Arjun-Subhadra FF (Mahabharata) In Modern Day (Note on Page-20)

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

awesome superb part

loved it

it's beautiful

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

The Teaser is perfect & sweet...👏👏 & the update is lovely...😊😊 Keep going Aru Di...😊😃👏

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Amazing update, Aru di

And the emotions of Parth and Subha wishing him and her hug and the emotions that were over-flowing through his body, as if he didn't want to let her go.

Waiting for the next update eagerly

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Superb update.Each of them are celebrating new year at different places.Feeling happy that the pentagon got to spend it together.And Krish...my charming lovehe is so optimistic about his baby.Looking forward to the birth.And Vrish and Shikha😲what is wrong between them🤔Hope everything gets cleated soon.

And my Parth he is missing Krish and Subha awww🤗Loved the cute little ArSu moment☺️Also loved the possessive naughty Krish bro.And the last line by Parth "Happy new year Subha my love"it touched my heart.Hope he get back his lost love soon

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Very nice update.
Thnx 4 pm.

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Brishti Sarkar

@CaptainSpark

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Beautiful update! I loved the Parth Subha scene and also Krish and Parth's bondings! This is the first time I am reading something in modern day so passionate about ArSu. I just love love love the ending.. how he says Happy New Year!

I have no idea who Alex is though! But I am dying to read more.. the Vrish Shikha parts and about Subha's feelings... Apart from Parth who is anyways lovable, I love Krish too! His character is so exciting and innovative!

I am eagerly waiting for the story to actually progress and eager to see the twist and turns 😉 Now u promise us a good story always so this one should not be an exception 😆 Update sooon!

PS- The teaser was more intriguing than the actual chapter 😛

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

i luvd d teaser more 😉 it was full of mystries..vrish-shikha's scene ws weirdst of all dey must hv sm twistd love story!! waiting fr deir story to ve unfold..parsh were super adorable..two brothers r like two lovers aww love dis line yaar!! n dn luvd how frm krish's body warmth parth's mind turnd towrds subha..u hv givn a lil scene of dem bt evn in dat short scene parth-subha turned out as a mesmerizing couple..oh yess how cn i frget archi!! lol she s indeed d modern vedvyasa alrdy guessd bout d occurences of dis nw yr! n krish s going to be daddy soon lv his wifes description n also sri's! update soon! 😊