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Sami that was so you!!! Naughty and Elegant!!! I was expecting few wet moments 😉... Not sure if a dip is allowed in the Corbett falls or not.. You had so beautifully pictured the serenity involved there by metaphrasing it to heartbeat.. Lovely perspective about nature and it feels magical to read about this forest.

It is lot of suspense and I am not able to figure out for sure about the officer who is involved... All I am sure about is it is not Arnav.. It can't be him... Bas!!!