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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Read it thrice already, Sandy.

Atleast one of our innumerable theories about the prologue has been proved wrong.

And I'm really happy it has.

Never wanted Khushi to suffer alone through a pregnancy and then give up the baby for adoption.

And its a relief to know Arnav never really gave up on Khushi.

Its a testament to his love for her that he kept an eye on her.

Loved the fact that he was there for Khushi's graduation.

The scene between Nani and Khushi touched me the most.

Devyani loves Khushi like one of her own.

She would surely be the happiest if her grandson and Khushi get together.

Their emotional hug touched my heart.

Earlier on it was good to see the friends with Nandu.

He is a nice guy and everybody seems to like him a lot.

Payal likes Chilli Crab! 😉

I got a little emotional today while reading.

The story is coming to an end.

I hope and wish you'll start another one soon.

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sivatharshini

@sivatharshini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Fantastic update !! Love it

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Res

Edited.

So it was all true. NK and Khushi were engaged not anymore though, *big sigh*. The sigh was because Khushi is release from the burden of the engagement to which her heart never agreed.

NK is really a nice guy. He even after the breaking of his engagement is here in India to attend the wedding of his ex-fiances friend. The awkwardness was there but I liked how everyone made a genuine effort to make NK part of the group. NK made Khushi feel light with his conversation, glad he wants to be friend than accusing her.

Loved Nani. She is the true matriarch of the family. Old yet her ways are the one which hold the right words to heal and provide the required strength to ones heart.

"Happiness. I pray for the happiness ... Because I learnt a long time ago that making wishes could be dangerous. We don't know what is good for us. ... Because I have learnt that when it is time for us to have something, he'll give it to us." (I live by this philosophy)

These words did it for Khushi. She have to let go, to understand the reason why her life turned out like this. And the reason is this only, everything has it's own right time and place... As the saying goes ...

"Waqt se Pehle or kismat se zayada kisiko kuch nahi milta"

And when she gave up arguing with Nani... Door opened and in came Arnav...

Loved how Arnav picked up his lady to complete the catching up. Though this move of his angered me too.

He was watching over (that was his secret), he truly felt that he was the god. Making decision for her, watching over whether she was fine, when he realize he can't let go than just keeping a tab to see her when wanted for his own sanity and when staying away was not possible he sent Aman to get Khushi back (I did have an inclination when Aman mentioned he was there with a friend).

And what else oh yeah he didn't considered Khushi distancing from Payal and Ana. That drove his guilt but not enough to claim his love and I am happy neither them nor NK was the reason for his determination to have her in his life.

The fact that he wants to correct his crime of breaking her heart for the reason that both of them never moved away from that fateful day on terrace 5 years ago. That they still emotionally there on that same spot on terrace was the reason of him letting go all inhibitions and accept the love of his life. That he wants her to be happy, and love her life the way she use to without being cautious and protecting herself every step of life. I let go off the anger I felt and whatever grudge though little I held against Arnav for what he did to Khushi.

What know mattered was his confession and earnest plea that they will work together towards the trust, to make this work for them and then she cried, he cried in each other's arm for the lost years, for the pain they bear, for the love they lost and finally the love they still have for each other in there being.

Bravo Sandhya...👏

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#374

RES Devayani has given some valuable advice to khushi . She is old and experienced enough to understand what khushi is going through . Like others nani to expected Arnav to marry khushi , however life does not move as per our wishes . NK is such a wonderful guy , though khushi broke the engagement , he is still attending Anu's wedding and is ready to help khushi with Arnav . People like NK are rare , if it was any other person in his place , he would have not rested until he had destroyed khushi and her happiness , Khudos NK . Arnav and khushi had to have this conversation . Though khush refused in the beginning eventually she had to give in against Arnav's bossy attitude . Arnav was stalking khushi when he broke up with her , why to break her heart in the first place . Khushi was not pregnant what does that mean ? Did she really take pills ? How is Arnav so sure she was not pregnant ? I thought the women in the prologue is khushi !!!!!!

I am really impatient to know who is the women in the prologue and the baby .

Loved it

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Unreswa ...

Hey Sandhya !!! Ufff... I am still breatheless... Gawd.. With Arnav and Khushi pouring their heart out to each other while coming to Goa I thought I have passed the emotional storm with the protagonists and that was the maximum that Sandhya could affect me with her skills...

But bammm... Sandhya updates and I am as emotionally stirred as I could be ... Kudos to you woman.. You have something in your pen that makes me empathise with the characters so closely... I so loved this update of yours that I have read this 3 times and yet not over it...

The tale started with the happy company of friend with each other, their easy banters, laughing together and finally the clarification that Khushi has broken off with NK...Nk has still come to Ana's wedding and is trying to cope with the changes in his equation with Khushi reinstates the goodness he possesses as a human being.. Still caring for her and looking out for her... This made me believe in the goodness that still is present on the face of the earth though its scarce...

The conversation which Khushi had with Nani was summed up by you in"I have learnt that when it is time for us to have something, he'll give it to us...If you can't find your way, no one will. So, I am absolutely certain, it'll come to you."

This is absolutely true for any human being who has done everything in his power and jurisdiction to make things right but still is waiting for the right thing to happen... Isnt this situation very common between mortals ??? I think it is...

And you Sandhya has been extremely successful in putting this through right and crisp in this update !!!

Then came the part wherein first I was amused but later was hyperventillating with the revelations that was happening along with the explosion that was happening near the shore...When I read about Truth and dare I thought that some verbal jibe and awkward moment is in store between Arnav and Khushi but what happened completely took me by surprise.. Arnav hoisted Khushi and left with her and I thought some up and close moments with arguements are instore but You Sandhya never cease to amaze me...

Once again Khushi verbalised all her pain, sufferings, insecurites and bearings to Arnav making me blurred eyed and in return what Arnav revealed left me gasping for breathe... He actually was watching out for her all this while not only for her safety and well being but for his sanity too !! He was as much attached to her as much Khushi thought that she was shunned and abandonned... The line which finally had me breathing normally was"The knowledge that you were in the same place as I was. If NK wasn't on the terrace that night, it could have been the scene from five years ago. You and I were apart for five years, Khushi. But remained on that terrace during that entire separation. Emotionally." After this line, I felt as if everything found its essence. The turmoil, pain and need of heart ,the need to protect, everything found its cause and probably now will find its way out of their lives.

Their sorrows and tears mingled and so have their love and understanding... Hope that the tempest calms down soon and these two parched souls get the elixir of life... Love for each other...

Very very emotional this was.. Sandhya you have done a comendable job in this update once again.. Respect and love to you... Thanks for ending my weekend so nicely !!! 🤗

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#376

sorry i could not comment before...update came right on when i was on the verge of going out...what a wonderful update...loved all of them akash,payal,anya,aman and above all nandu...what a good friend he turn out be.. arnav at last confessed but his keeping tabs on khushi...how much pain he must be going through by just looking at her from afar...khushi at least knew that they broke apart...and now as all his secret are out, will khushi listen to her heart and move on with him..but last line of update gave me hope that may be their tears will wipe all the anguish of the past

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sairam03

@sairam03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#377

I am speechless. Wow! What a awesome emotional update. Both Arnav and khushi are sailing in the same boat not knowing that they are carrying the same feelings. Last paragraph is something like watching climax scene of romantic movie. At last khushi now knew arnav was always there. They say when a man loves his women he will love her till his last breath. I don't have enough words how I am feeling right now but can say this story is close to my heart. Thank you Sandhya for this wonderful story.

Now my doubt is cleared the women in the prologue is khushi's mother Garima and payal might be the little baby.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Di, do you know how much good it feels to know that he hasn't really given up... hasn't let her go... i have happy tears in my eyes... I know he has is yet to get Khushi's forgiveness...but this single fact that he 'stalked' has made my day... cant explain Di how overwhelmingly happy i'm feeling right now... THANK YOU Di, for this...
loved the update... Khushi-NK, Khushi-Nani convos are brilliantly portrayed... nd NK is indeed a good man, loving him... just cant wait enough to see more...

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smric

@smric

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

I loved it!

I dont know how to explain what i felt..you are amazing..nk arrival was expected even their broken engagement was expected but other things werent.

Nani n khushi's talk was heartfelt. Nani is the person who saw everything, felt everything of her grandchildren emotions.she had been their mother in true sense.

Khushi's dilemma, her confusion broke my heart. I cant imagine what she must be going through with heart n mind in different directions.

Loved the way arnav knows khushi. Loved the way he just picked her up n walked off cos he knows the need. The way their coversation flowed u made me cry. N the confession it was heartfelt..i hope they recover soon. Waiting for that.

Thank you for update.tc👏