FATEFUL LOVE IN AN ARRANGED MARRIAGE(AN AR SS)part 24upd 21/11/17 - Page 14

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Oyye Hoyye! So cute!
Armaan and Riddhima are ccchooo chweet!
'Armaan ki Jaan'... hayye. That comment was sssooo amazing!
Continue fast fast please!
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hey padosan mast part re
yeh dill mange more
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muje ar ka romance n teasing padhna hai
continue soon continue soon
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awesome part
jealous riddhima oye hoyye
chalo wedding to ho gayi
waiting for their wedding night
post soon
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awww. AR r d cutest!!
looking frwrd to read mre romntic n cute momnts...
thnks fr d pm n update super soon!!
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FATEFUL LOVE IN AN ARRANGED MARRIAGE



PART -8


MALLIK MANSION

Ananya was standing with a aarti thaal infront of the entrance

armaan came out of the car n makes ridhima come out from the car
he helds her hand tight n they were walking towards the home

ananya smiles n did aarti

ananya - ridhima ab apne daine pair (right leg) se ye chawaal ke kalash ko girao

ridhima did that

ananya - ab aap apne pairo ko iss laal rang ke thaal mein rakho aur ghar me iski chaap se pravesh karo

ridhima kept her legs on the thaal n
removed them n starting walking in the house with the foot prints on the floor


n now all sat in the hall n everyone was teasing AR especially boys

ananya came with the milk n a bowl which is decorated with the flowers

she sat down n poured the milk in the bowl n she left the ring in the bowl n said

ananya - iss doodh mein se tum dono ko ek anghooti ( ring) dhundni hogi
aur jo pehle dhund kar nikalega
woh iss ghar par raaj karega
chalo ridhima Bete aaj batado ki ghar par sirf aurton ka raj chalta hai aur hamesha chalega

she sided ridhima n armaan frowns n said

Ar - Mom this is not fair
aap ridhima ki side lerahe ho

ananya - haan
meri marzi

raj - sahi kahan ananya iss ghar par toh sirf aurton ka raj chalta hai
ridhima beta mai bhi aapke saath hun
Jeet kar niklo
cmon Bete

Ar - dad... aap bhi

raj - yes

abhi - dnt wry armaan mai tere saath hun
bhabhi ko haradey

Atul - haan mere bhai dikhaadey man power

they both looked at Rahul who said

Rahul - no ways bhabhi hi jeetegi
cmon bhabhi dnt let him win

Ar - rahool saale Tuney bhi party badal di

Rahul - mai toh bhabhi ke hi side hun
n humari majority hai
cmon bhabhi

armaan looked at ridhima n ridhima smiles n they both started searching
n everyone were cheering them
ananya raj n Rahul was continously cheering ridhima
where as abhi n Atul were cheering armaan

armaan smiles at ridhima n
stared holding her hand n ridhima looked at him n shook her head
as if saying dat leave my hand

armaan again shooked at her as if saying
no i am not gonna leave your hand

Ridhima pleaded through eyes but he tightens his grip n

Rahul - bhabhi cmon

abhi - cmon buddy

ananya - ridhima beta aapko Jeet na hai

raj - make us proud beta

Atul - armaan mere bhai kya karraha hai bhabhi ko jeetne mat dena

armaan helds her hand tight n he quickly removed their hands from the bowl holding her hand tight n ridhima blushed n armaan smiles

Atul - Abey yaar ye kya karraha hai

Rahul - Oye haath chod bhabhi ka

Rahul ananya n raj held ridhima 's hand they were pulling her hand from him
where as abhi n Atul held armaan 's hand n they were too pulling out his hand from her
but armaan ' s grip was getting tight n ridhima was blushing

ananya - armaan haath Chodo beta ridhima ko dard hoga

abhi - nahi armaan anghooti toh tu hi dhundega

Atul - haan mere bhai tu hi jeetega

armaan asks through her eyes to ridhima what to do
either to hold her more or leave her hand
ridhima pleaded to leave n armaan placed the ring on her hand n ridhima was surprised n looked at armaan as y he is giving her the ring n armaan winked at her making her blush

he left her hand

Atul - Abey yaar

Ridhima shows the ring n smiles brightly n armaan was happy to see her happy

ananya - dekha maine kaha tha na meri bahu hi jeetegi

raj - haan bhai ab tumhari koi baat ghalat kaise hosakti hai

Rahul - dekha armaan mai bhabhi ka lucky charm hun

abhi - chup kar Oye rahool
jeetne waala tha armaan but usne bhabhi ko jitaaya
Abey oye jab tujhe haarna hi tha toh kyun maidan mein utra

Ar -( looks at ridhima n said) tu nahi samjhega

ridhima blushed n looks down

rahul abhi Atul - ohhh

ananya n raj smiles n raj said

raj - chalo bhai bahot der hogayi
ananya tum Ridhima ko room mei lekar jao

ananya took ridhima to their room

armaan looked at ridhima n kept on looking at her
when abhi nudges him n said

abhi - control kar bhai
hogayi ab woh teri

Atul laughs n Rahul went towards raj n said

Rahul - uncle aur rasme bhi hai kya

raj - kyun bhai tujhe aur bhi rasme chahiye

Rahul - Arey uncle woh ek rasm hoti hai na dulhan ke room mein jaane ke baadh Dulhe se paise lete hai andar entry dene ke liye

raj - paagal
woh ladkiyon ki rasm hoti hai as agar Dulhe ki koi behan hai toh woh karsakti hai

Rahul - this is not fair yaar uncle
paise aintwaane ke rasm ladkiyon ko hi kyun karni padti hai
Atul sahi kehta hai saare mazedaar rasme ladkiya hi karti hai

raj ruffled his hair n said

raj - bichaare tum

he laughed at Rahul n went to his room


AR ROOM

Ananya make ridhima sat on the bed n she went from there

ridhima was nervous n she was just blushing

she got up from the bed n stood near Window smiling looking at the moon

armaan came inside n saw that ridhima was standing near Window
he smiles n locked the door n went towards ridhima n slowly hugged her from back

she shivers at his touch n looked at him

he smiles n she smiles too

ri - aapne mujhe jeetne kyun diya

armaan pecked her forehead n ridhima closed her eyes n smiles widely as he did that

Ar - tumhare Chehre par smile dekhne ke liye
Jeet ki khushi dekhne ke liye
tum jab muskuraati ho toh mujhe bahot acha lagta hai
aur jab tumhari muskuraahat ka kaaran mai banta hun toh faida toh mera hi hota hai
hai na

she smiles n looked down n said in a low tone

ri - aapke paas toh har sawaal ka jawaab hota hai
Phir Chahe jawaab kuch filmi hi kyun na ho

she smiles n armaan raised a brow n pulled her closer by her waist
ridhima eyes widened n armaan said

Ar - Acha... aapko bolna bhi aata hai
mujhe Toh laga aapka saara din sharmaane mein waste hojata hai

ridhima smiles n said

ri - aisi bahot si cheeze hai mere baarein mein jo aap nahi jaantey

Ar - n i would love to know that

ri - sure

she was abt to go when he pulled her duppata n ridhima turned n her duppata fell from her head
ridhima stood their without her dupatta blushed looking down

armaan slowly slowly came towards her n pulled her through her waist
she blushed n was looking down when Armaan held her chin n make her look at him

he saw her with passion
she looked at him with equal passion

they both share an eyelock n armaan break the trance n he kissed her forehead
passionately
ridhima closed her eyes tight feeling his cold lips on her skin
she clutched his sherwaani tight
armaan came out n saw her with eyes closed
he smiles looking at his effect on her
he kissed her eyes one by one
ridhima breaths heavily n armaan was enjoying her reactions
he pulled her more through her waist not wanting an inch distance between them
his lips touched her nose n he kissed her on the tip of her nose
he slowly slowly caressed her cheeks n ridhima have goose bumps all over her body
she was melting by his touch
he kissed her left cheek first n linger his lips on her skin
ridhima holds armaan through his neck n tightens her hold
she was going weak n was holding him for the support
his touch was creating a havoc in her body
her body was shivering as he was kissing her whole face
he caressed her left ear lobe with his nose n kissed there
ridhima moaned n held his sherwaani tight

he came on the right side of her face n caressed her cheek with his nose

kissed her cheek n kissed her earlobe

ridhima hugged him tight n armaan hugged her tight too

Ar - ( whispers slowly) agar Tum chaho toh i can wait ridhima

ri-( whispers) aapka Mujhpar haq hai armaan

Ar -( smiles n said) meri haq ki baat nahi hai jaan
tum agar uncomfortable ho toh it's ok

ri -mujhe apna banaalijiye armaan mann se bhi aur tann se bhi
please

Ar - r u sure

ridhima nods still her eyes closed

Armaan kissed her hair n slowly came out of the hug
ridhima was looking down blushing

he smiles n picked her in his arms
ridhima looked at him n blushed n hides her face in the crook of his neck

armaan make his way towards their bed

he placed ridhima on the bed n ridhima breaths heavily

armaan bends down n removed her maangtika n kissed on her hair

he slowly removed her earnings n kissed her ears
he removes her jewelry except mangalsutra n kissed her on her neck
she clutched his other hand tightly
n titled her head to give him better access

armaan kissed her colar bone n held her face n make her face him

he looked at her shivering lips n looked at her for permission
she closed her eyes tight n was waiting for armaan

he slowly bend down n pecked her lips for assurance she smiles through her kiss n armaan smiles back n took her lips in a kiss
she responded back n slowly slowly the kiss turned passionate
n they become one


the candles were blowned by the wind
as the two love birds were busy in their lala land
so as to not disturb them the nature retired n promised to make the next day n next coming months, years n whole life beautiful to them



huhhh
ok this is the next part
i dnt knw how i wrote as meri haalath kharaab horahi thi. likhne ke time
hahaha
but if it IS worth to read
toh please do read n hit the like tab n dnt forget to comment

with loads of love
HUMERA







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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Humzzzyyy!!!! Itni jaldi update??? Waah!
The angoothi dhoondne waali rasam was super!
Bechaara Rahul, paise chahiye the usse! Par baat toh sahi hai, yeh sabme bechaare ladko ke liye koi achchi rasam hi nahi hoti.
And the AR moments were so hawt and passionate!!!!
Super super!
Ab aage bhi jaldi jaldi post kar!
Love youuu...
😊
Edited by DMGThings - 10 years ago
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🤣 🤣 U knw y this Emoticon is for 😆

Starting wid the part it was awesome i loveee reading rasm n all mera Armaan his character is just sooo awesome man 😳 i love his winking n ishara's n all

Boys r hilarious as always 😆

Do Not Disturb wale part ki taraf badhte ha 🤣 It was really really very well written n described, the dialogues wer apt so romantic n full of feels ... 😳 Not at all overdone 👍🏼 Lovveeeddd It ❤️ ❤️

Update sooon 😉
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loved d update...
keep updating like dis...
n thnks fr d pm..
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KAMINI 😆
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superb part humzzz loved it...
u explained i ttoo well...yaar..
loved it..
rasam was too cute... :)
Ar wedding night was so romantic..aaww
😳 😳
plzz zuppd8

bye
tc :)

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