Arjun-Subhadra FF (Mahabharata) In Modern Day (Note on Page-20)

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

big bold theme is yet not there

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Finally my ParSh is here and oh how adorable dey are!! This update is all about them..Loved how Krish, Shimla, Boarding school and that Doll has made a special place in his heart!! and @Patrarekha didi the hint of big bold theme is already there No? The sudden uncomfortableness when Parth felt Krish's warm breath..and though it was strange behaviour for him but he likes dat..he likes dat kind of pampering from Krish..It's a big hint indeed of d upcoming events!! nyways in one word swt update hehe waitign fr d next chap!!
and yes @Rose thanks alott for continuing this story!!😉😉😳😳😛😛

Edited by sohiniluvsmusic - 10 years ago

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

wow

👏 loved ur writing on parth and krish

krish is naughty and loves parth that he pacify like he does his girlfriend hug from back kisses him🤣 write more on parav 😉 love their chemistry btw where is subhi😲 when she will come

write sooon

don't make us wait 😡

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Oh...So Sweet update.Di👏👏.

Krish is so naughty.

Loved this Parav😳😳

Thanks for the pm

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

A really sweet & superb update Aru Di...😊😃

Thnkxxx a lot for updating Di...I was waiting quite impatiently for this update...😊

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Finally read it Aru.Sooo happieee to see my ParSh again.This Krish is so naughty.His charm makes Parth fulfill his wishes.And Sree...she is so lucky..She got Krish.And what is Krish's special gift.Please update fast

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@JyotsnaSharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

I read this in one go ty so much for writing this and ty f or the pm please do notify me for the nxt update

Just loved how archi cares for parth as a young sis a great historian indeed who likes to bring his weak pts

Subha is cute and hardworking
Parth is just better as his name
Krishna manmohana madav
Shikha and vrish loved it at least he gets a good end this time
When will Pandvas reach their to witness parth and subha Reunion of ...
And how about vrish and shikha are there too on their... H...maybe i hv said a bit more just my POV love you for including vrisha
Little sad about his lil daughter

Xoxo js

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

"Parth, someone is looking for Krish. Go and check" commanded the superintendent sir. Who was having a routine supervision of the hostel. Parth silently obeyed pulling himself up from books.
Coming downstairs he found a boy around 10 with big inquisitive eyes. He was wearing schooldress "Who are you, where is Krish bro?i had to give important message to him." says the boy in one breath.
"Krish is out for some work" says Parth. " I am his roommate Parth, tell me your name i will tell him."
"I am Satyaki, but where has Krish bro went? someone special has come to meet him with me. What will i tell to her." Satyaki looked worried.
This is second time Parth is listening this 'Someone Special' term in a day. And this someone special is a girl. and is related to Krish. Means another problem is on way. Parth has experience of dealing with girls enquiring for Krish. When Krish is probably chilling out with some other girl. Only Parth knows how he manages handling them (some of them also try to flirt with him).
Parth shook his head and held Satyaki's hand dragged him to a corner where none can see them.
" Where is she? Take me to her." says Parth hurriedly.
"but" Satyaki hesitated.
"i am best friend of your Krish bro. You can trust me, you can ask about Parth bro to your Krish bro." Parth says assumingly.
Satyaki seemed convinced. " she is waiting outside gate" he tells.
Parth comes out of hostel and found a girl standing there with her back towards him. A small girl she seems. From feature she doesn't appear more than 12. Parth wonders. Such a small girl too is Krish's girl friend? She had also a schooldress. With a schoolbag on back. And water bottle. The girl has a pinkish complexion, the parts of her hands and legs are seen seem like as soft and smooth as made of butter. Her silky brownish hairs are tied with as two crests with ribbons. The girl was looking at the snowy Himalayan mountain peak with ultra most attention.
"Hello" says Parth. The girl moved as if interrupted in enjoying Himalayan view but yet didn't turn.
"Krish bro is not there, i brought his Roommate." says Satyaki " Now may i go to play di you promised to let me soon" Satyaki seemed in quite hurry to leave. He was as usual talking in a single breathe.
"just leave Satyaki i don't need you" an annoyed jingle soothed Parth's ears and his eyes at same time soothed and stretched as the girl turned to him.
"Emerald eyes, big eyelashes , curved eyebrow as bow, lips as if made of rose petals such red and smooth.
"Is she a girl or snow white of fairy tale?" Parth says under his breath. " Why it feels i have seen her earlier?" he kept wondering.
"you are his roommate?" the girl approached. Parth's breath got heavier, he was still fighting with his memories. But he managed to answer anyhow
"yes and best friend too" he announced proudly.
It was not clear whether the girl was convinced or not but suddenly she brought a tiffin box out of her schoolbag and stretched towards Parth
" give it to your best friend" the feather like soft smooth touch of her fingers while handling over the tiffinbox at a time blushed Parth and made him longing for more.
"I have to go, otherwise there will be problem at home." She said worriedly looking at wristwatch and boarded to her tiny cycle. Before Parth could say something. Satyaki was already gone.
" do give the box to him" she screamed as she paddled her cycle, so fast it seemed to Parth that she is flying in air.
"I will" he screamed before she disappeared from eye sight.
Parth came back with a trance whether it was just a dream? she was human or a fairy? Or was i just dreaming?
He kept the tiffin box on table. He wanted to open it but cant because it belongs to Krish, he cant hurt him by doing what he didn't give consent yet. But this was so unlike any other girlfriend of Krish. They handed him letters cards even some gifts but not a tiffin box for Krish. This girl is really 'Someone Special' for him it seems. And then Parth gave a face palm to himself
"I forgot to ask her name. Silly me."

Edited by RoseFairy - 10 years ago

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Nice & Cute update Aru...😊

So Paarth met the green emerald eye beauty. She's definitely Subhi 😳
Oh Paarth blushed when her fingers touched his while handing over the tiffin box 😳 😉
This is getting interesting...How Ar met Su. 😆
Continue Soon 😛

Edited by ...Hemangi - 10 years ago