FATEFUL LOVE IN AN ARRANGED MARRIAGE(AN AR SS)part 24upd 21/11/17 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
A very good part humera
though I didn't understand d boys secret joke... 😊
I still can't believe k all 4 of thm came back to mallik mansion without being caught...suprb
armaan n ridhima's scene ws so so beautiful...full of romance...cnt wait fr dere wedding now...
Thnx fr d pm yr...
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Posted: 10 years ago
A very good part humera
though I didn't understand d boys secret joke... 😊
I still can't believe k all 4 of thm came back to mallik mansion without being caught...suprb
armaan n ridhima's scene ws so so beautiful...full of romance...cnt wait fr dere wedding now...
Thnx fr d pm yr...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updates humera :)
Loved all the chapters <3
Awesome
Just love shy riddhima ...
Waiting for next part eagerly ...
Continue soon ...!!
N pls do pm me !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sweet update :)
I loved the AR moment it was adorable
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahaa Update was sooo cute 😳

Tu na aise hi likha kar Armaan Ridz ke part u knw dil garden garden ho jaata hai kaha lamba tha re part puppy mujhe laga haaye bass kahtam ho gaya uff 😆

But boys ka joke nahi samjha mujhe LOL 😕

Aur ha Boys pehli baar hua hoga aisi situation se bach ke nikal gaye 🤣 Loved it n yes Update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago



FATEFUL LOVE IN AN ARRANGED MARRIAGE


PART -7


AR WEDDING DAY

MALLIK MANSION

the boys (Rahul Atul abhimanyu) were helping ananya n raj
armaan was in his room

he was admiring the pic of ridhima which he chupke se clicked in sangeet ceremony when ridhima went down n sat again with the girls smiling n blushing after meeting armaan

he caressed his pic n smiles

Ar - finally aaj hamari shaadi horahi hai...
kya karrahi hogi iss waqt woh
(he thinks n dialed her number)
i hope uski frnz nahi ho aas paas


Gupta mansion

ridhima was packing her suit case with the help of anjali as nikki n muskaan were with padma

ridhima 's phn rang

ri - anjali mera phn pass Karo na

Anji - ( she took her phn n saw armaan 's number n looked at ridhima n raised her eye brow)
Ohooo Jeeju ka phn hai

ri -( smiles n said) toh phn do

Anji - Ohoo badi jaldi hai tujhe baat karne Ki

ri - anjali please do na

Anji - ye le

ridhima was abt to take her phn when Anji picked up the phn n set it on loud speaker

ridhima glares at her n anji winked her

Ar - hello

ri - hello ( very nervously)

Ar - tumhari awaaz ko kya hua
itni nervous kyun ho
r u ok

ridhima smiles n anji smiles seeing his concern

ri - nahi toh... mai theek hun...
aap bataiye aapne kaise call kiya

Ar - kaise call kiya matlab
tumhe miss karraha tha toh kardiya... aur waise bhi tum meri hone waali biwi ho mai tumhe kabhi bhi call karsakta hun yaar
it's my right

Anji smiles n said

Anji - not yet Jeeju

armaan was shocked n he said

Ar - Ohhh toh aap loag ho meri biwi ke pass issiliye woh itni nervous thi

ridhima smiles n anji continued

Anji - correction Jeeju
biwi nahi hone waali biwi
abhi bhi aap dono ke shaadi ko kuch ghante baaki hai

Ar - rasme duniya ke liye hai
meri shaadi toh already hogayi hai ridhima se
u see jab dil se usey apni biwi maan liya toh ye rasme rivaaj n all kya cheez hai

Anji - ohhh
tab toh aapne dil se honey moon bhi manaliya hoga

ridhima smacks anjali on her shoulder

armaan smiles n said

Ar - woh saari details mai aapko nahi bataunga
kyunki meri honeymoon partner aap loago ke paas hai usey bhejtey hi nahi ho yahan toh mai bichaara akela Jaakar kya karun

ridhima blushed n anji laughed n said

Anji - dnt wry Jeeju kuch hi ghante baaki hai uske baadh aapki biwi ko aapke paas bhej dengey
phir aap aaram se saari details share Karlo

ridhima snatched the phn n anji smiles

ri - armaan aapko koi kaam nahi hai kya

Ar - Arey itna important kaam karraha hun yaar tumhe nazar nai aaraha
aayega bhi kaise tum toh ho hi nahi yahan dekhne ko

ri - Acha... kya kaam karrahe ho aap

Ar - actually it's a secret
but tum meri better half banarahi ho toh Tumhe batata hun

ridhima smiles n anji leaves the room giving her some privacy

Ar - tumhe pata hai sangeet mein mujhe ek bahot hi khoobsurat ladki mili

ri - kya...

Ar - haan... ( he smiles n said) actually woh tumse bhi bahot khoobsurat thi

ridhima mouth opened wide n she fumes with anger

ri - aap sangeet mein dusre ladkiyon ko taadne aaye they

Ar - nahi... Aaya toh Tumhare liye tha but uss ladki ki khoobsurati ne toh mere hosh udaa diye
uski badi badi aankhein...
uske lambe lambe Baal
uski pyaari si choti si naak
uske gorey gorey gaal
aur uske honth

ri - mujhe nahi sunna uske baarein mein
aapko jo karna hai woh kijiye

Ar - Arey par uska naam toh sunlo

ri - nahi...

n she cuts the call in anger

armaan smiles n said

Ar - Mrs ridhima armaan jealoused mallik

he smiles more

ridhima was angry on armaan
how dare he talk abt any other girl infront of her n that too on the day of their marriage

nikki. muski Anji came back
as Anji told abt the phn convo to them n they both came to tease ridhima

nikki - kya baat hai yaar Jeeju ne honeymoon plans bhi banaliya

muski - aur toh aur dil se biwi maan liya
Haaye

ridhima glares at them n they both stopped right there

ri - mujhe armaan ke baarein mein koi baat nahi karni

Anji - Oye tujhe ekdum se kya hua abhi toh bade muskuraatey hue baat karrahi thi
abhi ekdum se itna gussa

ri - woh armaan( she was abt to say but stopped in middle as it was their convo n she dnt want any further teasing)

nikki- haan armaan kya

ri - kuch nahi

she turned to her cupboard n muski whispers in Anji n nikki 's ear

muski - ye kya siyyapa hogaya
ridzi ko itne gusse mein maine pehli baar dekha

nikki - aur toh aur armaan ke naam se gussa
pehle kaise sharmaati thi
ab dekh
poori biwi ki tarah gussa hogayi
n they both Giggles

Anji - shut up guys

padma calls them n they trio went down

ridhima phn rang again n without even looking at the caller she picked up the phn

ri - hello ( in angry tone)

Ar - Mrs mallik ko itna gussa bhi aata hai

ri - mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni

Ar - par mujhe toh karni hai

ri - kyun... ab aapko aapki uss dreamgirl ki yaad nahi aarahi

armaan smiles n said

Ar - kuch jal raha hai

ri - ( she looked here n there n said)
nahi toh kuch bhi nahi jalraha

armaan laughs n said

Ar - kuch ka matlab koi...
tumhe jalan horahi hai

ri - nahi... mujhe koi jalan nahi horahi hai

Ar - Acha... toh phir mere kisi ladki ke baarein mein sochne se tumhe itna gussa kyun aaraha hai

ri- kyunki aap sirf mere ho... aur aap par

( she realized what she said n hit her forehead)

armaan smiles wide n said

Ar - Mujhpar sirf kya ridhima
aagey bhi bolo

ri - woh... armaan...

Ar - hmmm bolo mai sunraha hun

ridhima blushed n armaan said

Ar - waise mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum mere baarein mein itni possessive ho ke apne aap par hi gussa hojaogi

ri - matlab

Ar - matlab ye ke jis ladki ki mai baat karraha tha woh toh tum hi thi
ri - huh...
she make a fool of herself infront of him n really felt embarrassed

Ar - sangeet mein sabse zyaada khoobsurat toh tum hi lagrahi thi na
toh Tumhare bhi badi badi aankhein hai pyaari si cute si choti si naak hai lambe lambe Baal hai gorey gorey gaal hai aur

ri - aap mera mazaak udaarahe they

Ar - meri majaal ke mai apni biwi ka mazaak udaun
no way

ri - phir bhi mujhe aapse baat nahi karni

Ar - Acha... sochlo
kyunki aana toh Tumhe mere pass hi hai
aur kab tak bina baat kiye rahogi mujhse

ri - armaan

Ar - haan

ri - aap bahot burey ho

Ar - aur aap bahot khoobsurat ho

she blushed n armaan smiles

she cuts the call n said

ri - stupid ridhima tu bahot hi badi ghadi hai
armaan ke saamne apna hi mazaak banaliya
pata nahi woh kya soch rahe hongey mere baarein mein ki kitni dumbo hun Mai

she whined like a kid

Ar - Oye hoye
kitni bholi hai meri ridhima
( he laughs) but bahot hi cute lagti hai ( he kissed her photo)



evening at 7 pm

mallik mansion

Rahul was ready n he looked in the mirror n sets his sherwaani
he wore a white color sherwaani with silver beats on it

Atul came n said

Atul - Abey oye teri shaadi nahi hai
jo itna saj raha hai

Rahul - haan toh isme kya bura hai meri nahi par mere bhai ki shaadi hai
uske baadh zyaada handsome mujhe hi toh dikhna hai

abhi - Acha... kyun muskaan ke saath aaj sagai karraha hai

Atul laughed n abhi gave a hi5 to Atul

Rahul - Abey saale
tu toh aise bolraha hai jaise tu sirf armaan ke taraf se zabardasti taiyyar horaha hai
nikita ko Koun taad raha tha sangeet mein aur kya chipak chipak ke dance karraha tha

now Rahul n Atul laughed n hi5 each other

abhi n Rahul looked at Atul who was enjoying n Rahul said
Rahul - champ waise tu bhi kam nahi hai yaar

abhi - haan hum Toh atleast armaan ki help karne gaye they sangeet ke din but ye toh anjali ke saath hi tha poore sangeet

Rahul - haan
kutta bada hi fast forward hai tu

armaan came n saw them bickering like kids n smiles to himself n sets his sherwaani
he wore a golden color heavy work sherwaani
n was looking damn hot in the outfit

abhi looked at him n said

abhi - Ohooo
Dulhe raja aagaye

Rahul n Atul looked at armaan n smiles

Atul- armaan mere bhai ( he hugs him) tu toh ekdum prince charming lagraha hai

Ar- Oye champ mai lag nahi raha
mai hun hi prince charming yaar

Rahul - bhabhi ka

Ar - Ofcourse ye bhi koi poochne waali baat hai



Gupta mansion

Anji was ready in pink color saari with silver beats on it
muski wore golden color net saari
nikki was dressed in peach color saari with golden beats on it
the three of them looking awesome
but the bride was the show stopper
ridhima was dressed in red color heavy lehenga with golden color work on it
her hair tied in a bun she wore heavy jewelry n also a nose pin
which makes her look more beautiful
her hands were covered with white n red bangles ( jooda) n her make up was minimal as she is far more beautiful to apply heavy make up


Anji looks at ridhima n said

Anji - wowww ridzi tu toh bahot hi Sundar lagrahi hai

muski - aaj toh armaan Jeeju gaye kaam se

nikki - mai toh ye soch rahi hun ke woh apne aapko control kaise karengey

she laughs n muski n anji joined her
Ridhima became crimson red

Anji - Haaye shringar pe kya jaadu chada hai

n the three girls hugs ridhima


baraat came n padma welcome them by doing aarti

as he entered Gupta mansion his eyes were searching only her

he went n sat on the mandap n pandit ji started chanting mantars

it was time to bring bride n the girls bring ridhima n makes her sit beside armaan n armaan admired her n she blushed more
they both exchanged. jaimaala
he filled her maang with the sindoor n some of the sindoor fell on her nose n they both smiles n he tied mangalsutra around her neck n she shivers due to his touch n armaan smiles
they both got up n they took seven phere 's

n finally they are married to each other n

pandit ji - aaj se aap dono pati patni kehlaayengey

everybody smiles n armaan helds her hand n whispers

Ar - finally aap ab meri biwi bangayi
Mrs mallik

ridhima blushed n looked at him
armaan winks At her n ridhima looked down not taking more his gaze on her

Jootey chupai rasam took place and after lot of masti teasing
girls wins n armaan gave them their demanded amount n boys smiles seeing their faces glowing with happiness

ridhima 's bidaayi was somewhat different
padma n Shashank happily gave their blessing with some tears but they were the happiest parents rite now as they know ridhima will be more happy in mallik mansion n armaan n others will love her unconditionally
nani smiles n hugged ridhima n kissed her forehead

Anji hugged n had some tears

nikki n muski both hugged her n teased her

Ridhima smiles through her tears n armaan grip tightens on her hand


they both look at each other n went forward to their car n they sat in the car

Ar - Dnt cry
mai utna bhi bura insan nahi hun

ridhima smiles n said

ri - armaan

Ar - haan armaan ki jaan

ridhima blushed n hide her face in his chest n armaan hugged her
n smiles



dats it for today
please part ke khatam hone tak sona mat haan
hahaha
thanks everyone for your comments
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with loads of love
HUMERA

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Posted: 10 years ago

ahye ridhima aapne aap se ghusa ho gai hhahaha
i loved that teasing scene loved it totally...

great job humz
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome and lovely part
ar little moments and gang masti amazing
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey ...i just read it in one go...and i cant explain how wonderful it was...just loved it to the core...armaan and riddhima are both sooo cute and sweet...i just dont have words to describe how wonderful u write the convos between themm...
love it to the core...

keep it up 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kitna cute cudling cudling wala part tha 😳 .. Haila inni jaldi shaadi ho gaya aur bidai bhi wahhh 👍🏼 ab na humi malik mantion ki na ghar me jaane k baad wali mast si rasme likhna will njoyyy reading it 😊

Phir uskeee baaaddd ... Phir kabhi bataungi 🤣

Update soon next part 😉
Edited by zakky - 10 years ago

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