#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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momai14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Really wobderful ff...lookin forward to updates...

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Archna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Brilliant chapter with beautiful vision of forest and waterfall.

Every thing is so mesmerising and you made it more beautiful with your writing. Flawless.

Arnav is trying to talk with her and the attempt he made was so wonderful yet naughty.

I could imagine his face when he talk about virgin forest.

And the heart beat one was so romantic.

It's very sad that Khushi thinks like this about him. He is lying so that she didn't got in any trouble, but looks like she will be in trouble by doubting him.

Hope she didn't make any mistake.

Thanks for such a lovely update.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

a very interesting and intriguing update...the story is progressing very well..keep up the good work going..please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...😊

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bkamber

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Good outing for the two!!

Beautiful description of the forest, nature and the falls and the opulent surrounding.

Work related, but with a personal touch.

I can picture Khushi in a foul mood after learning about her "Smirky" escort. 😆

Arnav, new game plan up his sleeve to get close to Khushi. He was laid back, playful, caring and thoughtful...good for him!!

Khushi, well aware of his presence and her own emotions is trying hard to remain unaffected!!

The "Virgin" Forest and the "Heartbeats" Waterfalls - nice tease!!

Thank goodness for the "mossy" stones...we got a "close encounter" of "tum theek ho" kind. 😳

Mystery and suspense around the teak smuggling. What happened to Arnav's baseball cap? Left for bait..perhaps??

Loved the chapter.

Until next time.

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bellacoolio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Beautifully written! I love the descriptions that you all are incorporating in this story. Kudos to your research efforts! I hope Khushi's doubt is cleared soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

so she is confused if arnav is in the scandal or not

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anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Awesome update!! Loved it 👏

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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Amazing update! Loved the ArHi time :) Won't it be dangerous for Arnav too to defy department orders and go solo?

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zainza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Its so much fun reading about Arshi in a different and very interesting setting, and that too something written so well by very talented writers. Along with pleasure, the story covers very important nature element that needs to be protected, so this SS serves two purposes, therefore its all the more enjoyable. Thank you dear writers, for giving us something so worthwhile to read.