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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Divs: This is my fav song these dayss. The first day I heard, I told Lala exact same thing, I cant imagine anyone else more perfect than ASR for this song...Thank you for dedicating this song to my character. ..

Deeps: i love this song...i like all of them from the album but this is my favourite vnevr i find tym i make it a point to listen ... even i imagined arnav but not the first time though...this song is apt for arnav in this fic right from the begining but i found it more apt on 24th updt at this stage

She took his hand between her palms and held it fondly against her heart, How about now?

That undid the cuffs he locked around his heart, his soul, his mind. He tugged their clasped hands squeezing against his heart and he leaned forward to rest his forehead on her shoulder in defeat, in pain, in turmoil.

I have to confess something. I am letting my guards down to say this, I am very possessive about you Khushi. I swear when I say you are mine and only mine. Dont ever take you away from me, we will be ruined. I mean it.

n in yesterdays updt

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

really wonderful update!!!

really liked how khushi and arnav have gone past their uncomfortable and are now sharing a very deep bond of friendship. the trust and respect they both have for each other is what makes their relationship work even though they have the hardest of hardest obstacles!!! they might not have gone a notch above in their intimacy but they have been together strong for each other through this pregnancy...

khushi being detached to the baby is understandable. she must be going through a tough phase!!! she not experiencing the kicks was proof that she is not concerned about the baby more than arnav...for her arnav will be the first priority!! good that arnav is taking good care of khushi even when she feeling so low!!!

liked the buaji too is taking care of khushi!!

liked the way everyone was having gala time with pregnant khushi!! Liked the way arnav is teasing her and at the same time present near her to help her out!!

So arnav is closing on that video related person...fingers crossed! Liked arnav' new idea for betterment of khushi's organisation.

The scene where khushi readily gets ready to go with arnav to meet his mom shows how deeply they care for each other. Liked the way arnav confronted his mom and khushi thanking her was well justified. Mrs. Nair deserved that she could meet her son but not know his name. What an irony aboit mother not knowing her son's name.

Liked the way khushi entered arnav's bedroom just like a wife!!!!!

Waiting for more!!!

Edited by arnaushi - 11 years ago

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Its amazing update nd really beautiful..
How could any father can do this to his own child??
Poor arnav, khushi's mood swings drove him crazy..
Last part was awsome..
Thnks for pm..

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shimra

@shimrarshi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Hey deepthi!! I m crying. 😭😭Some part of this ff connected by me. The way mother and child separated. Didn't approve or agree the child on mothers womb. . Itx heartbreaking. 😭 I m sry to say I can't read some part of this story. It made me cry. Once again I want say u r great writer , n v happy that u writing such kind of ff.

Arnav and kushi bonding so cute , mature, understanding ,caring etc. I want see them like that. Kushi feel that she is not connected with baby. Ilove many things in this ff mostly their cute fight 😆, n the arnav say posy to kushi😉. N last part so awesome. Kushi in arnav room being shoulder for him. M the kiss part is!! 😳😃 N I miss ipkknd a lot😛. Continue soon okx bye tc 😛

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

wonderful update
shocked by the revelation which leads Arnav's parents to abandoned him

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

i don't know when u r planning to let Khushi know about the baby...but i wish with all my heart that she would not abandon the baby...and as a science student i also know that there's a thing called gene which transfer from parents to baby..and i hope the baby got nothing of thats sorts of evil characteristics from its father...because apart from gene there has another thing that called good parenting..and i know Khushi and Arnav will be the best parents..due to their own miserable childhood the baby is already related to them mentally..so i hope alls will be well in the future...

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Thanks for so touching and beautifully written update... Now if we can see any man going though so much of pain n still making others happy its Arnav:) Loved it...

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

1st of all congrats fr the new thread...n so sorry bcs cudnt comment last time

updt is fab...though she is not aware abt her pregnancy truth but still she is not feeling any attachment with her own baby while Arnav is all excited fr the new member...may b somewhere down the heart she felt that its not a part of Arnav or symbol of their love...but i loved the way Arnav is dealing with the situation

Arnavs meeting with his Mom was very sad moment...that leady dont deserve to call mother...bcs of her mistake she left a 1 day old baby in garbage...i knw ppl do that in our society...but her case was different...Arnav born out of their love...he was not a rape child or result of 1 night stand...then y she left her son? The beggers on the street even work hard day n night fr their kinds n their betterment n y cant they...that was just utter nonsense...hw cud some1 do that...but i m glad that khushi is their on the every step to support her husband

According to my knwldg Adi was planning to send that CD to khushi in her 6 mnths na...where it is? I m so eagerly waiting fr that day n the consequenses..

Khushis mood swings r so funny...

Cont soon soon soon