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Posted: 10 years ago
Eagerly waiting for the next update !! :)
Super-Awesome part ..
Loved it !
Sorry for the late comment ...
Lil busy with my exams ... :P
Continue soon ..
Tc !
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: palakajenian

oho finally yeh update mil hi gyi jo 1 month pehle milne wali thi haina *smirk*
but thank god mili to sahi
acha coming to the update hawww yeh kya kiya apne end mein *pout*

yeh raina she is a bitch how could she i m having a hard ns strong feeling to kill her
she is lucky ki she is imaginary character nd she is not in front of me varna to i swear aj iska last day hota duniya mein
wow loved how muskaan is teasing ridhz all the time nd always caught them
loved the part but hate the ending i hope ab ar ki beech koi misunderstanding na ho
loved ar morning romance which u show in the starting
as always the part is fun to read
i know comment is short byt next tume exams khatam ho jayenge to pakka will give long comments
for now bye tc
cu love u muahhh...


Heehee...
Yeyy yeeeyyy, mila toh sahiii...
Kiya karun, tujhe toh pata haina how much busy I m haina hainaa...
Shukur toh kar mila kekekke...
Maine kiya kya end mein :P

I know, how could she... Lekin story toh aage badani haina..
Toh kuch na kuch karna chahiyeh righttt :P
hahaha indeed she is really lucky... Maine toh already Sid koh maar diya...
Ab main kissi aur ka khoon nehi kar sakteee *dramatically with hand on forehead*
Ab Muski toh tease karenge, Armaan ne toh accept karliya woh dono ne raat bar soya nehi hahahaha...
Lets see of Raina will be successful or not in her plan...
Glad u enjoy AR moment in the beginning...

Its okey Palll
No problem... I m happy with this comment of yours...
Muwahhh
Take care <3
Love you too...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tv05

Amazing part...

Thnx fr pm...
Continue soon...


Thanks dear...
Glad u enjoy the part...
take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

haaye Rihooo...
finally itna wait karake u updated .. ..

wese I must say wait was worth. it...

loved the part totally... it was super awsume...
super hawt... super romantic... 😳
full of AR

wese I agree
aapko holi. part bohot pehle update kar. dena chahiye tha...

but bits okay... chalta hai...

hhmm..now part...

starting from AR romannnce... as usual was superb...
and then mmuskaan teasing was
waah...waah...
mazaa aa gaya...
hahahhahahaaha

🤣

it was super amazing...
then holi part...
I h8 that bitch of daughter RAina..
kamini kahin ki...
kutti...saali... 😡
chudhail...daiyan ...bhootni...
kahin ki...

aur bolun...
usse...
puchhna kyaa bol hi deti hun naa...

haan toh kahan thi main...
haan...
UKP...
MC...BC...
(p.s. full form ni likh sakti naa...yahaan bachhe bhi hain... isilie.. short form.. 😉 )

hhahhhahahahaaa...
😆

achha ...aur bolun kyaaa...
haan riddhima k baare me bolti hun...
kiss tarah voh raina ko dekh ri thi. naa...
I'm sure voh rains ko kachha chaba jayegi...
hahahhahahahaa...
riddhima kabhi apne armaan pe doubt ni karegi...
voh toh uss...
kamini...nirlaj...
besharam ladhki k haath pair todh ke ghar se nikal degi...
dekh Lena...
hhehehehehehee..

chalo.. abhi bas itna hi...
need to go...
bye..
tc...
muahh :* <3...

aur haan next upd8 jaldi dena...
can't wait...
to read more...
hahahhahahaha


Hiyyaaa Megs...
yesss, finally maine update kardiii...

haina haina, I knew wait was worth :)
See main kitni acchi hoon na :D

I know, ab main toh romantic writers ke titles se famous hoon toh mujhe apni title pe khada hona hi hai hahaha...
Ab kya kare, holi toh bohot pehle honi chahiyeh, saat mein yeh part bhi...
But time nehi mila, aur yeh holi part is mean to include to show this track of chudail na hahaha...

Hayye, koi toh samajhi mujhe ;)

Yes about the part...
Lolz, as i say main toh romantic writer hoon...
Aaaya na mazaaa... Mujhe bhi likhte waqt bohot maza aaya...

Lolz, control girlll...
Waise gussa toh Raina pe aana lazim hai...
hai hi woh bhootni, chudail and daiyan...
Waise yeh sab sunke na mujhe Bipasha ke yaad aayi hahahha...

Haan bol hi de meri jaan...
Haahahha, ab short form mein bolenge toh mere koh kaise pata chalega...
Accha yeh baat hai, chalo main WA mein ya FB PM mein poochungi...

Arey, tu toh aise pooch rahi ho jaise main nehi bolne koh kahenge toh tu bolenge nehi...
Raina koh chodke Ridz ke baat shuru ki aur Raina pe khatam hahaha...
Waise Ridz kya karenge, woh toh next part mein pata chalega...
Hhaahhaha Phirse tu shuru kardiii...
Wah wah, kya mast gaali di tumne...

Accha, bas itna...
jaana hoga???
Koi nehi, chali jaa tu...
take care <3
Muwahhh
love you too... :*

Jaldiii???
Abhi toh mujhe aur updates deni hai, toh time lagega...
cyaaa...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ksgandjsg21

Superb part... loved everything in this part... bas last me ye kya ho gya wo raina toh h hi gandi... ab riddhima armaan ko galat na samjh le...

ar romance n teasing part was awesome...
Ar n gang friendship is vry gud...
Plz continue soon. ... aapne itna late post kiya... I always wait for ur ff...
Thnx for pm...


Thanks dear...
Glad u enjoy and like the part...
Jo bhi huva, it was needed for the stories...
Ab dekhte hai Ridz kya karenge and kya sochte hai...
Yeah kya kare dear, being very busy...
Bohot muskil se time mil rahi hai, likhne mein...
Will try soon...
Take care and u r welcome...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

finally uch toh mila padhne ko aapki side se...
hufff
meri toh aankhein hi taras gai thi aapke update ko...
finally jake meri ankho ko thanda mili aapka update dekh ke...

pata hain in morning mein ne Fb ke aapke wale page par update dekha..
mera ko laga ki koi purana part page par dala hoga...
kyun ki mahino ke baad all of sudden update expect nahi kiya tha...

then mein ne socha ki dekh toh lun ki kya hain ...
dekha toh haye... new updatee...

sab se pehle update kke 3-4 para padhe then uski lenght check ki kitna likha ahin then read kiya pura.. ahahhah


arye mein ne part ke liya kuch nahi bola
hahahhah
got carried away...
anyway



part was super osome...
suru hi romance se hua hain h.ahahhabut u know i love bed seen ... hey galat way meini nahi.., i mean
bed scene where both of them finding comfort in eachother arms in sleep i mean its soo ocute ki she hide her face in his chest adn he turn and huged her back to let her fnd her comfort and then muski ki call ne sab bigad diya ahhahahah


ananya ki call ke liya dono padhte hain ki koun pehle baat karega.. hahahah ye toh bacho wali baat hui
par AR bacho se kam nahi hain ...

and then anji ke ghar par bhi romance and ridhima again found her comfort in his arms ahahahha she is damm cute mann

and then in last what was that...
ye achi baat nahi hian aisa end de diya aab pata nahi kab update milega...
mummyyy se complain karungi mein ...
update de doo mujhe jaldi se agla warna katti...


Yeyyy Finallyyy...
Tu toh aise bol rahi ho jaise padke tu bohot comment karte hai hehehehe...
Accha Ji, taras gayi ti dekhne ke liyeh...
Hahaha Nautanki baaz... Chalo aage badooo...

Really nowww... Tumne socha main itni der baad FB pe update daaliungi woh bhi old humppp...
Tujhe pata nehi ta kya main update dene wali ti...
maine toh WA mein bhi bola I updated, humppp...

Hahaha sacchi mein tu badi nautanki baaz hai...
Lekin accha haina tumne dekha... Nehi dekha toh bhi pata chalte, maine update diya, woh bhi new...
I would have msg in WA hehehe individually...

Lolz paagal... Sacchi mein tu kitna drama karte hai...
Good tumne pada toh sahi... Mujhe laga dekh ke padenge nehi *Smirk*

Koi baat nehi, hota hai kabhi kabhi...
jab tujh jaise pagal ho toh aise hona toh banta hai hahaha...
No problem at all :D

Finally tumne bola toh sahi kuch part ke baare mein...
Hawww, maine kab galat socha...
Tu and teri dirty mind, main kya karun...
Maine toh aisa kuch bhi nehi socha... I know u was talking about them sleeping hugging each other and finidng comfort in each other arms...
Woh toh pata nehi tere dhimag mein kaha se aayi yeh baat hahaha...

Wohi toh, woh bacchon se kam tohdi na hai...
Issiliyeh woh nehi ladenge toh koan ladenge right...

Jab AR saat ho aur Romance na ho meri writing mein, aisa ho sakte hai kya hahaha...
I know, Armaan cute nehi kiya.. tujhe badi Riddhima cute lag rahi hai hawww...

Last mein, what was what haan beyyy...
Accha, acchi baat nehi ti woh...???
Matlab, tab milenge na jab maine part likhungi hahahaha...
Awww, mamma se complain karenge tu... jaa bey, karle complain...
Acchawww, u and that too katti with me"??
pakka katti??

Muwaahhh
Love u ...
take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

oye hoye such passion
so rommantic yaar


Thanks dear...
glad u enjoyyy...
take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

continue soon and thanks for the pm


Will try to continue soon...
take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyaarora2912

Finally there is an update!!!!

It ws sooo damn awesum
After so long u hav updated n dat too a cliffhanger
ab toh pta nhi kitna intezar krna padega update ke liye
I m sure raina ka hi koi plan hoga ...:(
Plz zaldi update krna kyunki iss part ka suspense bahut h


Yeyyy
Finallyyy hahahaha...
Glad u enjoy the update dear...
Hahaha yeah after long and that too with a cliffhanger at the end...
Awww, I know ... Being busy thats why taking so much time to update...
Lets see it was Raina plan and she would be successful or not...
I will try to update, but kab cant sayyy...
Take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Start se start karte hai
I lv the bickering of muski n armaan
N when muski said jhut mat bolo to yaad aya

Suno miya suno miya
Tum ho diwane
Tum uspe marte ho
Dil kaise na mane
Sachi sachi kehdo na dolo
Sajanji jhut mat bolo
Sajan re jhut mat bolo


N then muski n riddhima ki bato k waqt muski jab raat ka nasha wali baat boli to usse se yaad ayi..

Raat ka nasha abhi
Ankh se gaya nhi


N there again endless romance se yaad aya

Subah hone naa de
Saath khone naa de
Ek doosre ko
Hum sone na de
Tu mera hero


Aur yaha in ladkiyoon ko dekho
Waha unke pyar ko bhang karke
Yaha yeh log has rahe hai unpe
Then wo log bhi yaha agaye finally
Main to sochi thi aur der kar denge aur sab milke aur jayada tease karenge in dono ko
Then anannya n riddhima's convo i ws thinking riddhima manage kaise karegi
Shadi me to boht tayariyaan hoti hai n sath me holi wo bhi grandwali..
But armaan ne bhi to ensure kardiya
Armaan ki is sath se yaad aya..

Jab koi baat bigar jaye
Jab koi mushkil badh jaye
Tum dena sath mera o humnawa..


Then finally holi a gayi..
Yohooo
Isi baat pe ek song

Dekho aai holi rang layi holi,
Chalee picthkaree uda hain gulal
Banke hain ghata mann jhum utha,
Rang chalke hain nile hare lal

Then armaan ki riddhima ko wish karne ki andaaz se yaad aya...

Chutaki Baar Sindoor Manga Kaar,
Iski Maang Sajaana
Ang Se Ang Lagana
Sajaan Hume Aise Rang Lagana

Then khatam...
Inna choti si part
Mujhe aur padni thi..
Update soon that too a big wali update
Lv u :*
Tc


Toh kya tum end se start karne se soch rahi ho BabyGirl...
Waise poochna toh nehi chahiyeh, tu kuch bhi soch sakte hai aur karbhi sakte hai haina hehehehe...
Wah wah, shuru se hi song.. Maza aaya...

Hahaha I knew Raat ka nasha woh baat sunke tum wohi gana gayenge...
Waise ek baat bolun, main bhi wohi gaya hahaha...
Aur gaana yaad aate hi mujhe teri yaad aagayiii...

Wohoo, I love this song...
Waise aaj kal main bhi bohot gana dekhne lagi hoon...
Aur pata hai, aaj main aur Ryshu di ne dance bhi ki hehehe...
Yeh song padke toh I m dancing again, woh bhi beite beite ;)

Kyun nehi hasenge, woh toh unko bohot acche se jaante haina hehehe...
Woh nehi aayenge toh kaha jaenge, aane mein der huva toh phirse teasing shuru na...
Issiliyeh toh un dono koh aana hi ta...
Hmm Ridz kaise manage karenge, woh toh hum baad mein dekhenge...
Jab Ridz kuch kaam ke liyeh tayyar hoti hai toh woh khud manage karhi lete hai...
Aur Armaan, woh toh hamesha uski saat dete haina...

Arey wah, kya gana chuna hai tumne...
I just love this song...

Naa koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Hehehe, yeyyy, finallyyy...
Wah wah, Yeh song toh tumne apne FF pe bhi toh use ki na hehehe...
Love it <3

Ayye hayye, Armaan aur uske andaaz...
Bana diya hai humhare Ridz koh deewani...
Wah wah... wah wah hahahhaa..

Awww, Khatam kaha huva...
Gang bhi toh aayi uske baad... Aur holi bhi toh dikhai...
Aur woh woh end mein jo dikhai uska kya hahahhaa...
Chalo koi nehi, next part tohda lambiii kardungi main...
In Sha allah will make it soon...
Love u too lotsss...
Take care <3
Muwaahhh, glad u love the whole part...
Love u for the comment and love u more <3

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