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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

beautiful update.. if he loves her so much, why did he do this to her???

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Thank you Aqua ... Totally worth the wait but please please dont make us wait,.. I am going to read all the chapters all over again and write a detailed comment now please get back to working on the next chapter..

Also i was hoping to actually see where the prologue fits in... I was guessing its Liya ??? (Arshis baby) hmm but no well u get back to the next chapter we reader will wallow thinking and writing and rewriting stuff in our heads hoping to get your thoughts right...

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Mimosa

@AsmaXx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

huh****

It is brillant!!! No words for this update

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Oh, damn. This was beautiful! I love how the emotions are described, they feel utterly real. Beautiful, beautiful. :)

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

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Posted: 11 years ago

#385

loved the update.. all the emotions are so beautifully written...

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#386

much needed conversation.. loved it..

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#387

Wow what an update.
Mindblowing
Finally a confession.
Outstanding!

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koisk

@koisk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Really don't know what to say but I was happy that atleast he kept tabs on her. It's just that I felt he was probably too manipulative , he sent her away when he wanted to and brought her when he needed to. I don't know how khushi will react but it would have been hard for me to digest the back that the person whom I loved manipulated me to the extant that I would not know how many more truths were hidden.

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 11 years ago

#389

He watched over her? He couldn't let her be..let her go...I don't get this kind if love.. But I guess there are all kinds... Loved the way you shaped this chapter, Sandhya..all the pain all the longing..all the desperation and mistrust.. ll that need...

Awesome!!!