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redpetals123

@redpetals123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

Hi deepthi, first of all I apologize for not commenting for so many days as Iam still in india and hardly have net access.

Thanks for each and every pm sent, i used to eagerly wait for your updates and used to read each chapter thru my mobile. I couldnt stay away from this ff for long but it was really difficult to comment on each and every update once again sorry for that.

But now when I realized that this was the last chapter Iam shocked and never thought of such an ending to this ff. Though it was a very painful and intense ff I always felt that there will be a happy ending but I truly agree with your point about what a girl goes thru after being raped, it so difficult for her to accept the truth and live with it.

Thank god khushi accepted the truth that the child is not at fault and he as a right to live, but what happened with arnav was really painful.

What did he do to get this as his fate, so much... so much he loved khushi and in the end she left him.

I understand tht she didnt want arnav to compromise with her and accept her child with love, she knew how painful it was for him and still he was doing it just becoz of his love for her.

Anyways I have never cried or felt like crying after reading an ff and this is the first time im in tears feeling the pain of arshi.

hats off to you for writing such a beautiful ff and depicting each and every emotion so wonderfully👏

In the end Iam thankful to you for coming up with a new season and continuation of this ff eagerly waiting for it.

lots of love and hugs to you dear.

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: deepthiya

No offense and these are my thoughts

Why Kushi is being saint and why commanding Arnav to move on?. Is she not victim here? Is she not planning to bring up the child out of responsibility? Don't she think Arnav shares the same responsibility?. Why is she making decisions for them?. Is she planning to divorce Arnav and think Arnav will move and live happily ever after and Kushi will be spending her life raising Adi and with the memories of Arnav?. What is her life motive?. Bringing up the child and giving up living her life?

It seems like innocent who got raped is undergoing so much trauma and the person raped her died in few minutes.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Deepthi, thanks for the reply. And no I am not taking it personally at all. Its just a discussion we are having and a healthy one. I love the way you come back and reply to our questions patiently. Big hug to you for that. 🤗

I will wait eagerly for TVK 2. Meanwhile I have a request, please update baby khoo story, really missing that story. Baby Khoo story just lifts everyone's moods and gives a happy feeling which really lasts long.

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DilLoveRomance

@DilLoveRomance

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

Speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am not really good with the words and this is reason why I couldnt comment for every single chapter I wanted to do but today I must say that so far no other story has touched my heart as much yours THE VALIANT KNIGHT did infact it touched my soul and im going to remember this forever and ever.

This chapter especially the bit was so hard for me as reader to read that I cant explain it took me more that 3 hours only on second part to read...no I was not reading slowly it just that I couldnt muster the courage to read any further may be because somewhere I realised that they are going to separate and da worse thing was thinking of arnav and reading as him

Please start the second phase soon as till then I for sure wont sleeping peacefully

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enlightenme

@enlightenme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#885

I just wonder how Khushi could even do this to Arnav. He didn't deserve it actually they both didn't deserve it. But, somewhere I feel it was a right decision on her part, it was the only way she could connect to the baby. Though the baby will always be a burden to her, but with Arnav it would be a reminder of all the compromises he made and inspite of that she couldn't give him his little family. According to me she didn't choose the little baby over Arnav she choosed her responsibility over her love so that in near future Arnav doesn't feel ashamed of the woman who he once fell in love with, ashamed of a mother who couldn't love his own son and trashed him somewhere just like his own mother. Very little people will have the courage to choose what Khushi had choosen for herself a baby that was dumped on her over a husband who loved her imensely. I know its stupid but it was the right thing to do.

Here I feel like sharing something with u girls. There is a friend of mine who has a mother but her mother is no where near to a mother with her. She will cook the food for her other two children, but wouldn't do the same for her, well actually now she can cook her own food. From her childhood she had been studying in boarding schools and she is the eldest in her family though her dad loves her imensely but her mother doesn't care. She tried asking her grandparents regarding her mom's indifference but seems like they don't know the answer or rather don't want to answer. There can be many reasons for why her mother treats her that way but there can be no reason according to me good enough to excuse such kind of treatment to child. I really feel bad for her at times.

Thank you so much for mentioning me in the note I'm really humbled. Hope to continue with phase II of valiant knight. Trust me I was feeling real bad for Arnav who just kept on giving and stopped demanding from the point he knew about Adi's misdeed. Now the last statement of Arnav just says to what extent Khushi has saturated him. Of all the options he gave she choose the one that wasn't even an option. He's feeling betrayed and deceived by the 2nd woman who once said she belonged to him. I really empathize with him. But hope that in near future he forgives Khushi for the choice she made.

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hema

@Itsflora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

Hell,the"kaun khushi" isn't leaving my head whole day...how did u write this???damn it

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saschades

@saschades

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Posted: 11 years ago

#887

OMG OMG WHATTHE O:O I didn't expect this ending O:O

I cannot believe it ...NOOO I cant believe she left him!

Poor Arnav. This is the worst emotional chapter...m all tears😭

I am totally HEARTBROKEN

but you as a writer wrote it beautifully

thank you so much.

I just wish there was a happier ending

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arshi_lover1

@arshi_lover1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#888

Di i didn't like how you ended the ff, but your justification was enough to change my opinion. I hope in the next phase of the Valiant Knight, aranv and khushi receive the much deserved happiness. i don't want to show pity towards arnav and consider him a week person. He did whatever he knew that would make khushi happy. And i am very proud of the decision khuhsi made by excepting the innocent baby. Desperately waiting for phase two of the Valiant Knight.

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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Posted: 11 years ago

#889

****Sorry for the late comment****

Deepu... First of all I should Thank You for thanking me ... I am humbled ... Love you Deepu always... and forever...

Yes I always support you and your words... Because I know how much you thought about TVK and the emotions of all the characters in TVK... Everytime when we chatted after each TVK update made me to think about the characters and their emotions in their POV. Everytime when you said "I am Glad you like it"... I felt how much our readers POV means to you.

I can't explain.. How I am feeling since last night... The ending of TVK brought back so many memories ... It brought so many thoughts in my mind.

"Thak Gaya Hoon Naani"... That dialogue from Arnav brought so many tears from my eyes.. and from my heart. May be it is because I was connected so much with Arnav.

First of all I couldn't believe TVK is done... It became part of my life.. since you started... it became close to my heart.. since I joined forums... It became by breathing since You became my friend.

When I started reading the update... I didn't expect it is going to end. Actually many guessed it will end with this update.. but.. I didn't believe it. I thought there is lot to happen between them.. I thought they need lot of time to get back to normal. But I totally forgot about Part 2...

After I am done reading the Update..I felt like it is the perfect time to end it. Because Khushi need time to be herself.. But can she become herself again, that is the question it's bothering her. Arnav tried his best to hide the truth, because he was scared she will leave him if she knows it.. He was scared she will hate herself if she knows she was assaulted brutally. But fate always comes with surprises.. and obviously those surprises will surprise me with a bad note.

When She asked him to tie mangalsutra and toe rings... I anticipated she will leave him... I thought a second ..why is she asking to those now... But the answer I got is ... She is not leaving him... She is leaving herself from him. It is the the decision she took by choosing Baby over his husband... It is the decision she took by choosing her husband over her. She couldn't digest the pain he took for her. She couldn't see the disappointment in his eyes. People may think she is not strong enough to fight back with her demons and stay with Arnav... But what I felt is.. To leave the most loving and caring and most importantly the valiant Knight she got... She needs lot of mental strength,. She needs to go through lot of pain to do that. But in the thought of giving peace to Arnav.. she betrayed Arnav's trust. She betrayed Arnav's Love. She betrayed herself.

The letter she wrote... Wow... it said the entire story of TVK... it said how a wife feels for her husband if she has to leave.

But Arnav's reaction scared me... it brought so many tears... that my pillow got all wet. After I talked with you...My hubby asked me why I am crying like that.. because I won't cry that easily for silly things.. I will get upset.. but I won't shed tears for petty things. ... I spoke with my hubby ... cuddling him and I asked him his POV about Khushi decision... He said... Khushi didn't even think about how he will take the decision of leaving him. She just thought he is suffering for her and thought of leaving him to give peace... But if she thought even for a second how her husband who loves her that much will live if she leave without saying a word. No husband who loves his wife more than his life can live happily if she leaves him.

Then I started my second round of tears ...

But If we think about Khushi POV... her decision is absolutely right. She cannot take anything that happening around her. She cannot accept baby if she lives with him. She cannot forget the baby is not his.. if she stays there.. He cannot forgive herself for the pain Arnav is suffereing for her...

So .. She took absoultely right decision at right time...

But I scared How the new Arnav whom you gave glimpse of him... will be... in the phase 2...

I fell in Love with TVK Arnav so badly... Will I be able love the new Arnav too... Waiting Deepu.. waiting...

And Deepu I can't stop myself saying again these things... You are an excellent writer. And the concept you took needs so much brave. And the way you steered the story is brilliant. The love you showered on me.. I will cherish all my life... The friendship I got from you... I will hold on to it all my life. And for the friends you gave me.. through TVK... I will be grateful to you... And for You.. You know how important for me... You know you are my inspiration.. You know you are my dhronacharya... you know you are my Angel.. although sometimes you will act like a cruel Angel, and you know how much I love you... Deepu I Love you so so so much ... And I will be with you and with your each word you pen down...

P.S: And don't even think about my Arnav... he is mine... Period... And I am not thinking about taking my kerchief off of him any time soon.. or never..

Waiting for Phase 2 of TVK...

Yours Loving

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Abhinaya Sri

@abhinavasen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: deepthiya

@BOLD - You answered your question Abhi...She doesnt want to force baby onto him...She saw the disappointment in his eyes when he held the baby...She doesnt want him to go through...Again we make lot of promises but we fail to keep up with them...She once said, she is all he got but today He is all she got as well but she sacrificed her own need because she assumed he will make better life without compromising himself so much for her

No hard feelings..I understand opinions differ..And I know this is such a controversial ending, everyone might not like it...

Love - Deeps

Thanks for taking time to reply.. i understand ur point but i am sill sticking to my opinion.. how can she decide for him... i understand Kushi will have a big battle to fight... but leaving Arnav this way is not the right way... Thanks for giving your perspective , as u said this is a controversial ending... opinions differ and we keep discussing.. i would like to take a pause and wait for the writer to unfold what she actually thought..

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