FIRST LOVE IS TRUE LOVE... KR story(part 3 on pg 19)

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FIRST LOVE IS TRUE LOVE ...

My second story on Kriyaansh I hope everyone likes it...

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Two people loved each other immensely but got apart due to situation and met once again but something happened which separated them again n now meeting again and end up doing something unexpected... will they ever realize the love between them again... Lets c...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept dear...
Continue further ASAP
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Edited by Jahnavi_KRAS - 11 years ago
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FIRST LOVE IS TRUE LOVE...

Chapter 1

Rey- no ways mom - dad ...

RM-yes rey you have to agree ????

Rey- but mom I don't love her anymore ...

RD- you don't have choice ...

Rey - who said I don't have choice ... I do have and a better one...

RD - who ????? that taani...

RM - no ways she is not gud for u beta...

Rey - mom just meet her n then u'll also agree

RD - I have already met her n she is not a good choice

RM - ya beta I have already met her... she is that kind of gal who doesn't care about anyone's feeling.

Rey - right mom I know who cares or not... (n thinks of someone)

RM - rey she is a selfish girl...

Rey - mom I know who is selfish n whose not.

N mom u r saying that taani is selfish but I think that the gal u have selected for me is of that type...

RM- no rey she is a vry nice gal I have met her many times... In business parties n at her home also...

Rey - really she must b faking in front of u to just impress u n after wards she'll use u n then would leave you...

RM - what are u saying this beta...

Rey - I m...

(interrupted by his dad)

RD - enough rey noe no more arguments u have to marry her...

Rey - but dad ...

(cutted by his dad)

RD - look rey this relation will help us to become more strong in our field...

Rey - meaning ??????

RD - look rey if this relationship happens then she'll consider our company for the tie up... and more over she is a nice girl nd a responsible one too she can mould herself very easily according to our family...

And I really like her n want to see her as my daughter in law ...

RM - ya bte atleast think about it...

Rey - fine dad give me some time to think about it...

RD - you have whole night to think abt it n I want an answer by tomorrow mrng ...

Rey- okay...

RM - n beta for ones forget your past n think about her...

Rey - yaaa...

And by this her parents leave and rey goes to make a call...

In the mrng...

Kria - gud mrng mom ...

KM- gud mrng beta ji... Or kaise ho aap or kal raat ko kitne bje aaye vapas...

Kr - vo mom kal raat ko late ho gaya tha... bahot kaam tha office mein...

KM- oh ho beta aap kyu krte ho itna kaam...

Kr- vo isleye ki aapko na krna padhe... aap araam se ghar mein araam karo...

KM - acha beta mujhe aapse kuch imp baat krni thi...

Kr - haan maa bolo kya baat hai...

KM - vo beta ab aap bade ho gaye ho, smajhdar ho gaye ho, itni badi co. ki MD ho tou...

Kr - tou...

KM- tou mai soch rai thi kyu na tumhari shaadi...

Kr - aap aisa chahate ho...

KM - haan...

Kr - fine then... I m ready...

KM- saach mein tum ready ho ...

Kr - haan maaa...

KM - okay tou beta mai kal unn logo ko bula leti hoon...

Kr - okay mom...

KM - n kal pls jail ghar aa jana...

Kr- okay mom...

Now I m going to office bye ...

PRECAP - KR meet...

Guys pls like n review...

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Character sketch

Reyaansh - is same as in the show but now loves taani now. And helps his dad in business.

Kria - she is changed nd now is the MD of the leading co. of the world n has quit dancing due to some reasons. Will she ever start dancing again...

Taani - negative character of my story n GF of rey...

other characters will b introduced as per the requirement.

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Index
chapter 1 - pg 1
Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jahnavi_KRAS

Nice concept dear...

Continue further ASAP
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Eeps...Maine kuch zyada hi jaldi reply kar diya Kya...??

thanx dear n ya thoda jaldi ho gaya but its okay...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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storyline is awesome meghna...m looking forward to it...
ps: can u change taani with sm1 else..???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start n nice concept...
Continue soon :)) really missin Kriyaansh these days :)!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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luvd d startng...
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love the cncpt,

do change taani with some one else please.

Thanx for PM.

Update son

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