Arjun-Subhadra FF (Mahabharata) In Modern Day (Note on Page-20)

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Initially i planned to write a Arjun-Subhadra story on modern day back drop , but was not getting an interesting theme, the earlier was not seeming good so i changed the theme.

i know i have many unfinished work in Mahabharat forum actually i am going through very sentimental and emotional way as the show is on its climax , so until the show ends and emotions settles down can't continue it with a calm mind , but ofcourse i will continue those.

but in meantime an idea came , since Mahabharata itself is a very sad story , so all stories will lead to a sad note , hence if i want to create something light hearted without thinking of sad futures of the characters i have to bring them in modern day, so suddenly a modern day idea came

although i had kept the title as Arjun-Subhadra FF but many important Mahabharata character gets focus here , where focus necessarily always not on Arjun-Subhadra , but as they remain ultimate couple and their story essence revolves gradually i am keeping this as title

i need all of your suggestion after i start this story i will be thankful if you all cooperate


Disclaimer : this story is on an extremely open minded bunch of people and so many times is in bold in concept and approach , my readers have to bear with that , am already apologizing if anyone feels offended but i can't control imagination

THEME

the main story is divided into two themes one is modern day to day lives and other one is a science fiction theme, i have started day to day theme now but readers should know what is my science fiction theme.

Science and Mythological Fiction

there are four epics in world Ramayan , Mahabharat , Iliad and Odis except these there are several mythologies in all the countries. If one can read all these carefully you will find a certain similarity in all the epics , specially one mention is in every epic that is celestial weapon. and the most developed form of this celestial weapons are found in Mahabharata so that means in the age of Mahabharata technology had reached to its height. after that even in Greek mythology we can read similar types of mentions and it is said Kurukshetra war was known to Greeks and there is an archelogical site in greece or rome where ancient sculptures found portraying the great war and it says even trojan war didn't use such technology and greece was keen to take knowledge from india in such celestial weaponry technology.
So we can't say everything is just mere imagination or just a myth how come then both Indian and Greek epics mention the same technologies? We have to admit ancient people knew such technologies we can't even imagine. So if that celestial weapon can be remade in modern day world that could have both positive and negative effect. in positive effect it can have rvolutionary change in world , poverty and discrimination can be ended, world can connect with past and present and future and also with other world, on the same time if it falls in wrong hand civilization will be in danger.
We all know there exist to energy positive and negative, God and Devil , so the secret that was lost with the time of epic , search for that has began because global warming is leading the world to apocalypse gradually hence we need the guard and protection of celestial weapon, both positive and negative force are in search of this.
Now we all know that in the age of epic every character was born had some super power but they were human and because among all epics its Mahabharat which was most developed in all aspect , technically , emotionally and the relations had some unfold and untold story and all died with dissatisfaction unlike other epics who actually knew that they will die and they finished all works in one birth so those characters needed to be explored and story need to explored that was almighty's wish. hence almighty is repeating the story with few character having similarity with Mahabharat and few added character to get the secret of celestial weapon
we know Krishna was only character of Mahabharata who is god but he was born and died as other human, so he had to aspects Divine and humanly aspects, keeping aside his divine aspect , taking only human qualities of him a scientist in modern day is all out for the quest of celestial weapon, his name is Soham Chauhan who is called Krish by his near and dear one. and story unfolds through his research.

Day to Day Theme

The way central character of science fiction theme is Krish , the central character of day to day theme is Parth the insuperable part.
Parth Kapoor is a 34 years old handsome, bachelor former sportman , world champion and gold medalist in Olympiad, and now owner of a sport academy having a respectable position in Government Sport Ministry and now he is also a rockstar who had own music albums and composition , heartthrob of many ladies. He had quite a lot of relationships but nothing lasted long because he is like a free bird who is not ready to take responsibilities. So all his girlfriends broke up and settled down. He doesn't mind but one whom he still misses is his childhood love Subhakshi who is disappeared untimely from his life. One day suddenly Parth got to know something about his past that changes his life forever. First half of my story deals how Parth overcomes that unexpected change in his life and through Parth different character of the story who had similarities with certain epic characters are being unfolded.
His romantic story with Subha is center of this theme

with science history is related a historian is needed to go through Indian and Greek myths so there are even narrators had a part so from Indian side there is Archi and Greek side Alex but they are minor role here.




INDEX

PART-1 - PAGE-1
PART-2 - PAGE-3
PART-3 - PAGE-4

PART-4 - PAGE-6
PART-5 - PAGE-9

PART-6 - PAGE-12
PART-7 - PAGE-14
PART-8 - PAGE-16
PART-9 - PAGE-21
PART-10-PAGE-23
PART-11-PAGE-25
PART-12-PAGE-27
PART-13-PAGE-30
PART-14-PAGE-32
PART-15-PAGE-34
PART-16-PAGE-36
PART-17-PAGE-38

TEASER
PAGE-27
PAGE-40

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Posted: 11 years ago
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the trading capital of India , Mumbai doesn't sleep at night. It was an usual night in the metro. a big apartment was in affluent area of Navi mumbai standing silently , city perhaps doesn't sleep , but many citizens do , hence there was complete silence there , as the clock is saying its 3' o clock in night. a four wheeler stopped near the apartment , a dog barks , the watchman looked up indifferently and opened the door for parking lot , this is usual routine , he didn't get surprised, The car had been parked . a tall , handsome figure approached from the car. and advanced towards the lift.
Parth Kapoor , the nameplate shined , the handsome figure unlocked the key and entered , threw the jacked on sofa and advances towards washroom , need to freshen himself after a late night party so that he doesn't get hang over , the next day he has a special training class in academy , with most potential students of him.
Let us get introduced to ou hero , our dear Parth, a 34 years old former world champion in Martial Arts , gold medalist in Olympic and now owner of own academy of Martial arts ,a breathtakingly handsome man with a desirable 6 feet 2 inches tall and equally muscular , stout body enough to take senses away from ladies , with long flowing hair upto neck , sharp feature as demigod , big hazel eyes and an heart warmingly charming yet childishly innocent smile. But most shocking part of his identity is , he is still bachelor and unbelievably single.
Ofcourse being single is by his choice, not led by any pressure or circumstances. But he loves his freedom and not ready to compromise with that in any situation , so he is happy with stature. Not that he had not in relationship earlier, well none will believe that about a handsome hunk as him, yes he had quite a lot no.s of girl friends right from student life and some most gorgeous ones , but nothing longed last , eventually every one settled down but he remained like him. Fun loving , care free , always hanging out with friend group. He lost father few years back , mother lives in hometown , having some property of ancestors she doesn't come to live with him , that gave him ultimate freedom to lead life in own style and he is happy with that. Mother asked repeatedly to settle down but Parth is just not ready to take any responsibility.
Only when some times he comes back in late night in his flat , unlocks the key , a thought occurs , if someone would have waited for me.

Edited by RoseFairy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one
Very intersting concept
Do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Aru interesting Parth Kapoor's description reminded me of someone😉I want him to meet his heroine fast Do continue.Feeling relieved to see dem ina lighter,happier sorroundings Thanx 4d pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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refreshing ff aru! plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is extremely interesting.
Please continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting take Aru di, very refreshing and the backdrop In Mumbai, great.
Do continue and thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting Concept .
Please Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow! its really interesting!👏
Parth Kapoor! good!👍🏼
now waitng for Subhadra 😉
do continu soon
thankx for pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start ... waiting for Parth Kapoor's personality to unfold, the tale of his courage and loyalty to one and all...

and subhadra "chopra" (that's the first name that came to my head) 😛 entry
can't wait for the arrival of Abhimanyu Kapoor either!! 😆


Good luck!

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