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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahhhaa!! Well fabulous updates...
Plzzz update da othr parts sooonnn...
Sooner dan ever...
Cant wait to c how sanyu will fyt against dis torture...
N how randhir will realize dat may b hes wrg...n he ll develope a small corner for her...hopefully!!

P.S. :im already luving da trackn da nack of writting sooo make me luv it even more...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys am up again with the next part of A DREAM OR A NIGHTMARE... HOPE U ALL LIKE IT... HAPPY READING

PART -4 CREATING A NEW WORLD

SANYU came up... She cudnt understand wat had just happened... She went to the washroom... To freshen up... She bathed with the chilled water... She was moaning... shivering... Screaming... Shouting... but there was no one to listen to her... She came out... Lit the candles and then looked around... she took a deep breathe then started arranging the room,,,, she didn't utter a word... But tears were not stopping their way... she kept her bags to one side of the room... she took out some woolens from her bag... and spread them all on the floor... Coz she didn't have any sheet or mattress...also her room was extra cold coz there was no sunlight...

She sat on them... Took out the packet of milk from those polybags... She didn't have any glass or any utensil... She some how managed to drink the milk from those plastic packs... some of the milk spilled on her sweater... she did not care... She also brought a bread packet... she ate that too... She was hungry... she didn't have anything since yesterday's morning... then she looked at her mobile... Her mobile had a little battery left... she quickly searched some job vacany in delhi for a software eng... Yes sanyu is a software eng. She quickly forwarded her resume to many companies... Then she kept her mobile aside... And laid down... She had nothing to do... No one to talk... She cudnt tell anyone about her condition... With these thoughts she dozed off... On the other hand... Randhir was just thinking about sanyukta... he was worried about her... He wanted to knw wat she must b doing in that dark room, she is a grl afterall she must b scared... She must b hungry... Then he remembered that he picked milk and bread which she had brought for herself... This was a relief to him and

Randhir to himself: chalo kch to khaya usne... He took a deep breathe...

Sanyu woke up at 4:00 pm... She slowly opened her eyes... she again got scared to finding herself in a dark room... then she remembered everything and again her eyes were wet... she was thirsty now... She had no water... she cannot even ask it from randhir... she again lit the candle... and looked at her watch at was 4:15... She took her wallet... and came out of her room... She didn't even looked at randhir's area... and came straight away out of the house... she shut the door... She had an idea that randhir must not b at home...As soon as she looked out her eyes got shut automatically... She cudnt open them... her head spined a little.. this was due to the bright sunlight which she was seeing after so long as she came out of the dark room... she kept one hand on her Eyes and other on her head... Her eyes became wet again... she somehow managed to open them ... she was frowning now... she went to the shop near her house... She cud easily see the house... She asked the shopkeeper to give her two water bottles... She simultaneously looking at her house coz she didn't lock it... as she doesn't have the keys... She took the water bottles and came back... She entered her dark room or her dark destiny...

On the other hand randhir had got a call from his mother... He was very upset with her... He decided he will never talk to her... she slapped him for that sanyukta... he wanted to break all ties with his mom... he didn't take her call... and just ignored...

Next day sanyu got up at 6:00 am... she quickly got ready... And came out of the house at 8:00 am... She had an interview at ABC ltd at 9:00 am... She went for the interview... She sat in the waiting area... She took the permission from the receptionist if she cud charge her mobile... she permittedher... She put her mobile on charge... She gave her interview very well... She came out of the office and went to the super market... There she purchased one pillow, a mattress, blanket and bedsheet ... She also wanted to purchase a water heater then she remembered that she has no electricity ... then she suddenly saw a small cylinder with a gass burner at its top...she was so relieved thatnow she could bathe with a warm water ... She also purchased that,,,,she also purchased a tea pan and a big pan to heat water... some plates, glasses , spoones... she purchased a sandhwitch for her for the dinner tonight... it was 5 in the evening she reached home... she asked her taxi driver if he cud help to keep her stuff at the entrance gate... as she knew randhir wud not allow him in his house... driver agreed and helped her... She found that the door was locked,...she doesn't have the keys... So she sat on the stairs outside the house with all her things... She was waiting for randhir... One hour , 2 hours 3 hours... Time was passing but there was no sign of randhir... She ate her sandwitch meanwhile... it was now 10:00 pm... She was sitting there alone... Her eyes wre again wet... she covered herself with a shawl... She folded her legs towards her chest... wrapped her hands around her knees...as she was feeling cold... Wind was chilled and strong... She rested her head on the mattress lying just next to her and she fell asleep... It was 11:00 now... randhir arived in his car... He saw that someone is sitting in front of the door with some things... he cudnt recognise that person... he quickly came towards her and saw that it is sanyukta... He was shocked to find her out of the house at this tym... he choked... He gulped his saliva... he looked around ... he saw her things... A mattress, pillow, etc etc,,, but one thing made him really felt bad... the gas burner... he remembered the morning seen when she was asking for 10 mins electricity supply... he was now cursing himself...

He sat on his toes and was just looking at her,,,, she was sleeping like a baby... She was looking so innocent... He cud see her eye lashes were still wet... Her locks were swaying with the flow of the wind... he forwarded her hand to push them behind but stopped... he took his hand back... Then

Randhir: sanyuktaaa... sanyuktaa get up... utho...

Hearing his voice she got up with a jerk... she looked at him... She shifted backwardss... Randhir cud see the fear in her eyes for him... He obviously didn't like it... He is a human not a beast... Sanyu was breathing heavy due to fear...

Randhir: tum yaha kya kar rhi ho??

Sanyu: vo me ... vooo

Randhir: vo vo kya...

Sanyu: ( tears again started rolling from her eyes) vo mere pass chabi ni thi... iss lye yaha mee...(sobbing)

Randhir: ( he made a face,,, he didn't like her sobs) to isme rone wali kya bat h... and he moved fwd and opened the gate for her...

She took first the pillow and utensils and went upstairs... Randhir was standing there blank... he wanted to help her in picking those thing but his EGO...

She again came back took the other things and again went to her room and kept them... She again came back finally to pick up the mattress... randhir was just looking at her... he was expecting her that she wud ask him for the help... She picked it up and tried to climb the stairs... She many a tyms almost lost her balance but managed... She somehow managed to take that mattess to the room... this was a shock to randhir that not even once she asked for the help... She didn't even look at him... he closed the door and came inside his room... and slept... where sanyu also laid her matress on the floor... slept there with covering herself with a nyc warm blanket for the first tym after her marriage...

PRECAP: SANYU'S FIRST DAY IN OFFICE AND PARTH TRIES TO MOLEST SANYU...

SO GUYS THIS IS IT,,,, HOPE U ALL LIKE IT...PLZ PLZ PLZ LEAVE UR FEEDBACK BELOW...

Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres--

story is just gng awesomeee (y)
I want sanyu to fight back now

I am very very sorry for unres this late :-/
I am too busy, just came 2 see if u have updated this story. .
so this time small wala comment. ..nxt tym i'll make a long comment...pakka :-)

love
avni :-)

if can update today:-)
Edited by avni775 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so emotional yar etana babrey so emotional yar i m so cryg while readg yyar but u r uploading short updates yar :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sanyukta is independent and doesn't need anybody's help. Felt bad for her..
randhir nd his ego😡
and the precap..parth molesting her.😡😡😡
Update soon. Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this chapter. But precap scared me a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yaar I was just crying while reading this 😒 . Amazing update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: purnima209

so emotional yar etana babrey so emotional yar i m so cryg while readg yyar but u r uploading short updates yar :(

SEE I HAVE TO UPDATE BOTH MY STORIES DAILY... I CANNOT WRITE SO MUCH IN A DAY... AND IF U R FINDING THEM SHORT THEN I WILL ONE STORY IN ONE DAY... U GUYS DECIDE U WANT BOTH THE UPDATES OR JUST ONE UPDATE... SPECIALLY THIS FF EATS ALL MY MIND WHEN I AM WRITING... THAT IS WHY I POST IT AT NIGHT...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ress moi late🤣
Main ishh baar bohot zada late'm late

Update was too good samm y dont u update 1 ff per day
It will be easier for u as well as me too
Main first aungi fir🤣
Sanyu itna kyun darr rhi hai RD se..!!

She is a fighter right, then Y?
She is srsly suffering so much..! 😭

And precap..??!!!!! 🤢

Yeh baba chahe acche hon ya bure
Sanyu ka peecha nhi chodenge..!
Update soon.
Bandar
Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ur ff makes me so emotional every tym.. i cnt help but cry... gosh randhir n his ego.. n parth molestin sanyu.. oh god .. so waitin fr ur nxt part... cn u pls pm me wen u update

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