Arjun-Subhadra FF (Mahabharata) In Modern Day (Note on Page-20)

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Awesome

beautiful update Di

loved it

so heavenly mesmerising..

pleasant

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

FANTABULOUS update Aru Di...Hats off to you...👏👏👏

S-U-P-E-R-B...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love You for this update Di...😊😊

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: shipreeta
And yes I loved Shikha and Vrish Sharma banned 😆😃
But tell me are you sure Shikha means from fire? From my knowledge of Hindi Shikha is hair or more presisely pony tail/plaits of hair.

Draupadi and Chankya were both known as "Khuli Shikha" waale du to their respective vows

Shikha means flame it can be associated with fire and hair agnishikha is flame of fire

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Brishti Sarkar

@CaptainSpark

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

What a sweet update! It was such a delight. A feel good one.. I was so glad to see some romance!!! Although the thrill is still intact and I am excited about the story 😃 update soon soon!!! And yes, update about Vrish and Shikha too!!! And I am missing Archi 😆 where is she :P
Krish is very adorable ofcourse, if we leave aside Parth. Any girl would want him you make him so desirable and lovable !!!

Next update.. Make it long! Updates are too short :"(

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Aarti

@TheSilverDoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Beautiful updatd Aru di. Start of Parth and Subha 's love 😳
What happened to Vrish and Sikha? 😛 pls update soon

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

wow wat a romantic update!! loved Parth nd Subha's scene its soo soo beautiful Subha's innosence n Parth's new yet known feelings dat magic of first love..its really special fr everyone..nyways Krishn n Sree scene was beautiful too bt Parth-subha is sooo beautifulll loved it :) update sooonn!! :D

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Wow...chooo cute AruDi..

Parth -subha scene...aww...very sweet...😉

Krish-sree scene...Lovely...😳

Loved this update very much...U have penned it beautifully..Thanks a lot😳👏

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Sorry for commenting late Aru...I was inactive in IF for a few days

I simply loved it

Krishna & Shree moments & ArSu moments are so sweet & innocent. The innocence of first love betwn ArSu wow...it was beautifully written 😳

Continue soon 😊

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ElMystique

@ElMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

It was awesomely romantic aru di ..I could feel the innocence in Parth not of forget the blossoming attraction . Sree and Krish were elegant .What do I say about subah I liked the fact that she is ambitious and passionate about photography .I have always seen photography as a mirror which reflects ones persona .Subah and photography is a fantabulous combination.. Waiting for progress in the story teenage innocence ,ambitions ,emotions and love is always great ..

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#220

1st January, 2015
Athens, Greece
Subha enters into her room and locks her door. The landlord aunty didn't scold her today for late which she was dreading. She is a widow old lady, a retired principal from a college,lives alone. Subha thinks human nature is same irrespective of countries. Lady principals have to be strict be it in India or Greece.
Alex was pursuing Subha to stay more but Subha was not feeling like. Hence he had to withdraw himself from party too. Subha feels bad she cant return Alex what he does for her. But she is helpless. She might be narcissist but that's the way she is, her profession and herself her world evolves around these two only.
Switching the light off Subha settles herself on bed. Before she pulls the bed sheet suddenly her eyes were caught to the figure standing on doorway. She trembles because she very well remembers she locked the door and windows and she is here for more than a year, she knows very well there is no other entrance in room. She hurriedly goes down from bed and runs to the figure holding the bottle of pepper spray firmly that she uses to keep for her safety.
"Who are you? How did you get in here?" she managed to ask with the dry voice.
The tall figure turned to her. And in that dimlight she could see his face clearly. She suddered, pepper spray fell down from her hand. Her brain had stopped working before.
" Paarthh." her mouth kept open. She had no power to think. His strong hand shut her mouth although it was not needed. She had no power to shout.
A sinister smile in his angelic face had made him looking more other worldly.His jacket shield off his body as he bent and picked Subha up as easily as if plucking a rose from tree. And in a blink she was on bed with him top of her, busy showering trails of desperate kisses all over her forhead, chick, nose, jawline, neck, biting, licking and his hands forcefully stripping her off her night dress.
She tried to speak but all she could do only moan as her mouth was occupied by his. Such fierce was his kiss it felt she will be sucked of her life through the kiss. His rough arms was running through her delicate skin leaving scratch everywhere as mark of occupation. she could feel every inch of his masculine body. She could see his jeans and t-shirt falling down as she senses his hardness touching her sensitive spot.
"Parth please slow down you are hurting me." She cries but that had no impact on her violent attacker. In response he turns more aggressive that takes her senses away.
"Nooo." Subha sits up on bed, sweating profusely only to find herself fully covered with nightdress intact completely. Her bed cover remains undisterbed by any aggression. She runs to door only to find its locked properly as she did. So is the windows. Every part of the room remains as it is without any mark of anyone else than her's existence. She looks herself into mirror uncovering her. Except the perspirations on body and anxiety on face not a single scratch or mark was there to prove anyone's forceful intervention.
She covers herself silently and goes back to the bed. Eyes beaming with tears. She doesnt know the reason of such nightmares stricking her. May be psychriatists can tell her the reason but she doesnt want to go for counselling herself. It will only cause pinching the deepest secrets burried in her darkest corners of heart. The memories of 17 years back will flood her now apparently peaceful life. She unchains her bag and takes out a small album. She opens and accusingly looks at the 17 years old innocent looking school boy.
"Why Parth? Why did you change my life like this?"
She turnes over the page, pouting, efforting to control her cry. She knows she will never get the answer, she will never meet him again. And what's the fruit? He has forgotten her she knows that.
Her eyes struck the pictures Parth recieving olympic gold medal or world championship trophy, Parth recieving Arjun prize from India's prime minister, Parth with his beautiful girlfriends, Parth on stage as Rockstar. She doesnt know why she has collected all these pictures. Its evident Parth has moved on in his life and so is she herself. But 17 years old incident didnt let her be back to the normal life again, neither she could ever think of settling down even after deliberate family pressures.
She picks up her camera again, her considering that her world contains only her photography and herself, that's only half of the truth. The nightmares is her companion for last 17 years too. Parth who was gone from her life 17 years back still intervenes in her senses sometimes tenderly, sometimes forcefully, sometimes violently, but all his touched seems as real as it was 17 years back.
Is it a result of her secret desires or physical needs? She doesnt know. But she knows that's a part of her life too and she doesnt want to let the sensation of such dreams go by being cured.
She suddenly feels quite cold. She pulls the blanket and lies down. The champagne's dose was a bit too much to get such nightmere she thinks. A blush reddened her heavenly face realizing the sensuousness of the dream as she slips into drowse.

Edited by RoseFairy - 10 years ago