Arjun-Subhadra FF (Mahabharata) In Modern Day (Note on Page-20)

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pooja123ar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

nice story ,continue soon.after flashback ends,pls include krishna rukmini story too.

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Read all the parts in one go & I must say u are a brillaint writer. 😊 How such themes comes to ur mind ??

Neways I loved ur story & theme of amalgamation of Ancient Indian & Greek Epic. 😊

I loved Archi the most --- the modern VedVyasa 😆. I was 🤣 while reading it. And i must say she gives a good fight to Paarth in words. Loved their bonding. 😆

I loved Archi's imagination - Panch Pandavas - Pentagon 😆

And yes Vrish-Shikha pairing was a shocker 😲. I was like reading those lines at least three times thinking that I read it wrong or missed some parts in between. But then this story is based on modern day... so yes this was something out of the box. Plz reveal the story of this mysterious alliance soon.
I felt sad for Vrish, got punished for no fault of his own. Tragic in the epic & tragic in modern day too 😭 😭. I also felt sad for the little daughter of Vrish whom he left with his in-laws 😭 Maybe he thought that his tainted reputation may have some affect on his daughter & that's why he left her in his in-laws care thinking it to be best for his daughter. Just my POV...

OMG there are so many things I Ioved about this story... Krish & his mischievious charm & his British wife, Krish's magnetic personality description. To count the no.s of how many girls had came in his life would be challenge for even great mathematicians of world. 🤣. By reading this line i remembered somebody commented on Krishna's Limca Record of 16000 wives. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 Deep green doe eyed Subha and her baby & her love 😆, Common Gf of Pentagon Shikha 😆, Paarth's comment on Naksh & Suhas 's hanky panky act and many more.

Update Soon ... I am dying to read this story further 😊

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js1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Yes I did come across this earlier. Beautifully written story.

Please do let me know when you update.

Thank you always for such wonderful pieces of writing.

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Its long time u have not updated this unusual story.

I m missing Archi - the modern Ved Vyasa, Vrish, Krissh, Panch Pentagon 😆

Please update it ASAP 😊

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Strikhedonia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Please continue this FF dear!😃

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Update!!! Update !!! Update !!!

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Read all the parts of the story.. Its really beautiful. 😊 I always awaited an Arjun Subhadra story..and how interesting in your story Sonarika is Subha? 😊

I am waiting for the meeting.. Please do update. :)

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

are you those few readers who are still interested you are sure i should continue this? i mean i told from beginning there are things in my story that will not be digested by many of you all , i should specially mention that there is angle of bisexuality , accidental sex and other things in this story and i know general mindsets wont accept this. so i hesitate to write this story in indiaforums where people are generally not so liberal

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar
Read all the parts of the story.. Its really beautiful. 😊 I always awaited an Arjun Subhadra story..and how interesting in your story Sonarika is Subha? 😊
I am waiting for the meeting.. Please do update. :)

thanks for the encouraging comment but
are you sure Brishti , sorry for being skeptical but as you know our pov s walk on complete different ways are you sure you want to read my works? i believe my readers by now have understood my mentality my thoughts through my writings hence they are habituated with me but i cant say the same about you actually writing is my weakness hence i am quite sensitive with my works if you know what i meant

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: RoseFairy
are you those few readers are interested you are sure i should continue this? i mean i told from beginning there are things in my story that will not be digested by many of you all , i should specially mention that there is angle of bisexuality , accidental sex and other things in this story and i know general mindsets wont accept this. so i hesitate to write this story in indiaforums where people are generally not so liberal

I understand what u r trying to say Aru... but this story is fine with me and I m looking forward to read this story further 👍🏼. I myself read number of stories having such sub-plots in the story. But whether members of IF will be able to take this one is definitely a question although this story is written in modern day mindset having liberal thoughts.

Just ask for some other readers review & take a decision. If u decide to continue this story somewhere else, plz do let me know, I will definitely read ur story 😃